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Reviews for The Returnof the Legendary Amarens

By : looonylei
  • From cullengal101 on July 30, 2015
    hey
    brilliant chapter
    please update soon
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - starr on July 30, 2015
    wow that last chapter was really an eye opener !!!!!!! evil Dubbles , you will get killed ok !!!!! love it , the twist to it is awesome !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 29, 2015
    I got confused. I thought the silver eyed slytherin was talking about Draco.
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  • From cullengal101 on July 27, 2015
    hey
    brilliant chapter
    please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From cullengal101 on July 27, 2015
    hey
    I like this so far
    however a little note
    in chapter 1 you have Severus's Amaren mark on his left temple.
    "and his grey wings spread wide open, as his Amaren mark on his left temple burned, becoming visible"
    And the same on Draco in chapter 1
    "White wings spread wide open, his left temple branded by the unique mark of a dominant Amaren."
    but in chapter 3 when Hermione is reading from the silver book you have put
    "Dominant amarens have markings on their right temple, while the submissive have these markings on their left."
    just a bit confusing.
    thought you would like to know.
    otherwise loving this so far.
    cullengal101



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  • From Deathe on July 23, 2015
    Wow! I can't wait to read more of this! I also admit that Harry's name being originally Harvey is definitely intriguing!
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  • From ANON - Rhea on July 22, 2015
    Please please please don't stop writing this story. It has soo many unexpected twists it's great. Please keep writing it. Can't wait to see if and when he accepts Draco as his mate and finds out who his other mate is and I want to see if he decides to be resorted into Slytherin and if he'll let tom/Voldemort live or if tom was the good guy from the get go and was there to protect him that night and was killed by Dumbledore somehow. Just please don't stop writing this.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 22, 2015
    Interesting twist :)
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  • From ANON - Leslie on July 22, 2015
    can't wait to see where you are going from here!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 22, 2015
    more mates for Harry ?????????????????????
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  • From CDGaymer on June 22, 2015
    what it not just gona be harry/dray/sev, but harry/dray/sev/omc
    Good story non the less, more plz
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 22, 2015
    aghhhhh!!!! I want more! Yes yes I know I'm greedy. I reread the whole thing again before reading the new chapter. I feel so bad for Snape and Draco. Did you realize that the preview we had in a previous chapter never took place? Anyway... so glad you updated!
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  • From cullengal101 on March 23, 2015
    hey
    great story so far
    please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - Erime on March 21, 2015
    I'd get a new beta reader if I were you--one who knows the difference between 'your' and 'you're.' Also, your first and second chapters repeat. In spite of a few issues with your spelling, (I'm a bad speller myself) this story has some potential. I hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - starr on March 17, 2015
    ok I get where Harry is coming from but !!! he needs to re-think things !!!!!! Thanks
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