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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From LeVeen on February 08, 2014
    Yay! i finally had the time to read it all. I was forced to stop at chapter 17. Today i spent the hole day reading! It is still great!! And Micha en Damon are great together :)
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  • From Jan on January 28, 2014
    Yay! They finally shared their first proper kiss! Go Micha it's your birthday! Lol, please update chapter 28 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 25, 2014
    Thanks for taking my review into consideration :) I am so used to being either ignored or called a flamer I hardly comment any more, which is a pity because I really only offer criticism if I think the overall story is pretty good but just needs a bit of tweeking so to say, Keep up the good work and looking forward to reading more :)
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  • From Jan on January 25, 2014
    That was such a sweet moment there at the end of this chapter, you can almost feel their love for each other, please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 14, 2014
    Good work so far, I do like that you are slowly building teh characters and that Harry is not pregnant at 15 or even eager to get knocked up ASAP. Thank the heavens. I do still wonder what they DO all day and how after being intellectually stimulated by his father from an early age, Harry is now completly fine with playing cards, sleeping, eating, cuddling and just mucking around all day. I took a year off to work retail between my degrees and I thought I would go stark raving mad without some intellectual stimulus. But maybe thats just me :/ I'm also gonna hafta call BS on the sex scene. Sorry. It was very enjoyable but there is just no way that a bit of spit and a few minutes of fingering( and that only for the 2nd time)would have been enough to prepare a 15 year old to take on a "eep worthy" penis. No way. A sphincter does not work that way. For one thing, spit gets ABSORBED. I know Harry doesn't feel pain but he must have been bleeding at the very least...I kept waiting for the " You're a submissive so your body makes natural lube" bit but it never came...
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  • From Jan on January 07, 2014
    Oh what has Harry gotten himself into again? Please update chapter 26 soon.
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  • From ANON - sam on January 05, 2014
    Please update this!! I LOVE this story, probably more like borderline obsessed with it!! It is going on two weeks without an update and I'm going crazy!! PLEASE!!!! Thank you. :)
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  • From ANON - Olive on December 25, 2013
    Merry Christmas! Thank you for a wonderful Christmas chapter.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 20, 2013
    A lot packed into this chapter. I'm going to hate when all this goes down aren't I? Severus tortured but alive, Fenrir angry & scared because Harry is out of his sight, Remus & Sirius broken up and SWirius the one who is torturing Harry's beloved Severus. And that's not getting into Draco trying to save himself & his mom & brother when he's only a boy himself.
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  • From Dharma on December 14, 2013
    I like it :) was worried Damon was going to come back and get Clay and leave
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 20, 2013
    Poor Tessie. She's had such a sad life so far. I'm so afraid that Harry & all will be hurt, captured, maybe killed (not Harry but the rest). At least maybe he will find out that Severus is still alive at last. I'm going to hate Harry being away from Fenrir! I may just scan those chapters.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 15, 2013
    I can't wait for Fenrir to catch on to Harlon and get rid of him!! While I'm wishing..I wish that Harry would find out that Severus is alive and rescue him. NOT looking forward to Harry going to Hogwarts without Fenrir.
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  • From ANON - cody on November 11, 2013
    quick question, why dose harry not use his animagus form? and also , why not have harry look into Harlens' head to see what he is up to?
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  • From ANON - EmmaJ on November 06, 2013
    Hi, loving the story! I'm glad Harry's finally realised where's best for him :) I was wondering though - why, if Harry has all these gifts (legilimency, being an animagus, parseltongue), does he never ever ever make use of them?! He could have transformed to get away from the stray pack or used legillimency on Harlan to deduce his intentions when he arrived. Instead, everyone else runs around picking up the slack. So frustrating! Lol, I think that would be fine if he was described as being a little shallow or slow but you painted him earlier as this bright, young, prodigy. It just doesn't match :( Still, I love the development of your other characters and I'm more than a little heartbroken for Damon!
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  • From LeVeen on October 30, 2013
    another great chapter! poor fen.. i'm curious who will be the alpha in the stray pack
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