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By : SpeedyTomato
  • From BAFan on October 28, 2014
    Ch. 23

    "Though he didn't say anything, Harry nodded and sat up, at least in a way. It was more of a sitting on his hip slightly so he didn't have to put his full weight on his bum."

    Why can't they use a Lightening Charm to reduce at least some of the weight? I can't recall if that's a Canon charm but it's certainly prevalent in fanfics.

    So...Albus intends to go about business as was usual in the First War, with gathering his Order around him and not telling them the important fact that Harry is a Horcrux. Or is he? I don't remember if they got rid of it in this story, or not. Either way, I think Dumbledore will be unpleasantly surprised by how many of his old minions will want nothing to do with him. Well, I hope that's the case anyway. ^_^

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  • From ANON - autumngold on October 27, 2014
    Is it bad that I hope nobody will join with Dumbledore, Lily and James? It would be perfect if they found themselves out in the cold the same way they did to Harry. I'm surprised they just don't tell Harry what he needs to know then run away. That's what they are good at after all. Excellent new chapter! I really hope that someday soon Harry will feel good enough to make Dumbledore, Lily and James pay for what they did to him. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on October 02, 2014
    Wonderful update! Lily and James just don't understand, do they? Can't they realize after all that he has been through, the last people he wants support from are Lily, James and Albus. Personally, I hope that Voldemort takes care of them. Maybe that way they can pay for their sins against Harry. I can't believe that anyone is still loyal to Dumbledore? How could they be loyal to that coward? Lily, James and Dumbledore can make all the excuses they like for why they left, but in actual fact they just cared more for themselves than Harry. Now, they should have to pay for it! Thank you for your incredible update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - history on September 05, 2014
    I really love Narcisa here. She's great! On James, his wife and Albus, i think that now they will better understand what happened to Harry. Th ending of the chapter is great too because Harry asked for Remus.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 04, 2014
    What a heartbreaking memory for Harry. After what he went through, I don't blame him for hating women and redheads. To see that horrid dog with Lily there must have made the flashback worse. I hope that watching what Harry went through during his flashback made it more real to Lily, James and Albus. I doubt, however, that they will accept any of the blame. Is it too much to hope for, after going through that, that Harry will sue them? I really hope he does something to make them suffer. Outstanding update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - AJ on August 14, 2014
    OMG!!! poor Harry! MORE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - gaia on August 12, 2014
    Great chapter! Looking forward to your next update!x
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  • From BAFan on August 11, 2014
    Ch. 20

    Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!

    One correction:

    "'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
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  • From BAFan on August 11, 2014
    Ch. 20

    Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!

    One correction:

    "'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
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  • From wolfcathope on August 10, 2014
    First I have to say I love the story. Poor Harry and Maggie this is going to flip her out. James and Lily are going to want to help or freeze up and probable make the situation worse. I do have a question though why isn't the Ministry going after the kids, I mean taking them away or at least insisting on counseling for them and and having them observed. I mean the Potters and Dumbledore have already proven to be unfit and put a child at risk. I mean just staying and and making sure they took him in, putting a ward around him, a delayed letter and so much more they could of done. Then there is the fact they are still keeping information how ever useful it may be, from all that involve and putting people at risk. The kids even I mean do they have any idea of what there parents did.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on August 10, 2014
    Oh, poor Harry. After not getting any real justice at the trial, he has to see that stupid dog. After hearing about everything that Harry had gone through I think it is pretty horrid that they brought it with them to the ministry. It's almost like they don't think they have hurt Harry enough. Incredible new chapter! After this, I hope that Harry sues Lily, James and Albus for everything they own! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on August 10, 2014
    Though this may sound heartless, I'm actually glad Harry is having a flashback to one of his worst moments, just so he can get it out of his system and start healing. Sort of like lancing a festering wound. Yes, it's going to hurt but it will be clean and can start to heal.

    As a purely strategic view, the flashback couldn't have come at a better time in order for the still disbelieving potters and DD to actually see the results of their actions. Their punishment was too light, at minimum they should be destitute and hopefully this will cause them a fraction of the pain Harry and Sirius have had to endure. I wonder why the entire estate wasn't turned over to Harry and Sirius?

    Whew! Pardon my vindictiveness but you have really captured my emotions in this story. Can't wait for more!
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  • From Silverstargirl on August 10, 2014
    While I am not happy that Harry is having a flashback, I am glad that the people who need to see first-hand just how bad off he is get to see it happen. It is, after all, their faults that he and Sirius suffered so much for so long.....I do hope that Maggie won't be too traumatized by it, though. She is innocent and doesn't deserve to share in her parents guilt.
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  • From ANON - blackcallalily on August 10, 2014
    AWESOME!!!
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  • From ANON - history on August 10, 2014
    I really like Rufus here. He's great with Harry!
    I don't think that the Potter and Albus understand exactly what happened to Harry and how it affects him. I continue to love this story!
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