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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From ANON - lemonade8 on September 19, 2014
    Crooks needed reassurance, that's sweet! I'm still worried about what Snape will do when Bella or the dark lord confronts him!!
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  • From ANON - Angieint on September 11, 2014
    I just wanted to say how much I love this story! The wait is worth it for each new chapter. I get so captured by your voice you use when you write that when I start reading, it's impossible to tear myself away. Whenever I read something you post, I feel so inspired to work on my own stories. I can't wait to read more, and am waiting anxiously to see what is to come! Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to reading more in the future. :)
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on September 05, 2014
    Words can't express just how much I love this story. To truly see how much Severus loves Hermione is amazing. I love the line where he calls her his woman. I'm hoping when Hermione wakes up he doesn't push her away, thinking it's for her own good or she'd be better off. Please, Please let him realize that together they are stronger!! Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Megan on September 04, 2014
    I have done NOTHING for the past two days except for read this story. I love your take, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Worst cliffy of the whole story so far! Please update again soon! Look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 28, 2014
    Really hoping you are going to keep this story up! I have been reading off and on for the last few months as new chapters come up and the cliff hanger is killing me! Really great writing, and an awesome twist on the characters that keeps them believably in the universe. Love it, please please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - r on August 07, 2014
    oh gosh, i've read this twice (up to the final update) and each time i cry when i get there because i can't gorge myself on your writing.

    i really do think this is one of the ultimate hermione/snape fanfics. i have a little issue with your taking of canon plot and placing it into your story verbatim but that's just my personal issue. please update soon, love!
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  • From ANON - H-Bob on July 29, 2014
    This is a fantastic story. Thank you for writing it! I was so stoked that I found it, it delivered exactly what I was looking for. Your writing really brings it all to life and I think that you have captured the characters perfectly. I hope you keep it up, I would love to see where you take them! You are absolutely fabulous!
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  • From ANON - Random Joy on July 27, 2014
    I love this story. You make wonderful use of the plot while giving so much more meaning and depth to characters I actually give a shit about. Hopefully you make it to a conclusion, I'm dying for what happens next!
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  • From ANON - leahthelioness on July 26, 2014
    Uh oh... Bella knows. Looking forward to see how that plays out.
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  • From ANON - Bumblebee on July 24, 2014
    I'm finally caught up. This story is intense.. updates soon please!!
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  • From vicky on July 19, 2014
    I am LOVING the story and how its going but i neeeeeddddd more please I keep looking and there is no updates xxx
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  • From ANON - Boh-Cat on July 11, 2014
    In the words of a very aroused Hermione Granger... DONT STOP, PLEASE!!! Update soon please, best fanfic ive read in a long time. Thank you for writing this!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on July 05, 2014
    Hello - I am finally caught up. I did not realize how far behind I had gotten in my reading. Your story is wonderful.
    Thank you for adding more chapters.
    Hermione's little scare.... I was 50/50 on her being positive but hoping not. Poor thing I guess doesn't realize in the time of stress and reduction in diet that that part of the body will shut down until life is in the balance again.
    Sorry for the rambling.
    Your story is great. Keep writing.

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  • From ANON - Naughty_megs on July 02, 2014
    Just spent the last week reading through this story... Bloody amazing!
    Love the writers' version of the story with the Hermione and Snape relationship. It's truly fun to read, I love the clever banter between Snape and Hermione as well as the raunchy sex scenes which are written in a clever appropriate language.
    I'll admit to having to define a few words, most likely as I am not used to so many British terms e.g bint, since I am Aussie. But it makes it more realistic which is great.
    Can't wait for the rest of this series!
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  • From Astrid-Lemons on June 25, 2014
    I am so insanely happy you have updated! I totally didn't see Hermione's 'situation' coming. Especially since Snape is so thorough with everything he does. I am sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see how Snape reacts to the news. How will Harry and Ron react? Is she going to tell them the truth? Please please please please please update soon!!!
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