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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From ANON - Pothead on May 04, 2014
    I am RAVING over this!! I LOVE it sooo much. I haven't read fan fiction in two years, but if I had known I was missing out on this I would never have stopped! :D I'm currently on chapter 7. I read all chapters in one go, it was THAT good! ^^
    I absolutely love how sensual it is, Snape/Hermione isn't my favorite pairing, but you have me sold! ^_~

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  • From Astrid-Lemons on May 02, 2014
    Wonderful as always
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  • From ANON - Cinnn. on April 24, 2014
    I love this story! It's probably one of the best HG/SS stories i've read on this site. How you've kept so close to snapes original character is amazing. I keep wondering what is going to happen next in your story and how you incorperate it in the original one. I don't know how often you update, but i hope it's a lot! thnx for writing, i love it!
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  • From Astrid-Lemons on April 23, 2014
    This story is absolutely wonderful! I didn't think I would like it at first. While I enjoy a nice juicy lemon, it originally felt devoid of anything else. I am so very glad I kept reading! The way you have kept Snape's persona so close to JK's Snape is amazing! I really love how you have captured what love would be like for him. The emotions of the characters in general throw me for a loop! I forget exactly which chapter I was reading that made me actually cry, but my Husbeast teased me relentlessly for it. I have been checking everyday to see if there is a new update! You have me completely hooked =)
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  • From ANON - pinkslytherin on April 12, 2014
    YES!! i love your story!!!
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  • From Juliesnaps on April 06, 2014
    I'm very much still here and get excited when I see you updated.
    I enjoy how closely we stick to the original story.

    Just a heads up, it seems like the last chapter posted might have gotten cut short. :)
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  • From ANON - Mikomin on April 06, 2014
    You didn't forget about us and stop writting :) This made my night thanks so much and keep it up, I love this story
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  • From ANON - 2zen2 on April 04, 2014
    Not only still here, but eagerly awaiting more. This is one of the best stories I've read on any fan fiction site. Ever. Your portrayal of Snape and Granger are spot on. I love this story-line. I wondered how you'd handle it when they were separated (which, we knew was going to happen), and I think you're done it beautifully. I really hope you see this through because I cannot wait to see what happens.

    I always check for new stories before going to work. This is the only one I'll not worry about being late and read it the minute I see a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - loupsgarou_89 on February 11, 2014
    I just want to extend to you my glowing appreciation for this wonderful fanfic. I typically do not read fanfic at all however, recently I greatly enjoyed a fun piece based on Labyrinth on AFF, which opened me up to this wonderful world. There are some fanfic pieces I truly dislike, however I just spent an entire day reading yours from start to finish. I was so incredibly engrossed that I could not bear stopping. I cannot wait until I am able to see what the future holds for these two! I have never found the story of Romeo and Juliet truly romantic, as they did not truly seem to be in love. I never could get beyond the immaturity and their (for all intents and purposes) puppy love. While beautifully written, I felt the story was lacking. However, in reading your piece here, I couldn't help but think of the truly Shakespearean-esque yearning kind of love, and where Romeo and Juliet lacked, this story embodies that captivating forbidden love and truly speaks about the reality of the torment love can be. While I dearly hope this story doesn't end tragically, I will definitely be enjoying the journey to find out! Please continue this! And thank you for giving me some Harry Potter fanfic the way I've dreamed it should be!
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  • From Mimi on February 10, 2014
    This is so very enjoyable! I am so glad you are continuing this. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Mari on January 14, 2014
    Omg.. Love it so much! More please!
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  • From ANON - Evabyth on January 10, 2014
    I usually read dramione fanfics, but I also have a soft spot for Severus.
    I just happened to stumble upon this one and read the entire thing within a few days.
    Let me say, this is going on my "repeatedly refresh and check for updates" list. Love it love it love it, LOVE IT. So keep going! Go write! Now! I'm impatiently waiting! ;)
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  • From themusicjewel on January 10, 2014
    Truly beautiful. Please continue and finish the story. I just have a little hunch how the story would end. And I'm hoping to the last bits that you'll derived it's ending. But this is truly beautiful. A gifted writer you are. Post more! =)
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  • From Jcarpenter on January 10, 2014
    I have just gotten on the Harry Potter "fan" wagon, and in the last 2 months I have read all 7 books and watched the movies. I turned to fan fiction to feed the fire of my need for more Snape. I just had to know how it could have been different for him. When I found your story I read it everywhere I went. At the salon, after dinner with the in-laws, at long stop lights, etc, burning my eyes until I literally couldn't focus on the words. I am so enthralled with how you write. At first i thought that i would want to see this as a movie (albet a dirty movie) but then there is no way to capture the feelings you get by reading such wonderfully written words. Great job and I pray that Snape gets his reward for enduring a shite life. PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2013
    PEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!
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