Reviews for Torment

BY : Kvarta


  • From BlackRose on December 13, 2017

    62: ๐Ÿ˜ฎ WOW! We are already on chapter 62! These two people are so damaged. But knowing that Severus is not in love with Lily means that there is a possibility of him moving forward if he could just learn to deal with his emotions. Hermione may have to be very careful. While she never tried to take advantage of her knowledge of Severus’ memories, he could use them against her while angry. He has a very sharp tongue! 



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  • From BlackRose on December 12, 2017

    Thanks for the two new chapters. ๐Ÿ˜Š ahhh Severus is a living teddy ๐Ÿป ๐Ÿ˜‚. It’s nice to see that noe he gets to see some of what she went through. It will help to make him see her as a damaged soldier and a woman, rather than just his student. 



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  • From BlackRose on November 26, 2017

    I’m glad you had fun on your trip.

    Oh, I see they are still trying to deny their attraction to each other. ๐Ÿ˜Š  Hermione is also starting to understand that Severus would rather try to kill himself than deal with all his trauma.  Both have a lot of issues! 



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  • From BlackRose on November 17, 2017

    Vienna ComiCon 2017! Soooo jealous! 

    Thanks for the chapter. Misty is so funny. Both Severus and Hermione are delusional. ๐Ÿ˜‚ Neither seems to want to realize their attraction for each other. Severus is so in denial that he can’t figure out his mistery dream woman. Let’s see: petit, smart, talkative, and caring of him. Who could that be? ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿป‍โ™€๏ธ And he still wants to be angry at her for not doing as he had expected she would do. ๐Ÿ˜Š



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  • From BlackRose on November 12, 2017

    It's about time Hermione shocked Severus! Serves him right. ๐Ÿ˜‚ Now I just wonder what she will see and do. As well as wondering who he will think about while taking care of his "problem." 



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  • From BlackRose on November 11, 2017

    I like Cissy being motherly to BOTH Severus and Hermione without being overbearing. Also, what couple is Poppy referring to marrying based on magic compatibility? Now who fits Poppy’s description of Severus’s perfect match? ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Š



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  • From BlackRose on November 09, 2017

    Another sad but great chapter. Blocks? What does that mean?! ๐Ÿค” I see Hermione got another bad memory from Severus if it’s her that hiccuping. I wish Severus would get to see some of her memories. See her being tortured or see her devastation at taking her parents memories away. Then, perhaps, he can see that she also has suffered. He knows this, but it would be so different if he experienced it like she does all her memories. 



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  • From BlackRose on November 07, 2017

    I’m always torn between liking and disliking Lucius, but I’m happy that he told the truth. I’m happy someone finally placed Lilly in her true light. People forget the faults of those that have died. Did he mean that Lilly had flirted with R. Black also because she wanted to bag a man with status?

    At least Hermione has realized her help isn’t always wanted or needed. The best thing is to just walk away and give people space. 



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  • From BlackRose on November 06, 2017

    Lucius is going to lose his books! ๐Ÿ˜‚ That should teach him. “Bend your head and not talk” I don’t think Severus is going to learn that lesson anytime soon.๐Ÿ˜Š Hermione is getting better and so is Severus. Slow but steady. 



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  • From BlackRose on November 05, 2017

    No Weasley presents? So much for loyalty! ๐Ÿ˜ก Who needs one of Molly’s ugly sweaters anyways. I like that Hermione doesn’t back down when she thinks Lucius is wrong. Draco is still a jerk. I can’t wait for the present to be opened. ๐Ÿ˜‚ Severus still hasn’t realized that even though he can’t stand Hermione, he still find her attractive. Or at least his body responds to her . ๐Ÿ˜Š



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  • From BlackRose on November 04, 2017

    Great chapter. ๐Ÿค” I think that Severus is starting to realize that Hermione knows many of his faults and weaknesses, and yet she still wants to save him. She still thinks he is worth saving. Will he realize that Lilly never would have done that? Also, it’s so sad that he now can see how alone she really is without her family. But it’s too funny when he thinks he is never going to get rid of her ๐Ÿ˜‚. And what was Lucius thinking?  



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  • From BlackRose on November 03, 2017

    50: ๐Ÿ˜‚ Misty is a trip! 

    O’ Sevy... “stunning”? Couldn’t keep eyes off of Hermione๐Ÿ˜ˆ. Things are starting to progress. 

    “ Pull yourself together, Hermione. We have another hour and a half to endure.”  That is just too funny ๐Ÿ˜‚. He definitely knows how to get her attention when trying to calm her down. 



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  • From BlackRose on November 02, 2017

    Glad to hear you are well after the accident. 

    49: ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ she just realized where she hurt him! I can’t wait until the party! Wow, all those pure bloods will be at the mercy of Snape and Hermione. Nobleman and secretary instead of “greasy git” and “mudb...” ๐Ÿ˜ˆThis could be fun or a big setback for Hermione if they are really mean and dismissive to her. Can’t wait ๐Ÿ˜Š.



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  • From BlackRose on November 01, 2017

    Why is Lucius so interested in getting Severus and Hermione together? Because he thinks she would be good for him or because he thinks Severus needs some “fun” and she’s available? Or he just wants to rile them up? 



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  • From BlackRose on October 27, 2017

    Sneaky Snape! ๐Ÿ˜Š Hermione is all kinds of crazy, but at least her heart is in the right place. O Lucy, such timing. ๐Ÿ˜‚



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