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By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - autumngold on December 21, 2015
    Thank you for your incredible update! I am so glad that Sirius and Harry's date went so well. Thank goodness Dumbledore, or the Weasleys, didn't stick their noses into his private time. Excellent new chapter! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season and a Happy and safe New Year!
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  • From ANON - alicem on December 20, 2015
    I wonder if Remus will recognize Hank (Harry) by his scent since Remus is a werewolf?
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  • From ANON - Li on December 18, 2015
    You use the word "bits" with far too much frequency in your writing. Using the same word or phrase too repetitively can be really off-putting to a reader. This is meant to be constructive criticism and I hope it helps.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on December 18, 2015
    The battle was interesting to observe and it was good Yama and Hank helped out - it's interesting to see the slow burn developing between Sirius and Hank. I imagine it is about to get really hot very soon, (and I can't wait)
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  • From rigger42 on December 18, 2015
    I doubt Sirius would expect Hank to relax enough at HQ to hop into bed so its nice that this feels like an honest thank you and dinner to enjoy each other's company rather than a booty call. Especially since introducing Remus is kind of like introducing the family. Now, how is Remus' nose and would there actually be anything to make him think of Lily and James? Is his discovery going to solely hinge on some random mention of the Dursleys? I'm kind of hoping its a bit more involved but mainly that Hank realizes it -- even if he is with Sirius at the time -- rather than Remus and Sirius cornering him after some epiphany. I suppose if he knew the name of the Dursleys without hearing it from Sirius, that would be the first step of proof....
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  • From ANON - rowenasheir on December 17, 2015
    Why doesn't Remus recognise HP scent- he is his Cub and part of pack
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  • From ANON - autumngold on December 16, 2015
    Fabulous updates! I feel like an awful reviewer for having missed commenting on your last update! Your story is amazing, thank you for having Hank save Sirius. Hopefully he will continue to keep him safe. I wonder how Voldemort feels about losing some of his best deatheaters? Dumbledore's brother had better watch his head. Incredible new chapters! Love your new story! Can't wait to see how Sirius and Harry's dinner goes!
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  • From rigger42 on December 14, 2015
    Darn, will Lucius realize that Hank passed on the information? He probably wouldn't admit it to Voldemort but might start working more to entrap or punish Hank instead of his incompetent 'wooing'.... I'm rather hoping not to see Hank forced into Headquarters, but also wonder what he will do if Sirius looks threatened. I'm very curious as to what he knows that he has been holding back, and while we get tidbits about his knowing wards and other things, you're doing a great job of keeping his magic a mystery. :)

    Do Order members know or suspect that Albus figures Harry needs to die to fulfill the prophecy?
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  • From rigger42 on December 14, 2015
    I have a hard time imagining that Lucius could find out anything Hank hasn't already -- if even that -- there isn't any link between him and the Dursleys right? Travis was obliviated and the people at the school didn't know anything either from what I gather. Unless they follow him to the Dursleys it seems unlikely anyone will learn of that connection except directly from hank. Of course, I'm wondering if Remus' sense of smell will give any clues. Not like Hank should obviously smell of his parents but I'd guess some familiarity might click.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on December 12, 2015
    Incredible updates! I love Hank and Sirius' first date, and even better is that Sirius didn't wait to make another. Lucius is hilarious, hopefully he doesn't get to discouraged by Hank's rejection. Could he become dangerous if he sees Hank out with Sirius? Thank you for your wonderful new chapters! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Sirius and Hank next!
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  • From Jan on December 12, 2015
    Gotta love Sirius😁 please update chapter 12 soon.
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  • From rigger42 on December 11, 2015
    Hmmm...if he gets too cocky, would it turn Hank off or make him reconsider how genuine Sirius can be, or will it just bump things up to the next level since Hank knows it is a signal of interest? Its interesting to see Sirius with a more reflective mindset, and with hits to his confidence rather than the manic, immature Marauder as he is often portrayed.
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  • From rigger42 on December 11, 2015
    I really, really like the fact that they didn't jump right into bed and that aspect was rather nonexistent and there is more building between them than lust and sex. And we STILL have no idea how skilled or powerful Hank is. LOL. Yama continues to be awesome, its amazing how much she understands.
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  • From ANON - starr on December 11, 2015
    Man can't wait til these two get together !!!!!!!! they are going to be so good !!!!!!!! and hope on one finds out who he is !!!!! Thanks !!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on December 09, 2015
    Excellent new chapters! I am so glad that Hank is no longer a horcrux, however I bet that won't stop Dumbledore from wanting him to die. After all, he really wants to keep his hands clean and Harry to fulfill the prophecy. Will all the work Severus, Sirius, Remus and Bill are doing help lead Dumbledore to Hank? After all, I wouldn't put it past the man to have portraits spying for him etc. Thank you for your wonderful updates! Fabulous story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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