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Reviews for Toonie\'s Love

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - autumngold on August 08, 2015
    Thank you for your absolutely incredible update! I am so glad that PJ was able to see Petunia, that must have been so nice for her to be visited by her nephew. Hopefully, if she gets the letter from Severus, she will let PJ know about it. I would be scared, however, if she would be so easily reached by owl. Wouldn't Dumbledore be able to find her with Fawkes if that was the case? Excellent update! Can't wait to see what will happen next, especially with all Voldemort is planning!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 17, 2015
    Thank you for your incredible new chapter! I don't know whether or not to feel bad for Severus? I do think that Lily was smart to keep away from him after their fight, who knows what he would have done to her? Thank goodness she didn't step aside like Voldemort wanted, she probably would have ended up Snape's toy because she would have owed him a life debt. Excellent update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 17, 2015
    A new twist to the background no Snape and Harry's parents.... let's see where you take it, if it's going to be the same or very different than it was written before !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Happybunny on May 31, 2015
    Great story! I hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - R.L. Foxx on April 28, 2015
    Really liking this :) the idea is great and it's had some really good funny moments in it. Like to see Petunia in a good light every once in a while. Looking forward to see where this new info will go
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  • From Jan on April 28, 2015
    Wow, he sure learned a lot about his mom and Severus. Please update chapter 22 soon.
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  • From ANON - starr on April 25, 2015
    wow to bad the notes and letter's of hid mom don't tell him more about what is happening !!!! Thanls for the update !!!:):)
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 24, 2015
    I worry so much for PJ, he is living in the belly of the enemy. With Dumbledore around all of the time he can never be safe. Hopefully soon everyone will realize how corrupt both sides of the conflict are. Thank goodness Petunia saved Harry from Dumbledore and his manipulations. Incredible update! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait to see what well happen next!
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  • From ANON - spk on April 12, 2015
    Absolutely FANTASTIC! Love the idea of a loving Petunia. Such a unique story idea. Great characterizations. Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From Fantastico on March 27, 2015
    No lie, started reading for smut. Stayed for content and quality. You have a great story here.
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  • From rigger42 on March 26, 2015
    I'm a little surprised that Harry isn't paranoid enough to ask Tonks to do some kind of wizards oath, but its a nice nod to how much he trusts Remus and Sirius. I also like how nonjudgmental Tonks is about their relationship.

    Visiting Tooney is interesting since he had to put in an application for the portkey which means someone could possibly find out his destination and be waiting...

    Another kind of crazy question is about Snape and the prophecy. Honestly, if he hadn't said it, someone else would have, though I get the emotional baggage tied to it being someone he knows. Also, it wasn't obviously a pointer to his parents and Snape regretted it in the end, so hopefully that will be considered. Not that Snape is much of a presence or integral to his life, it just doesn't seem like something that really has much bearing on present day except for explaining why he spies.

    I liked the fact that people pointed out that the prophecy is probably already fulfilled if it meant anything in the first place, and if it was about destroying the horcrux that is already done.

    Does Albus even consider at this point other Horcrux may exist? So far we haven't seen any indication he is looking for any. Or do they exist in this reality?

    One thing someone with investigative skills needs to point out -- Aurors or PJ -- is that if they keep looking for Harry and get close, someone else can follow the breadcrumbs they leave behind while researching and questioning. So if Hermione persists, she could lead Voldemort right to Harry.

    ....why do I feel like I've read a scene where Hermione is researching PJ and he warns her off? Am I conflating with another fic? LOL.
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  • From ANON - starr on March 24, 2015
    so found out it was Snape that gave it away, I hope he knows or finds out that it was rat face that sold them out !!!!!!! he should tell Black this !!!!!! Thanks again !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on March 23, 2015
    Thank you for the wonderful update to your incredible story! I am glad that PJ finally knows who betrayed his family. It might be bad, however, to let Sirius know. I doubt he would be able to keep it secret. However, if it was released in another interview . . . Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 11, 2015
    Outstanding update! I can't wait for Granger and Draco to be raked over the coals in the newspaper. Of course, no matter what it says neither of them will believe it. Hermione will never believe she isn't perfect and Draco will never believe he will pay for his sins. I hope that PJ and his friend can prove them wrong. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on January 04, 2015
    I hate cliffhanger's! lol But other than that it was a great chapter, and I eagerly await your next installment. thank you for you and for writing and sharing this fabulous story with others.
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