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Reviews for Balaur

By : T-W-O
  • From LDeetz on February 27, 2016
    I love this story. I wish I could get news about updates on it like I do for FF.net. I hope you'll continue it. I'm not sure when you'll be posting next but I've read all 7 chapters just this morning and I'm dying for more! Honestly, one of the best, well-written, well-told stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
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  • From ANON - DaFossil on February 26, 2016
    Thank you so much for the speedy updates. I find myself anxiously checking several times a day. This almost feels like Christmas. I find myself wondering though, how can Bali be the heir to the Malfoy fortune if he is illegitimate? Just wondering.
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  • From meldz on February 26, 2016
    Kudos to Bali because Hermione is really being a bitch right now. Draco is doing his best and she continues to be a dunderhead. I love Hermione but this fic is making me want to slap her silly. If she continues in this path she'll end up being mean to Bali or worse telling Bali his beloved father repeatedly rape her. She mourns for the lost of Ron, a guy who ask to 'flush' down Bali while Draco did what he did to save her humanity, and she's the brightest witch of her age. Hope you'll update again, soon.
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  • From ANON - DaFossil on February 26, 2016
    Thank you so much for this update. Somehow Ron’s selfish, immature, cruel behavior seems spot on. Love the protective behavior of Draco. Am also loving the collaboration of the two wildly different "Grandma's". This story is very quickly becoming one of my favorites.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on February 26, 2016
    So much emotional upheaval for Balaur and the heavily pregnant Hermione to endure! Ron's emotional immaturity and callousness seem particularly cruel considering he grew up in a loving family where he should have learned kindness and forgiveness. Instead, he's a boorish, self-centered child-man who didn't mature from his war-time experiences. Hermione deserves a better man. I hope Balaur will calm down after Draco arrives. I imagine Draco will need to be near Hermione during her final weeks of pregnancy or Balaur will go berserk again....Great story.
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  • From wudelfin on February 25, 2016
    I must saybyoubgave such a complex matter dignity that many other authors strive and fail. Superb writing
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  • From JaxPendragon on February 25, 2016
    There are so many things wrong with the wizarding world that you could spend life times discussing it and even then not come up with the same conclusion consistently. Life is not strictly black or white. Just because a person is a slytherin, doesn't mean they are pure evil. And just because a person is a Gryffindor, doesn't mean they're strictly absolutely pure good. Look at the Marauders as an example. Look at Ronald. And Malfoy. In many ways,Ron is as much of a bigot as Malfoy and just as prejudiced as the Malfoys. But as well the young git wasn't as blameless as he was thought to be. Everyone has a little dark and light inside of them. Keep up with this story.
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  • From ANON - DaFossil on February 25, 2016
    I am absolutely love, love, loving this story. Thanks a million for the speedy updates. I find myself checking several times a day for them.
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  • From lexiatel on February 24, 2016
    Wow, what an emotional start.
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  • From ANON - Pinster on February 24, 2016
    Loving this story more and more with every chapter added......and really hoping that it'll be a nice short wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 24, 2016
    Thank you! I am glad to know she will have some of her friends and family for support when things calm down. I am hopeful she eventually gets her parents back in her life, too. I love how steadfast and loving Molly is of her. So many write her as a harridan. Thank you for writing her as a loving mother. I can't imagine how horribly numb Draco must be to have said all of that with no inflection or feeling, but I was thrilled to see Lucius so affected. After all they have all been through, for him to still not see the depth of his misdeeds... I am also enjoying the tentative friendship you've built with Narcissa and Molly, as they fight to hold their families together and do what's best for most. I ache for poor Hermione; she's handling things far too well and accepting Draco's actions too easily. I hope, when she finally breaks down, she has a house full of support and love to get her and Bali through it. I do feel badly for Draco, too. His suicide attempt was truly the call for help it usually is, and I hope he gets some help to accept what he's done, find a way to forgive himself for it, and learns to move on from it. I know he thinks he has some feelings for Hermione in some way, but, as he doesn't really know her yet, I look forward to them really getting to know one another. Thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 24, 2016
    i must thank you for updating 5 before i could even finish 4!! I LOVED not having to stop here! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Vicki on February 24, 2016
    I am loving this story. I just devoured all four chapters while at work. I love the concept of the baby knowing his father and having to have him there for the birth. I cannot wait for the remaining chapters.
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  • From meldz on February 24, 2016
    Goodness, a very very well written and delivered Dramione. I love the fast pacing and i cant wait for Bali the Beater to emerge.
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  • From ANON - Nfc on February 24, 2016
    Great. Love the way the story is going.
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