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Reviews for Changes

By : SickPuppy
  • From imageekiknowit on June 14, 2017

    YAY TWO IN A ROW!!!!

    I should have figured out that you were teasing because its you but my hope shall never die!

    I would do that with my family but they don't like me saying really anything about fanfiction at ALL. Even if its complaining about a long chapter, finding an awesome story, liking an author but saying that they need help, really anything. Its the same for my brother and his X-Box games.

    I really love bottom Harry, especially with Sev, because for some reason I just see him as a bottom, I don't know. I don't MIND reading a top Harry, but the preference is definitely bottom. Even if it is a top Harry, I would prefer it to be switching. There is one Snarry alpha/omega story with Sev as the omega that is really well done and smutty that I love, suprisingly. I will give you the name if you would like it.

    I hope that you write Harry riding Sev at least once because I love that.

    I find it weird that Dumbles is so supportive of this relationship, but then again Dumbles is weird. I just hope he is done manipulating their relationship (I give up hope that he will stop all together, the stuff with Slughorn is just proof). I can't wait for more!


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  • From Thunderbird on June 14, 2017

    "Kinda cute and kinda smutty"? You were underselling it a bit, weren't you? Loved it: the sexy times, of course, but also the awkward interaction with Dumbledore, which had me chuckling.

    Glad to hear the good news on the sequel front. Keep on plugging away, I'm sure it's great!


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  • From MomoTheMoogle on June 13, 2017

    Oh, SP, you never fail to impress. I could die happy if it didn't mean I'd miss the rest of Changes. I do love a good plot injected with the right amount of smut.

    "Do you wish me to resume that action?"

    YES, SEVERUS, CONTINUE. But really though, I laughed at how serious Severus was right then xD Just one of the many reasons why I love Sev!

    But that preview...let's just say I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too.


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  • From Nannon10 on June 12, 2017

    I was ready for there to be another problem with thone two getting together. Finally Harry got himself some action! I have a feeling Sev is going to enjoy having a vocal lover. Every single line of that chapter was perfect and definitely worth the wait. Cannot wait for the next :)

     


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  • From Thunderbird on June 12, 2017

    Mmmmmmmm, delicious! Well worth the wait, my dear. The buildup to it was nearly as sweet as the act itself. I also love Sev's response at the end. It perfectly captures his character and his feelings about this whole situation.

    Glad I could help with the sequel, in my own small way. Inspiration works in funny ways, doesn't it? I'm looking forward to reading it, whenever it appears!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on June 12, 2017

    Totally worth the wait!! But now I want more! And more and more...


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  • From phoenix-rob on June 11, 2017

    Yahh! OMG!!! do it again, pleeeaaassssseee?

    happy dance, happy dance


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  • From imageekiknowit on June 11, 2017

    FINAL-FUCKING-LY!!!!! Normally for your chapters I take my time with them, make sure I am focused and have enough time to write a comment right after I finish reading, really invest myself. But because you promised sex with Sev as the top and all of your emails said that I probably wanted to read this chapter, I thought the past 2 chapters were going to give me sexy time... but no it was a LIE! I read them with no time to leave reviews or stay focused. Once while I couldn't sleep at 3 am because I thought maybe a nice Snarry sex scene would put me to sleep, but NOPE NO SEX! SO FINALLY I CAN GO BACK TO WHAT I WAS DOING BEFORE!!!! I did like these chapters though and enjoyed the sex scene THANK YOU! I hope the hint for the next one is Harry riding Sev but I am guessing it is the other way around.

    I would leave a better (and longer) review like normal but I am very energetic and tired today and my mind can't seem to settle down so I am going to rap this up quick and I shall promise a better review next time (plus dinner is ready).

    Just one more thing. Sorry for rambling on about the other fic, I was just excited to have another person to talk to about fanfiction, my family isn't into that stuff and hate when I talk about it (plus when would I talk to them about that awesome gay sex scene I just read? Not that kind of family, open but not THAT open) and I don't have that many friends, much less that are into fanfiction. Can't wait for more!!


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  • From Thunderbird on June 10, 2017

    Oh, SP, you cruel, cruel tease. When I read your review response I thought you were kidding about making me wait. Then I got to the end of the chapter... joke's on me I guess :P

    I enjoyed this chapter, actually, despite the distinct lack of (promised) shagging (ahem). The sexy little scene you threw in was nice to tide us over, and I appreciated Harry's introspection, as I suspect Severus did also. I imagine he will feel better about boning Harry knowing that Harry is mature enough to do some self-examination.

    But seriously, though. Stop screwing around and get to the screwing around! :)

    On another note, I don't think you should feel obligated to do a sequel right away, as welcome as it would be. I can never force things like that in my own work. Better to write the story that inspires you, since it will undoubtedly be better than something you made yourself write because you felt some misguided obligation to do so. I will happily read whatever you write next, whether it's a sequel to Changes or something entirely new! Just wanted to throw that out there.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on June 10, 2017

    jbhcfcvcghbjnsldkxm!!!!

    You tease! Keeping us waiting still - it's just not fair! 

    I'll be waiting with bated breath...


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  • From Nannon10 on June 10, 2017

    Sorry I missed chapter 20, it was a wonderful chapter. I'm glad Harry questioned his sexuality it doesn't happen enough in fanfiction. 

    In response to your reply you have definitely become a better writer and that's one of the reasons I read all of a fanfiction writers work. The early stuff may seem less polished than the recent stuff but it shows how reviews and responses help shape what's to come.

    I'm really looking forward to chapter 22 hopefully the UST will end but keep have a feeling it may not be ;)


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  • From MomoTheMoogle on June 10, 2017

    Mother of damn I'm dying here, but I know the characters tend to do as they wish at times. Goodness knows I've read enough of your work to know that!

    I've read Queen of Angst's The Unbearable... series, and I really liked it. I think that's actually what got me started liking Drarry! I'll have to check out the other one you mentioned though. Can't remember if I've read it yet!


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  • From phoenix-rob on June 10, 2017

    aaww!! come on!

    You're making wait again.

    The mutual handies was just a tantalyzing tease.

    Is Harry really gay? update soon so I can find out


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on June 09, 2017

    You didn't quite understand my comment (it was awkwardly phrased, I admit), and yet you started to see to it anyway, lol! The main story arch I'm referring to is the whole Harry finding the horcruxes and defeating Voldemort stuff.i love reading stories that change one detail (Harry is now a werewolf) and watch how that detail changes so much and yet still stays true to original story. 

    While I haven't read your recommended fluffy piece, I'm planning to soon. My roommate is reading all your stuff too (kittyfivetats) and said I had to read area of expertise first, lol. I just finished that one  (wow, that was a new plotline for me!) And I'm going to tackle some fluff before I get to the sequel, lol. 

    I can't wait until the next chapter! I need smut, haha!


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  • From phoenix-rob on June 09, 2017

    Love the ongoing developments.

    Can't help but think returning to Privet Drive will be frought with issues.

    Bring on the next chapter - (Happy dance, happy dance)


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