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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From ANON - Fox on June 23, 2016
    Chapter 33.
    Very emotional chapter, especially the ending. Sad, scary and heartbreaking to think that people all over the world are going through emotions like that.
    Your writing is superb.
    Thank you
    Fox xx
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 22, 2016
    Chapter 32.
    Snape and the cat. Priceless! This was a very funny chapter and I loved a little tenderness at the end.
    Thanks
    Fox
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 22, 2016
    Chapter 31.
    Im having so much fun. Snape's repulsion for hearts is hilarious...You are so good ;-) of course I can easily imagine this happening.
    It's also nice to see Severus slowly realising how important Hermione is for him, a little shock to the system, I suppose.
    Sex is obviously brilliant so far , enough to say, that I made use of my new, rose-gold massager...which i bought for the purpose.
    I have a question though, Severus is a potions master and all this time he was coming back from "meetings" and he used no pain or pepper-up potions? Why? Surely he expected to suffer and I believe he would prepare himself before going to Grimmauld Place. It just seems a lot of unnecessary pain for someone, who can brew pretty much everything.
    Thank you so much
    Fox xx
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 17, 2016
    Chapter 20.
    I love your story, but it suspiciously goes the same direction as the original. It seems so canon and the only au bit is SS/HG romance.
    Please don't kill Snape off! I know I'm at the beginning of your story, but I'm nervous already. I can't take another death of my favourite potions master. He's far too sexy to die. Pleeeease!
    Have mercy, he deserves some happiness.
    Pleading Fox
    xx
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 17, 2016
    Chapter 19.
    Oh my fucking god! This was extremely hot.
    Question: Do you have a real-life example of a Snape-like lover, if yes can I borrow him? Borrow, rent, buy -whatever works for you.
    I'm too single for that...
    Thank you
    Fox xx
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  • From BratGirl1983 on June 16, 2016
    Love it, I look forward to the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 15, 2016
    Chapter 10.
    I have to say, your sex scenes are stellar. You are so descriptive, I'm really enjoying it.
    I'm definitely in need of your kind of Severus. Oh well, some fantasies can't be fulfilled :(
    Thank you for your writing
    Fox xx
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 13, 2016
    Chapter 6.
    I've been waiting for this...mmmm so sexy, so hot. I can't wait for more. I di love a bit of Snape (a lot actually).
    Thank you
    Fox
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  • From ANON - Joanna on June 05, 2016
    I am both overjoyed that Snape and Hermione have found love in each other and yet completely heartbroken at was has transpired, not to mention that I feel completely bereft with what I'm assuming is the ending, although I hope it's not because foolish as it may seem I most desperately want a happy ending for our lovers, this story has filled me with any number of conflicting emotions and for that alone I say bravo and very well done. I truly do hope there's more, but if not then I can learn to be satisfied with those. It truly is extremely well written and I am quite partial to it and honestly the addition of the love story between Severous and Hermione in the midst of the battle is preferable( at least to me ) to the original story with that Ron & Hermione nonsense which never made sense to me. Hoping for more, praying that all is well with you and know that it broke my heart when Alan Rickman died earlier this year as well
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  • From Serendipity on May 31, 2016
    I'm new to fanfiction and to be honest I happened upon this site completely by accident while looking for something else. That said, I've just spent the last 2 days reading this entire story from beginning to end. When I say reading it it's been more like living it, you're a brilliant writer. I've felt every painful, embarrassing, tormented, elated, loving event. I've laughed and cried, I've gasped and moaned. And you've written this all while having your own real life stuff going on, you're nothing short of a genius. I greatly admire you. However, if you let Snape die I will hunt you down and make you suffer ;) xx
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  • From ANON - Abril on May 30, 2016
    Lovely, lovely deep story, I just found out again that I love Severus, and this is great!! Plis don let him died again
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  • From ANON - SnapesOnlyOne on May 26, 2016
    64 done, I'm sorry to hear about all the medical issues you and your mother have been having, I hope all is well and they find a way to make you feel better. As for the death of Alan Rickman, I found out at 5am via a text from a friend and spent the next few hours sobbing hysterically. I had the pleasure of speaking to the lovely Jason Isaacs about him at a convention recently and he was still very torn up. Thank you for giving him hope in this story, I don't think I'm ready for another Snape death, I don't think I will ever be able to watch the last movie without sobbing again. Please update soon and feel better
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  • From seersama on May 19, 2016
    please don't stop here.........(hope your mother is doing well)
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  • From seersama on May 19, 2016
    so dang good I made my hubby cook lunch so I could keep reading ~grins happily~
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  • From ANON - DeeGidget on April 11, 2016
    if you stop writing i will murder you to death!!! BEST. STORY. EVER.
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