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Reviews for Fragmented Soul

By : StrawberryGirl87 & Bickymonster
  • From Jan on May 02, 2014
    Absolutely loved this chapter, love it when Fenrir's all aggressive ##yummy!##
    Please update chapter 44 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - SincerelyYourSecret on May 01, 2014
    Okay so I guess I will try to work with this site but I will try for you because I really do love your story.
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  • From Belletristik_Aura on May 01, 2014
    Great chapter, and it's a shame that people on FanFiction.Net have been complaining because this is a wonderful story. I see there being hope for the bond to rebuild itself, but is intercourse the only way to heal it?
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  • From Jan on April 29, 2014
    Please update chapter 43 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - clair on April 28, 2014
    Well from the last chapter I thought we might be getting somewhere with these two but nope! Harry as learned nothing from what has happened. He says he wants to fix things with F but he does not care anything about F or he would care what he thinks and talk to him. Harry needs to wake up realize what he really wants because it does not sound like he wants to be in a relationship. He wants what he wants and he thinks he should get when he does and everyone else should just fall in line. And F is making me want to pull my hair out! Why he cannot talk to H is beyond me. Sometimes a good old screaming match is what needs to happen. Like with T at the end of the chapter. They may both be stubborn but they should use that to save their failing relationship. I do not like the idea of H corrupting M! He is screwing with M and D relationship and that is not cool! Happy to see M standing up to him. Everyone lets H push them around. They are in the middle of a war no time for games or codling someone. T sky rocketed to the top of my like meter in this chapter. Looking forward to next chapter
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  • From ANON - DragonStar01 on April 25, 2014
    I'm addicted to this story! I love it and can't wait until the next update to get my Harry/Fen fix...
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  • From Jan on April 25, 2014
    Oh please, PLEASE, tell me that their bond isn't going to break :( I hope they can fix things before it fully does, which I understand that it's going to take a lot from Harry to be able to let Fenrir touch him again without remembering what's happen to him :(
    Please update chapter 42 soon
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  • From LeVeen on April 25, 2014
    You two were right. I didn't like you any better after chapter 40, i'm glad i didn't read it untill ch 41 was posted :)

    Poor Harry...and with the bond breaking....

    Be nice for me in the next chapter ;)
    Lots of love
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  • From Jan on April 21, 2014
    Oh, please tell me that Fenrir is going to kill Blaise? I want him to, but thanks to Dumblefuck I don't want him to.... does that make sense? Please update chapter 41 soon ^_~
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  • From ANON - clair on April 20, 2014
    love this story so far. I sure hope harry realize he has some apologizing to do also. He wants respect but show his alpha none either. He goes against everything f says and t make it worse in front of the pack. now should harry go along with everything f says of course not but there are better ways to handle things. harry threatening f with leaving all the time is horrible. I say let harry be by himself for awhile and see how he likes. maybe he would be a little more grateful. harry is my fav but right now he is just being a disappointment to this fan. looking forward to see how this mess gets fixed
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  • From LeVeen on April 19, 2014
    You two bullies ;) you got my favorite men to fight....not cool...please let them make up soon.

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  • From ANON - gaia on April 17, 2014
    loved it, looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Jan on April 14, 2014
    Lol, yes the reunion was as I was hoping it would be... Very deliciously yummy ^_~
    Can't wait girl more, please update chapter 39.
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  • From ANON - mrequecky on April 14, 2014
    yippy! amazing updates, really loved :)
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  • From LeVeen on April 12, 2014
    Another great chapter ladies! Keep up the good work! I'm curious about the first full moon since they started hogwarts!
    Lots of love
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