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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From littlepanther on June 21, 2014
    a grumpy Fenrir. Fun, fun, fun. Ohhh...Micha and Damon is just sooo cute :) the revelation of Damon's first time really shocked me o.o good thing I wasn't eating or drinking that time or else my cause of death will be all over the paper xD thanks for the update i hope you guys are doing well in your new home! I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on June 21, 2014
    Loving the story.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 21, 2014
    That was very nice about Damon & Micha but I'm still worried about Severus and Harry. They are both in dangerous positions!
    Love how Damon is building a solid relationship with Micha...hope a baby soon. What is Lukas into? If I knew I've forgotten.
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  • From littlepanther on May 31, 2014
    I hope that Clay and Harry will cause havoc again driving the residents of Hogwarts crazy. I also hope that Remus will join the pack though when he does he's out of Dumbledore's thumb. I pray that Fenrir will not be that hard on Clay. Also, I MISS SEVERUS!! I also hope that Lukas will finally open up to the pack about Nell to avoid doubts on him I rather like Lukas and his tea obsession. I wonder what will Nell's reaction be when she learns the truth. Btw, Voldie's been quiet haven't heard from him (not that I miss him) =) and thanks for thw update! wishing Micha happy birthday too. I'll send a box of chocolate for Micha (wonder what's Damon's gift for him is)


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  • From ANON - Sara on May 26, 2014
    Cool chapter, I really hope the conversation goes alright as Lupin's my fav and he's already suspicious of Dumbledore and Sirius.
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  • From littlepanther on May 25, 2014
    thanks for the update! that end will really eat me until the next update :) as for my thoughts, I'm torn as to whether Harry will interrupt before either of the older wolves can speak or maybe Fenrir will go Alpha on him.
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  • From Jan on May 21, 2014
    I get what your saying, but I guess that what truly don't understand is that for a while now I've been thinking that both Harry and Remy.... and some of the pack, don't truly care for Clayton, I mean they proclaim that they love him, and that he's family, but None of them has ever truly been there for him, except for his dad, all they ever truly do is judge him, or try to change who he is.
    From the moment that the pups started school it feel like both Harry and Remy have been treating Clay like he's no more then their bodyguard, they truly haven't been there for him as friends, let alone family, thought that's always the first thing that comes out of their mouth when someone ask about their relationship. Whenever he's down and upset they don't try to be there for him, they always let him be, and when they finally do go to talk to him they start by scolding him, then they're mad at him, and blame everything on him, they don't see that he wouldn't feel like that in the first place if they hadn't ignore him so much.
    Please update chapter 48 soon.
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  • From littlepanther on May 20, 2014
    thanks for the update! Btw, with clay's first detention with umbridge the wounds just healed right but this recent one why it didn't? Thanks!
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  • From Jan on May 19, 2014
    I know that your more then Likely planning on setting Romy and Clayton together, but I truly hope not, I feel like Clayton needs to be with someone better, not someone so pushy and demanding, and unwilling to accept him for who he is, someone who doesn't appreciates all of his efforts and always thinks she right all of the time(like when she says that he doesn't really love her, then he doesn't really love her period!), he deserves to be with someone that is open both mind and heart to him. (I was with someone that reminds me strongly of Romy's character, and I'm sure your just making her like that because they are still young and still learning about themselves and life, but in reality all that will change in a character like that is they learn a bit more of themselves, and learn to manipulate people a little better, not truly thinking or caring or noticing the other person feelings.) And all this going behind Clayton back isn't helping him, if anything it's making him feel left out, unwanted, and maybe a little unloved, most of all by his father, and best friend(Harry because every time something happens and Clay goes, Harry wants to go after him, but Romy is always stoping him, and it always results with Clayton feeling unneeded) they need to be upfront with him like his dad needs to tell him about Micha, for both Clayton's as well as Micha's sake.
    Please update chapter 47 soon.

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  • From ANON - Kat on May 15, 2014
    Awesome! Dumbledore and Malfoy Sr need to both get their comeuppance. They are both bullies.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2014
    I gotta say, I'm REALLY enjoying this story you two have concocted. Now I will admit I have been a Dumbledore fan, but I'm kinda hoping that he gets his in the end and that Harry and Fenrir live happily ever after...mostly. Please keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 07, 2014
    I'm sooo glad that Harry & Fen are finally getting back together! I just wish that Harry would tell Fen why he is so determined to go back. Fen might even be able to help or after a little worrying about Harry wanting his Dad back so bad he would at least understand Harry's actions better which would lower the stress on both of them. I have a hunch that the strays are going to cause trouble while Harry & gang are back in Hogwarts. I hope not or if so that Fen & the rest beat them all back fast.
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  • From littlepanther on May 07, 2014
    this is really good and i love it :) it kept me in my place from where i'm reading i just don't want to let go of my phone to keep reading but duty calls *sighs* Update soon please :)
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  • From ANON - Clair on May 04, 2014
    I feel bad for Clayton with the whole Romy situation. Romy needs to give him a chance or put her foot down for once. Clayton is going to heartbroken if he finds out some other way. Damon needs to tell Clayton about Micha and him. Let Clayton possibly throw a fit and then move on. It seems Clayton would want him to be happy. Damon hiding the relationship could not be good for Micha after everything he has been through. Nice to see H giving F credit about knowing this all goes against F instincts. Always love when the submissive talk. Love the scene with Damon and Micha in the forest. Showed progrees with Micha, He is healing one step at a time. I think it was good he saw Damon for himself instead of H telling him what Damon was doing in the woods. Love seeing progress with H and F! Even baby steps is progress. Not sure why H thinks they have to jump directly in the sack to move on. Baby steps. I just love these so much and with so little fics with them together I want to read them happy together. Really love that F would not give into H at the end of the story. That would just make things worse between them. H really needs to tell F why he wants to go back to Hogwarts so bad. I think F would surprise him. Or at least hint at F that there is an important reason for him to go back. I think that would help a lot. Right now F probably thinks he is just being stubborn or H is just doing it to defy him. Thank you for the progress between them. I just love them together so much
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  • From kirah on May 03, 2014
    So far I love this story wish I hadn't come to the end so soon
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