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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From Rapunzel on February 08, 2024

    Is Hermione ever going to do something useful?


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  • From Rapunzel on February 07, 2024

    Chapter 37- Can we just kill Harry now and be done with his horrible attitude


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  • From Ladyofthestorms1111 on September 25, 2021

    This story is my whole life right now. It is so well written, so beautiful, and I'm SO sad that Iv come to the end of it. Please someone tell me it will be back one day!!! I need more of this is my life right now. I need a sweet closing chapter at least. Come back!!! I'm still learning how to use the site here so I'm not sure how long it's been but something tells me it's been long. </3


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  • From AlwaysSeverus on September 21, 2020

    Read all 70 chapters of this brill fanfic and it was never completed *cries*


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  • From jshane78 on September 10, 2020

    I absolutely love this story!!! Four days is how long it took me to read through all 70 chapters, and when I finished chapter 70, I wanted to start over again. I do sometimes re-read books - the HP series being some that I've read multiple times - but I have never wanted to read a story again immediately after finishing it...until now. I have been a fan of HP for many years, but I have only recently found an interest in fan fiction. While the coupling of Hermione and Severus has quickly become one of my favorite scenarios, I have found that many of the stories are not so believable. Unintentional Inveiglement, however, seems authentic enough that I will no doubt re-read it along with every re-read of the original HP series. Your story is the way the story will go in my mind from now on. I'm looking forward to hearing Hermione speak again. It looks as if it's been several months since the last update, so I sincerely hope all is well with you. I wish you the best!


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  • From MrsL120 on August 18, 2020

    I've just finished chapter 70.  I've laughed, cried, had my heart broken and mended, and may never forgive JKR for not going in this direction with Snape and Hermione.  Please finish this story.  I'm not sure I've ever been this caught up in needing to know what happens next.  Thank you for sharing this with us.  


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  • From amycrown on February 28, 2020

    Oh my God I absolutely love this story. This is by far one absolute favorite SS/HG stories ever. I wish I could save it but I can't :( Looking forward's to more chapters. Keep up the awesome, amazing work.


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  • From Shellnet on February 06, 2020

    I read it and I am up-to-date since your last update was when I started reading it probably to three weeks at most and I finished 70 chapters please finish the story it's fantastic


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  • From Lily-Hopper on January 14, 2020

    Soooo, i didnt plan pn reviewing halfway trough, but so far i'm on chapter 50 and i don't even know where to start!

    Yours is one of the very few HG/SS storys i've read so far that have a spot on Severus character. Amazing! I love it that he's not sappy or cheesy AT ALL. Because that just wouldn't be an authentic Severus. I'm already dreading chapter 70, and not knowing when you'll finish this thing. But i swear if you finish it i will devour it! Also i'm going to read trough all your other stuff as i truly enjoy your writing!

    Lots of love from Switzerland ! 


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  • From Anna-Dara on January 12, 2020

    Still such a good story. I hope you get better. I can’t wait to read more. I feel like I’ve read this story 100 times! 


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2020

    New chappy, whee!  And glad to hear that Hermione will not have to take up a career as a mime. ^_^

    Glad to have you back.


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  • From SydneyAdams3 on September 30, 2019

    I'm in love with this story. I started reading 2 weeks ago and had to yell at myself to put down my phone to get some sleep for work. My room echoed when I screamed at realizing chapter 69 was the last chapter so far. I really hope you come back and continue writing, your so articulate! Thank you for the wicked awesome journey! 


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  • From Alwayswednesday on August 20, 2019

    Hands down this is the best snamione story I've ever had the pleasure of reading! 


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  • From einhornfee on April 14, 2019

    Yay yay yay yay - you're back. Oh I love this. I had changed computers and lost all my bookmarks and only came around ro restoring everything now. And then I saw that a new chapter was up. This made my day! I love that things are on the way up. H & S so deserve all the goodness to come after the hardship. I love Filch! Ahhh, thank you for a new chapter my dear :-)


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  • From DarkJoy on March 16, 2019

    I’ve been enjoying indulging my love for Snape vía fan fiction for the past fortnight and this is my all-time favourite! Great character study, exciting mesh with the canon universe but enough AU info to keep us there... but where is the end? Come home H! We miss you! 

    Thank you so so so much for writing this despite what sounds to be a terrible time really. Kudos! You literally made my life so much more fun for an entire week with this tale 💖


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