Reviews for His Twenty-Eighth Life

BY : Lomonaaeren

  • From Anaelyssa on March 07, 2018

    Ch 24

    Damn. I wouldn't trust Dumbledore as far as I can throw him. I wonder what happened.

    I wish Tommy-boy could scold those damn kids, and maybe torture them a little. But Harry wouldn't like that.

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  • From silentxxdreamer on March 01, 2018

    Such a cruel cliff hanger... TT^TT

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  • From Anaelyssa on February 28, 2018

    Ch 23

    Nice little planning session.

    Voldemort's obsession is kind of adorable here.

    Looking forward to Fawkes' message

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  • From Fenrirsboy on February 28, 2018

    Loving the developments! Love reading Harry and Voldemort plotting together... 

    I think Voldemort is onto something with Jonathon... Jonathon seems to be loyal to Harry, and if Voldemort can somehow convince Jonathon that Harry wants Voldemort to stay alive (and at this point he does, as long as he sticks to his oaths) then... they can all live happily ever after! 

    Well maybe not Dumbledore. He'd be pissed. 

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  • From Fenrirsboy on February 16, 2018

    Aww Cedric... my heart can't help but still feel sad over that... I'm glad Jonathon is in Hufflepuff... he kind of reminds me of Cedric so far... a good, pure person. I hope he continues to stay this way. 

    Ah, I didn't realize that Harry had dealt with an obsessive and communicative Voldemort before. I thought this was the first time that he had any type of relationship with him. You mentioned it in this chapter, not sure if I just missed past mentions of it. 

     Also Dumbledore sucks. Ugh. 

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  • From Anaelyssa on February 15, 2018

    Ch 22:

    Yup, Hufflepuff is not unexpected at all. Also very cute. And the fact that Harry watched the sorting.

    I wonder what changed the Weasley twins so much that it affected their sorting.

    I hate chapter titles (as a general concept). I keep thinking of the worst thing that could happen. I thought it would be discovered that Harry in communication with Voldemort.

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  • From Fenrirsboy on February 07, 2018

    Oh man... I hope Harry doesn't blame Voldemort for whatever Bellatrix and Snape try..... 


    Love the way you describe Voldemort's words, actions, and the way he says Harry's name. Very sexy ;) Of course Harry for some reason, with all his wisdom and years, can't seem to see that Voldemort likes him yet. 

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  • From silentxxdreamer on February 07, 2018

    I love the progressing dynamic between Voldy and Harry!

    and I love how you're writing Jonathan! 

    poor James at the end of this..he's floundering.

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  • From Anaelyssa on February 07, 2018

    c 21

    Snape isn't taking it well, I see. Since he's decided to be an idiot, he definitely has a cozy torture session in the future. Or maybe not, if Voldy and Harry are really merciful.

    Poor Harrykins.

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  • From Fenrirsboy on February 03, 2018

    uuuugghhhh Damnit Remus!!! He should be one of the few to actually be on Harry's side! As a werewolf and someone people automatically distrust for being so, wouldn't he have empathy for Harry?? I guess it's like internalized self-hatred/non-acceptance of himself... like maybe he feels a need to prove he's "not like other Dark creatures"... he seems to really be clinging to this "Harry is a Dementor" thing, when Harry isn't actually a Dementor... he's just kept that ability/magic from a past life. Frustrating! 

    Still loving Jonathon.... 

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  • From Anaelyssa on February 02, 2018

    Ch 20:

    Awww. Jonathan's brotherly love is so sweet.

    Aberforth seems reasonable.

    Remus is a psychologically unstable fool (because he has unresolved complexes).

    I wonder how Snape's doing.

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  • From Fenrirsboy on January 25, 2018

    I loved Voldemort's intensity in this chapter.... Harry is his prize, hehehe.... 

    That moment when Voldemort referred to himself in third person... is that just him being arrogant and fancy or is he truly starting to see himself now as a different person than who he was in his youth? Perhaps....Tom is emerging?  

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  • From Anaelyssa on January 24, 2018

    Ch 19:

    Oh, so he took one oath each time.

    Lol. Two steps forward, one step back. (relationship)

    I like your descriptions of magic.

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  • From Fenrirsboy on January 18, 2018

    Heh, at this point Jonathon is going to figure out Voldemort "wants" Harry before either Harry or Voldemort. I usually don't enjoy original characters in Harry Potter stories, but I am liking Jonathon a lot - he seems very perceptive and matter-of-fact about things. 

    Also Voldemort is totally sending notes like a teenage in class to his crush and he doesn't even realize it yet. Obviously I'm aware Harry is too young physicall still, but I'm just saying... Can't wait for more!

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  • From Anaelyssa on January 18, 2018

    Ch 18.

    Frigging Dumbledore.

    I was confused for half of the chapter when you said that Harry didn' t show up for Voldemort's oath. Figured it out later when you said he had to make it a second time. I don't remember the initial conditions for it and having to repeat it so...

    Anyways, not feeling sorry for Snape at all.

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