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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From littlepanther on October 11, 2014
    I'm out of my evil mode for this one... Hope more kisses to come for Romy and Clay :) Can't wait for the full moon to come I hope Remus will be there too. Thanks for the update. I wonder what prank will Harry do to that toad...
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on October 09, 2014
    Yippieh, beautiful update!
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 02, 2014
    Awesome!!! At least now Damon and Micha can help Harry with Dumbledore. I do think that Harry is more mad at himself and Dumbledore then the rest of the pack. Jaylon will be a good addition to the pack. The end scene was so cute!!! Showing how a dominate doesn't have to be mean. They all are just big cuddly teddies!!! That's makes them so likable. Well done!!!
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  • From littlepanther on October 02, 2014
    am i the only one who wants to...kill dumbledore in the most gruesome way? Lol...my evil mode is switched on again for my evil thoughts...can't wait till the next fullmoon...i hope jaylon will like harry.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 24, 2014
    I'm worried about Jaylon - what is his deal & is he going to get between Fenrir & Harry? I'm worried about them breaking into the Ministry? I'm worried about the condition of his father Severus.

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2014
    lovely update! And poor Jaylon... Stupid Fenrir for nor caring more for those he bit!
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on September 11, 2014
    Yay! kind of did not have the time to check in for updates and so I had to catch up on lots of lovely updates. And yippieh, they were all awesome! Thanks for continuing on writing the story!
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  • From littlepanther on August 20, 2014
    too busy with school and took me two days to read...thanks for this chapter, it really made my two days. And reading that stuff of micha panicking just after them making love wants me to kill harlam all over again. And that is sweet of fenrir too, i still had this image in my mind that fenrir will take harry out. I do hope that romy will finally admit her feelings for clay. And if ever you're planning on killing blaise, i want in too. Still hoping that lukas will finally have the courage to tell the whole pack and that nell will accept him but i have this crazy idea of nell also being a werewolf... Lol.
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  • From littlepanther on August 13, 2014
    what a way to start my day :) the smut scene is soooo hot. I do hope that Fen will take Harry on a date. I can't wait for the next chapter, now that they know that Callie is pregnant.
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  • From ANON - Dragonstar01 on August 13, 2014
    Yay! Awesome chapter. I can't wait until the anniversary for the next!
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  • From Charisma on August 11, 2014
    I've been reading this for over 24 hours and finally caught up so to speak. I love the story!!
    It seems none of them can ever get a break. I hope in the long run things have a happy ending.
    I would like to know clan's story. It seems you are hinting at him being related to Draco, maybe his 1/2 brother? Or am I reading too much into it?
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  • From ANON - Morgan on August 07, 2014
    First of all, Love your story and eagerly await new chapters! With that said, I hope Lukas, Damon, Jensen and Clay are all also getting punished. All of them disobeyed or questioned orders, yet Harry is the only who got punished. I can understand why he is confused. Fenrir tells him he is the highest in the pack, then the pack omega has to be dragged over to the clearing because he isn't obeying Fenrir. Jensen and Damon both argue and question Fenrir. As if that wasn't enough, without knowing what happened, Lukas calls Harry a whore as soon as they get back! Harry is probably feeling pretty low on the pack totem pole right now.

    On another note altogether, I don't think the vow Harry took with Dumbledore will hold because Dumbledore has already broken it. He promised not to harm any of Harry's pack. The Carrows are under Dumbledore's authority, therefore crucioing Clayton violates the vow. Love your story! Please keep writing!
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  • From littlepanther on August 01, 2014
    I'm having dark thoughts here. hoping that the chester family will be torn apart by them and let's not forget those three.
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  • From ANON - Silver_Shades on August 01, 2014
    Well I have to say...you guys are the masters of the cliff hangers...and i am hooked. I LOVE this story! The characters and the writing are well developed and excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter!...Well actually yes I can wait, you've given me no choice ;-)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 01, 2014
    Poor Harry and Company!!! I can't believe these miserable excuses showed up again. Only 3 more chapters and a lot of tying up of plot points and showing all the happily ever afters necessary. I can't tell you how much I can't stand that Dumbledor of yours (actually I don't believe I ever like him in any of the stories!).
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