Very cute! I loved their date and his ability to relax and open himself up to her. I also liked their dinner and the tension between them.  Thanks! HG4eva

I like this better than the cannon I started out reading ff more than 10  years ago my ex introduced me but i dont like harry poter but im trying to get my husband into ff and he likes HP so i started looking for HP storyes the only carecters i like are migonical, snape, and i kind of like hamine i dont realy like hary i have little tolerance for ron snape has the best wand to it is proper  balance and weight feels good in the hand i dant like the story becas i am a true wich i was born wih perple eyes and they change all the time they have stade in the gold range lately but i have been studying religion and culter for as long as i can remember  and i dont like how she gets things wrong like that she did than the dethly halows story if she wrote it it was in the 1990's becas i remember hering it back then i tryed to like HP i realy did i saw all of them because first my mom liked them than my husband but i just couldent i can stand to meny of the good guys but back from my tangent i like a few others like hagrid and all but i like snape he is a tragic caricter i find him interesting i like that hary and ron tend to not be used much in snape hermine fics and they tend to be with the few i have read so far well written i know you gus like the story but off canon parings are less satisfide i cant even stumic some comon off cannon parings on certain fics im trying but i in this case find it ezer to reed off cannon and i like them beter i like your story beter than cannon 

Dear DS,

I hope you are doing well and your life becomes less complicated each day.  Mine -not just yet, but I know it will happen at some point within weeks... Let's stay strong, huh? :) Thank you for hugs, they are working and I'm sending you lots in return X.

Chapter 14.

This chapter was very beautiful. It takes a true talent to show something that is, in effect, a blow job, but in such a tender, loving and reverent manner, that it becomes an admission of deepest needs and feelings. I adore your writing.

You make fictional characters into real people, with proper thought process, fears, wants, inadequacies and faults, tragedies and mishaps, hopefully soon also joys and happiness in excess. I can certainly see, they are getting there. I especially like 'this' Severus and Hermione of yours, they are deep and beautiful, I just want to give them a hug. Your writing is wonderful.

The authentic feel of your stories is the main reason I need to take it at careful pace. I have quite a lot of 'real' of my own right now, but rest assured I appreciate you and your stories, and you are among my top three writers here.

Take care my lovely, hugs and kisses.

Love

Fox xx

"It's like things changed once he got on his knees"--I didn't mean that in a symbolic sense. I just meant my brain likes to divide foreplay from orgasm inducement. :)

This was a magnificent oral sex scene. The reverence he showed her in the last chapter was reflected in her reciprocation--as if she were making love to him with her mouth, showing him she cares with each caress. So sweet! Yet so carnal. I love it.

I also enjoyed Snape's inner monologue and insight. His willingness to accept what he can get (but being delighted by an offering of so much more) was gut-wrenchingly raw. His need for companionship (and his recognition of that need) makes him all the more human and relatable. I think real solitude is difficult for some people to contemplate, and it's a much messier and desperate state than the poets would have us believe.

Favs--

"greeted by the usual trouser distortion that has come to be synonymous with her presence."--Bahahahaha! Love this.

"up to the loose overhang of his frenulum where she delicately prods and tugs with her tongue until he is sure that it must be directly attached to the margins of his mouth and eyebrows, both of which hitch and jerk each time she plucks"--Hermione is the puppet master!

"She is working him with such determination that his hips finally break free from their tenuous moorings and thrust into her."--Mmmmm, hip moorings :P

"causes his insides to pitch and yaw like a boat in a wild ocean"--Oooo! A pitch of different color. Yummy.

"the fact that he wants to be the one. And not simply the one to cure her."--Uuuuuuunh! Yeeees! So good :)

I was happy to review your stories. They’re all centered around my favorite pair. I was very fortunate that the first story I ever opened was Quartet by OracleObscured, and her wonderfulness led me to your amazingness which inspired me greatly to get back on the FF horse.

I don’t think I’ll ever be “over” your writing. It’s fun, entertaining and HOT. Yes, my eyes are still yelling at me from staring at my phone so much….but worth it.

I was really hoping you’d say it was okay that I play off An Hour of Snape, I'm tickled pink! I'm thinking I can work it in to the story I'm currently working on. I think it will fit well for what I have in mind, but maybe not. If you have a way for me to send you the chapter (when I get to it) for pre-approval, I’d be happy to do that to make sure it’s respectful in your eyes.

I almost squealed when I read your review on my story. Okay – who am I kidding, I did squeal. I’ve been out of the game so long and I whipped this out so fast I was worried it was bullocks. I’m glad you liked it. This is my first Harry Potter fan fiction attempt ever. It's challenging, but fun. THANK YOU for the feedback. I welcome anything you’ve got - positive or constructive.

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Focusing on this chapter, I only have a handful of adjectives: sexy, hot, heartbreaking, mouthwatering, and so, so much more. Keep 'em coming!

I look forward to communicating with you more! ~*LissaD

 

These short chapters are killing me!!! So many days in between, and then over so quickly! So freaking sexy......... I think I'll constantly need my fan on high when reading your stuff! Eagerly and impatiently awaiting the next chapter!

you were pretty scathing of my DIFTO Hermione, are you liking this one a little more? - Much more, but in here she is mature and determined woman, in DIFO she was hormonal kid, which is something I really didn't like.

I hope you have a brilliant time! - thank you :)

Likes/Comments:
a surprising tranquility instilled by the sense of a burden shared. - I won't repeat myself but this made me sooo sad.

another of the unspoken remnants that seem to be mounting between them. - fantastic way to describe change in their relationship, but also their attitude towards the change.

“If you are to progress in your recovery, I believe that it is going to be important to determine whether the healing effects are unique to myself of if this is a generalised phenomenon.” - sneaky, sneaky snakey <3 My guess is that he has pretty clear idea that he is her only cure, but, by pushing her to explore he has more to gain than to lose :) Devious, sly, brilliant!

I just love how you describe his movements, his actions. It makes me holding my breath, and he sounds sexy, dangerous but most of all gives the air of controlled power, inner strength. Like some sort of sexy beast. You know it can rip you apart with no effort and you still want to enter the cage and...play with it.

to find him there—on one knee. / raw desire imbuing the shadowed angles of his features, emblazoned within the flush of his skin, igniting the depths of his impossibly black eyes - huh, image worthy of the soul! Where can I sign in mine? *standing patiently in the queue, athamere ready to use it when its my turn to sign*

lapping up the fruits of his efforts - how this would reflect on his loss of senses? If his sense of smell is dulled his sense of taste is also diminished. She could be his cure as much as he is hers.

as her flicks the head of her clitoris over and over - shouldn't it be "as he flicks" or I misunderstood the sentence?

Steaming hot chapter. I love how he shows his emotions, even those he's not recognized and accepted, rather than use words. Two of them are so eloquent and in the same time unable to communicate properly.

Impatiently waiting for new chapter. To be honest I have so much work that, beside necessary travel arrangements, I deem only yours and OO stories as valid reason to take a break ^_^

Love & hugs & kisses xx 

Chapter 13.

Hi DS,

I've missed you, but at the same time I couldn't make myself to read, wasn't sure if I could cope with the intensity of your stories. Thank you for the hugs, even the virtual ones are doing the job xxxx As for holiday, I really need some time off, but the earliest I can do would be at the end of May and there will be a lot of stress and hassle before that... But I'll survive, I always do.  And yes, I need someone, I could be weak around, but those are not easy to find. Also it's not easy to let someone to take care of me, when for most of my adult life I was an instigator and carer.

On a lighter note I will gladly join OO and you in marketing and product developing venture, I think the first thing we need to come up with is a 'Voice Sexifying Potion' -we would make millions of galleons (each!)

Now onto the story.

'He couldn’t remember a time in the past when he hadn’t felt the full weight of some grave responsibility upon his shoulders.' -little bit like my life...

'But the idea of a working partnership, one with the promise of regular company and the opportunity for intelligent conversation, buoys him more than he could have thought possible.' -that's my dream too

Ohhh DS, I don't think I can give you any favs for the rest of the chapter, because I would have to copy and paste the whole bloody thing! I love how they appear to chase each other, and the contact between them so faint at first, but so intense at the same time. And how he opened about his desires and feelings and gave her the release, she has been waiting for -for years. And her demanding more was what I would do myself... you make me horny.

Why men like Snape are so rare?

Thank you for the update loved it :))

Hugs for you

Fox xx

First, I’m going to introduce myself – Lissa. New/old FF fanatic. All though back in my prime it was all Backstreet Boys with a smattering of Britney and Christina…the life of a 90’s teenager, you know. I’ve read every story you’ve written over the last week or so and am hooked. My poor husband thinks I’ve gone off the deep end. I wanted to let you know I reviewed each of your stories briefly today and hope to keep up a consistent barrage of positive and motivating feedback, because you could not possibly post this fast enough for me. Cheers!

Chapter 13 Review:
Eyes shuttering against the pain, she whimpers her sorry admission, “. . . Me”—instantly surrendering the column of her throat as her face tips away from his heated gaze.? – My favorite part of Hermione in your stories is she is so unware of her beauty and how her intelligence is more of a turn on than anything else. Oh, and let’s not forget Snape’s exquisite response to this. *drooling*

“But . . . just in case . . .” She winces as she swallows through her shredded throat. “Maybe you should show me again?” UMMM. Yes please.

Delectable, DS, delectable. Cannot wait to consume every word from this day forward.

Mmmmmmmm! Such a juicy chapter. The tone of the story is slowly changing as Hermione heals (Although I guess Snape is healing too. But I don't see the story as being as bleak for him.)

Favs--

"each deliberate step accentuated by the cool slide of his fingers across the desktop."--Unh! Yes!

The whole teasing scene before he goes down on her--the almost touching and then the nose touch and kiss. Holy fuck! I loved the whole thing.

"Her head pitches back"--The pitch is back :)

Whole fingering/oral sex scene. (I know I shouldn't separate this from the beginning bit, but it's different to me for some reason. It's like things changed once he got on his knees. Anyhoo, I adored the entire orgasmic release. Excellent writing :)

"earth-shattering pelvic paroxysm."--One of my favs of the favs.   

"ooze through the aftershocks."--Hahahaha! Yeeeeees!

"Maybe you should show me again?”--Bahahaha! Get it, girl!

I can't wait for some sexual tension amidst the brewing. And I'm still eager for that backstory.

Chapter 12,

Maybe it's my state of mind, but the sex had a sad lining to it... it was touching and a bit sad, and hot and yummy. Kind of holistic treatment for the both of them -body, mind and soul rejuvenation...

I loved it. Can't wait now to see what they do next... now that she fixed her inside and outside lady bits. I don't think he should let her out of his rooms. In my humble opinion they should utilise is to the limits.

Fox xx

Chapter 11.

'The student relaxes, clearly uncomfortable with catching him day-dreaming and relieved to be back on the receiving end of his, more familiar, contempt.' -nice, poor Snape

“I’m just concerned that that waiter will be wondering what I’m . . . doing to you.” --love this.

'but the way it is delivered, the emphasis on ‘doing to you’, lubricated by the slick reverb of his baritone—it strikes her right where she imagines her uterus to be' -oooh, give me more!

The-finger-licking left me breathless... and “Not this time,” he mutters bluntly. “Bill, please.” -is a killer line! Snape is really enjoying himself, isn't he? Trust a Slytherin King to 'help' you...

Brilliant chapter.

Fox xx

Chapter 10.

She needs it freshly made, straight from the source -hahahaha. Is it just my impression or are you feeling better? Because I certainly skipped at least few circles of hell in a recent hour! :))  I wonder what will she do to make it up to him...

I like their kind of healing sessions. 'I'll be back' -like Terminator hahaha

Fox xx

Chapter 9.

Semen salve -love it! hahahaha he can also make semen-based potions and lotions, creams and deodorants, lubricants and stomach calming droughts -special line of cosmetics 'Severus' Essences' :))

Ohhh that is just great! So they are curing each other. Nice.

Thanks

Fox xx

Chapter 8.

Goodness, the scene with him kneeling and rubbing the potion into her skin is just amazing and her reaction... hmmm... this story is very intense. I have no idea how can you write something so great while not being well... I find it difficult to think clearly or even put few pathetic words together.

I have to tell you that his wanking sessions are mouth-watering. Thank you!

“Could you possibly . . . make me some more?” -I can't believe it! Hahahahaha I think you just made my day, I love you Dessie ;)

P.S.

Sorry for mistakes in my reviews, can't focus.

Fox xx