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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From discover on April 04, 2016
    Hi,
    I just wanted to thank you for your great story. When I started reading it, not a moment I thought that I could get so attached to it. Your writing skills are just marvelous. I really like how you make the story flow in an organic way. No questions asked - the erotic parts are top quality, but I wanted to point out the way you write about emotional intimite parts. You do it so vivid and manage to capture that feeling, the heat in ones chest when you start falling in love and try to comprehend with your new feelings. I love the twist about Hermione getting ability for wandless magic, though I hope that she will be able to restrain her new found magic and controllably use it for something great.
    I flew through the story within a week and was sad that the new chapters are not yet done, so I just started to read it again from the begining because I was sure I had missed alot due to the fast reading (which actually was soooo true..), and now I'm again at the last available chapter so I'm anxiously waiting for updates. BUT...if you will not somehow find a way of keeping Severus alive, I'm taking back all the good things I said. :D

    Don't ever stop writing! ;)
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  • From seersama on March 24, 2016
    i hang on every chapter.reading till 4 am most nights. I hope you never stop writing. your amazing.
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  • From ANON - Gwenyth on March 17, 2016
    I only found this fic last week and I have already chewed through the entire thing. Please, please, please don't make me wait too long to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Pops on March 08, 2016
    I swear, every chapter, I've been bawling my eyes out because of you...how you make me feel such things!! Such a a beautifully written story, my absolute favorite snape/Hermione. I'm honestly terrified to continue reading because I don't know what I'll find next. But it's so amazingly written that I HAVE to know what comes next!
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  • From ANON - evenstar on February 24, 2016
    I simply can't wait for more! I literally spent the past 6 days reading this whole story while being sick too! Very well written and it has most certainly kept me on the edge of my seat with each passing chapter.
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  • From ANON - AccioBook on February 14, 2016
    Ummm... Wow. This is totally new world to me. The HPAFF world and Oh, My! I'll tell you how I found it- You know Snape has really nice cuffs? When Hermione is catching his robes on fire, you get a good shot of his pant leg and cuff, so I innocently googled Hermione and Snape- nOt the first image that pops up! Anyway- who knew all these little fantasies running around in my head are actually out there all fleshed out in nice neat stories!?

    I'm lOving this! You'll appreciate that I blew off work so I could read your story. I love all the extra details- the cats bit and the little story they get( I can imagine him wanding off orange cat hair before leaving his rooms), the relationship with Filch is endearing; the best part you've made the whole thing plausible. Husband is loving it too, though he has not read a word ;)
    So, it's with great Love and Support and Respect for The Muse that I ask Where Is The Rest!!!???? I'm dying over here!
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  • From Hellonurse on October 22, 2015
    Ok, I must admit I am totally selfish by not reviewing more. Mostly because I couldn't prevent myself from going to the next chapter because of how enthralled with your writing I've become. Your storyline took a life of its own to where I feel this relationship could be canon. I am thoroughly impressed with your ability to write these characters in such a way that I see and hear them as if I'm living in the book. I look forward to updates, quite sad when I thought the end was too near but now I'm sad that I have to wait....like I said, selfish me.
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  • From ANON - Aliannlia on October 16, 2015
    Note*chapter nine
    Why didn't you let yourfriend paddle you, it could have been fun *wink wink*
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  • From Hellonurse on October 15, 2015
    Absolutely love your story....I love how I can picture Snape, you write his character well....you also write smut extremely well & for that (among other things, like a good plot) thanks...ooh and glad he's a cat person, he's adorable with Crookshanks
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 15, 2015
    I love it! Dont stop writing !!!
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  • From SnapesOnlyOne on October 10, 2015
    Sorry it took so long to review, my memory sucks and when there's a long break I have to re read the whole story, and I want a snermione baby!!!! Great chapter! If you kill shape I'll quit I swear it, i can't handle that stress again!
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  • From ANON - Arendora on October 09, 2015
    The story about Mr. Henry made me 😢
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  • From FieryPhoenix on October 05, 2015
    Excellent build up to whatever darkness looms, and the imminent darkness is really felt in your writing! Thank you for continuing this story and all the best for bringing your guy home:)
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  • From ANON - Agness on June 20, 2015
    So I have read only a half of the whole story so far, but I HAD to tell you how much I've been enjoying it. It is incredibly well written! It feels like the characters' thoughts and decisions are exactly what initial JK's characters would experience in such circumstances. The story is as realistic as it can be, everything that happens seems to have legit reasons and character motivations. And the details, the subtlety, the perfect pace... Not to mention how well you incorporated your story into actual Rowling's book action! So great.
    It is genuinely the best HP fan fiction I have read. Although I've never really liked Snamione, your version of it makes me love this pairing and now I cannot read anything else. For me, Hermione+Snape is quite perverted, but it surprised me how your approach to this couple made their relationship genuine and beautiful. Your work both turns me on and satisfies me artistically. Keep up the admirable work!
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  • From ANON - Snapesonlyone on June 08, 2015
    61 done! Yay for more! So excited! Great chapter though her illness is bugging me more then it's bugging him....lol
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