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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2015
    Sooooo good!!!! I keep coming back and reading this story! Love it and can't wait for next chapter :) x
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  • From ANON - Rii on October 12, 2015
    Just spent most of the last three days reading this. Fantastic work & cant wait for the next chapter!! (though i am slightly hating the cliffy... 😢 poor niko)
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on October 06, 2015
    Poor Niko, lets hope the paperwork goes through very quickly and he can return to the pack very soon. Dumbledore needs to pay. I haven't forgotten that he is still controlling Harry by holding Severus hostage.
    It will be interesting to see the final two children that Fen bit to support Harry - how will they settle into the pack?
    Remus needs to get off the potion and develop a relationship with Tess and Jaylon further.
    Back at Hogwarts, Harry needs to bring Seamus into the group. Robin is just a pain.
    Bring on the next chapter please.
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  • From ANON - littlepanther on October 05, 2015
    My list is getting longer and by list I mean the list of people I want dead...In this story anyway :) Poor Nico, I'll give him my favorite pillow for him not to be lonely. And I really hope Romy will make up her mind (did I said it right?) I'll also give harry all hugs to comfort him but Fen will not really allow me right? Thanks for the update :)
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  • From ANON - phoenix9fire on September 06, 2015
    Love this story! You have to keep writing!!! I love the whole pack dynamic and the story is very well written :) can't wait for another chapter from you :P
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  • From ANON - littlepanther on August 19, 2015
    First of all, Happy 2nd anniversary :) can't believe its already been two years :) and thanks for putting Robin in place. poor girl. Nooo!!! why are the aurors there? is this something Dumbles had planned?? I hope the pack will be safe and no one will be harmed in anyway. :) and I also hope that Seamus will be joining the pack in the next fullmoon.

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  • From ANON - Rowan on August 04, 2015
    I still adore this story, I saw the two new chapters and had to re-read the whole story again because of how amazing it is :-)
    so excited about another chapter, especially as it comes out just after my birthday :-D
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  • From ANON - RawrStar on August 02, 2015
    I just recently found this story and binge read the whole thing. I love it! I fell asleep reading the chapter before this one and had a reoccuring dream through out the night (waking up and falling back asleep repeatedly in an attempt to complete the dream) that only changed slightly each time. It began with Robin flirting with Fenrir and Harry making her submit to him. Then it morphed into the same scenario with Harry punishing her by making her the Omega. Then it switched to this dream where Robin thinks that Niko is in the way of her splitting up Harry and Fenrir, then Niko pissing her off and she attacks him. Harry's scary submissive protector mode comes out and he punished her by chopping off all that beautiful hair and making her submit. Jenson's like WOAH and tries to intervene but Harry's still raging and his wolf is super pissed that Jenson's trying to stop him and he hulk smashes Jenson and makes him submit too. Then Fenrir's super turned on and insta-porno starts rolling in my poor little sleep deprived head. I felt the need to share this information with you so that you can see exactly HOW deeply this story has penatrated my brain. Thanks for the awesome story, and inadvertantly the EPIC dreams.

    Can't wait for the next update! (No... seriously, I can't. Please.. now. please???)

    PS. Robin was played by Jennifer Lawrence (blonde version) in my brain, and Niko was a young Harry Styles. I find this both hilarious and humiliating.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on August 02, 2015
    Yeah - can't wait for the next chapter. Also how you incorporate Seamus into the pack and what next trick Robin pulls (I'm sure she hasn't finished yet).
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  • From whaywood13 on August 01, 2015
    so when will Robin adjust to the pack?
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on July 16, 2015
    I really, really really despise Robin. What a mega bi-atch. She desperately needs to get a clue and fast.
    Go Harry and Fen with adopting Niko.
    Loving the story - please write the next chapter super fast.
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  • From ANON - Phoebe on June 10, 2015
    Oh my!!! I absolutely love this story! I've just spent two days reading all 83 chapters and I loved every single one of them! Please update soon! :D Oh and please tell me Harry is going to knock Robin down a peg or two and make sure she knows who Fenrir belongs to! :) Absolutely fantastic! :)
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on June 06, 2015
    Great story. Glad Seamus is starting to fit in.
    Can't wait to see how Harry handles the bitch Robin
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  • From ANON - katlin malfoy on June 06, 2015
    I think you are a lovely writer I love this story been reading since the begining I voted for your syory when I saw it but I didn't vote for you as author :( and it sucks cause I really wanted to but I didn't see all the names I hope you win
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  • From littlepanther on June 06, 2015
    I love this chapter!!! I really didn't expect Micha to act that way...and Happy birthday to Remus! Next chapter will be the fullmoon, right?? And then we'll have an adorable Niko again
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