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Reviews for Toonie\'s Love

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  • From BAFan on September 07, 2014
    Ch. 14

    Great chapter! Well, except for the appearance of darling Rita, of course. What a hitch. But I loved every other aspect of it.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 06, 2014
    Excellent update! Poor PJ, now that Rita has her hooks into his and Sirius' relationship, he will never get any peace. He will also be a big target for Voldemort. Wonderful new chapter! I wonder if Dumbledore will use the attack as another excuse to try and get PJ to fight for him? Can't wait for more!
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  • From Winged-ashes on August 20, 2014
    It's really good I like it Ginny had it coming so did albums.
    I'm new to this place so I was just wondering if it's possible to follow this so I can get a notice wen u update. Could u plz if there is and how thnx
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  • From BAFan on August 13, 2014
    Ch. 12

    I'm a bit surprised that no one has noticed the similarity in names between Sirius's new friend "PJ" (can't remember his last name) and JP Bedlam, reporter.

    Edited to add that I checked, and PJ's last name is Broadmoor. Bedlam and Broadmoor were two notorious insane asylums in Victorian times. (Broadmoor still exists today as a psychiatric hospital.) This is another similarity tying the two names together.
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  • From BAFan on August 13, 2014
    Ch. 11

    Woo-hoo! Things are starting to roll now, full steam ahead. Excellent chapter!

    (I reposted this review because it had referenced the wrong chapter.)
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  • From BAFan on August 13, 2014
    Ch. 13

    Well, that was an outcome I didn't expect from Ginny's latest move on Harry! Glad the guys are going to give it a try. Personally, I think that Harry should have jinxed Ginny somehow. Maybe with the word "slut" in glowing letters on her forehead.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on August 12, 2014
    Your update is beyond outstanding! I love that Harry and Sirius are going to give their relatioship a try! Thank goodness they both have gotten over some of their hangups. I am also glad that Ginny was knocked back a little. I don't care if you are a man or a woman, no means no. I think it is disgusting when someone won't back off when someone else says they aren't interested. Ginny is just a disgusting, immoral person. I hope soon everyone stops making excuses for her behavoir, and starts holding her accoutable for her actions. Fabulous update! This is an incredible story! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From history on July 23, 2014
    I really love this chapter! I like how Harry is here but i don't remenber what Hermione. I will reread your story for seeing what she did!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on July 20, 2014
    Outstanding update! It makes me surprised, however, how the Order still follows along after Dumbledore like willing sheep. Sure, some like Arthur, Bill, and Moody are starting to question things, but they don't say anything about Dumbledore questioning the reporters. The only reason he would want to do that is to get his hands on Harry, which they agreed not to do during the last meeting. I just hope that PJ rips Dumbledore and Hermione apart in his next article, or should I say JP?! Excellent new chapter! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From BAFan on July 01, 2014
    Ch. 11

    "...With that, he began to give various things to keep watch for and how to prepare. He also wanted time to read the article again and dissect what was there more thoroughly. Once he did that, he would know how to go about this better. Plus, he needed time for everyone to cool down before he could get them going how he wanted."

    And it seems that Albus is still scheming. Unbelievable.

    Good chapter!
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  • From AchillesTheGeek on June 30, 2014
    Only just found this story, really enjoying it. I loved the interference that Sirius and Remus are running! So sneaky!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 28, 2014
    Love your update! I am so glad that finally some of the Order members are starting to think for themselves and not follow Dumbledore's plans like he is some God. If people really stop to think about it, the prophecy doesn't say what year Voldemort will mark someone as his equal. It doesn't have to be either Neville or Harry. Who knows, maybe someone in the past several years has been marked by Voldemort who has a late July birthday. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From BAFan on June 11, 2014
    Ch. 10 (again)

    Okay, I'm all caught up again. A good chapter, but are we going to see the actual article? 'Cause I, for one, would really like to read it!


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  • From BAFan on June 11, 2014
    Ch. 9

    "'There is a teaser about an upcoming article I saw in a few of our newspapers. They weren't much, but I was hoping, as PJ's come from the colonies, they might have more,' Albus explained, looking between all of them."

    The colonies??? I remember him using the same word in an earlier chapter. What century does Albus think it is, for Pete's sake? I'm a bit surprised that PJ didn't give him a hard time over that.
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  • From ANON - mjd on June 11, 2014
    Yeah I can just pic harry bending over and giving Sirius an eye full.
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