Reviews for Ceding Control (formerly Goddess of the Moon)

BY : Wimp36

  • From Naruko-fan on February 18, 2021

    Brilliant story just wondering if that's it finished or if you have plans to update it in the future?

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  • From Jeda26 on December 13, 2020

    Oh my word and god have mercy. That was a fantastically awesome and stunningly kinky, wantonly depraved humdinger of a chapter. Great to see Harry and Hermione celebrating reuniting during the Christmas holidays after their time apart and enjoying some passionately hot and sensually spectacular loving and reuion sex in all its seductively sultry and sensual alluring details.

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  • From DEVIOUS_WRITER on November 20, 2020

    welcome back, great chapter cant wait for the next update 

    cant wait for harrys full feminization, maybe have Cormac sell harry to a new mistress like daphne greengrass or maybe narcissa malfoy, he is getting a little too happy with herminone 

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  • From Alpha_Potter on November 20, 2020

    The only negative thing for me in this story would be sub Harry.

    Don't take me wrong. I really think the scenes are good, and had Harry been one of the dominant ones this would have been enjoyable for me. But I guess to each his own.

    I don't like sub Harry stories, because even after all the hardships he endured, Harry never took anything lying down. And especially cuck Harry. With all the things he has suffered, I doubt he would take a betrayal well, especially from someone he trusts so much. He would be devastated if those he trusts with life(Ginny, Luna, Hermione, Neville) works against him and conspires with his sort of enemies(Cormac, Draco, maybe Blaise as he never got along with any Slytherins).

    That's just my opinion. Sorry if it offends you. But other than the character chioce, I like the concept and scenes of the story.

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  • From Jeda26 on November 17, 2020

    Oh my word and god have mercy. That was a sensationally sublime and stunningly sensually, alluringly smokingly hot sexual mess of a new chapter. Utterly love how kinkily and seductively erotically, you have Hermione corrupt her own mother easily around to her way of thinking through her description of her own fun games with Harry and the gang over the last few months. That it sets the groundwork for Jean following in her daughters footsteps and aided and abetted by libedo and inhibition stripping potions, and dragged down the rabbit hole by lord Cormac able and pleasurably irresistable sexual ministrations until, she is completely and utterly under his thrall and wnating horny to embrace and have the same kind if life that Hermione has with Harry for herself.


    Ragerly looking forward to the next chapter and a return to the Burrow for the rest of Harry's christmas break to see what further fun treats and sexual humilations, his mistresses have in store for him, during the remainder of the holidays. 

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  • From ReturntheSlab on November 17, 2020


    More generic smut where somehow, miraculously it's somebody other than the main cast getting cuckedoh wait, that's not right at all. It's just generic smut where for some reason, the main cast puts up with getting cucked. With their significant others being a group of whores better left to their "studs" and the inevitable death by STD.

    tl;dr Get this fucking trash-tier shit out of here and write something creative for once in your life you goddamn loser.

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  • From Wman613 on October 06, 2020

    Please write the next chapter and have Ron get changed into a girl, already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

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  • From DEVIOUS_WRITER on August 19, 2020

    when will this be updated? 

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  • From G_Gabb on July 28, 2020

    I found your story yesterday, idk how I could not see it before, it's the best adult/kink themed fanfiction I think I've read in a very long time (if not period) can't wait to read the following chapters ^^ thanks for this wonderful work ❤❤❤
    PS : In all honesty, if you don't mind me saying, I think you could gain visibility if you posted this story, not only here, but elsewhere, like AO3 too (but that's a minor thing, & just my opinion)

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  • From Jeda26 on July 17, 2020

    Hot damn, I utterly love this story from and have re read it several times already and I very much hope that you don't leave us hanging for two much long before you continue and write what other fun and kinkily degrading and wantonly humilating sexual activities Harry and Herm,ione were eagerly willing to enage in at the instrucions of their mistresses and master

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  • From Jeda26 on May 24, 2020

    Utterly loving this gloriously sensually beautiful wantonly depraved and sensationally humilating kinkily spectacular gem of a stoey and cvan't wait to see what else Luna and Ginny have in store for Harry over the rest of the christmas break. As well as after the gorgeously alluring sumpteously volupteous and fablous revealing teaser, just what else Hermione got up to for Christmasd a swell. Please updat soon as can't wait to see and read what you have in store for us next.

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  • From Jeda26 on May 11, 2020

    Hot damn, that was another gloriously beautiful and sensationally alluring kinky masterpeice of a new chapter as the fun has just begun for Harry during the Christmas Holidays and utterly loved and adored all of the majestically erotically humiliating and sensually wanonly depraved sexual activites that they made him take part in. Utterly found terrifically gorgeous the act of the girls depeening Harry' humilaition by effectively pimping him out on the town and at home to any man, boy or couple who want a piece of his sissy ass, completely making his sissy life complete at School and at home and unescapable as Ginny and Luna delectably drive home said point at the point of their cocks and exual domination of him, brilliantly.

    Eagerly looking forward to what happens next and given the gifts and shock Harry was presented with at the end of the last chapter. Think it would be magnificent to see the sexy duo ramp up Harry's sissification, by making him wear Lingerie in and out of the house, disguised as glamour that only those in the know can see and appears as normal clothes to everybody else and enjoy several hot role plays, fashion shows and sexual activities so attired. Beef up his feminine appearence in regards to giving him more permanent feminine body, breasts, curves and the like and shrink down his cock some what. Tatoo his pubic era and boi pussy in a similar or different manner to Hermione. Pierce his cock and make it so it can only get hard, when he acts and is used as a sissy or when his mistresses allow. Ginny and Harry take part in a kinky wedding role play and that doubles for wedding ceremony for real as Harriet as the gorgeus sissified and feminised bride gives himself to Ginny as her wife, who take him as her bride and with new created futa cock grown with balls via potion, makes use of Harriet's boi pussy through a Potion which genetically changes anatomy to give a sissy like Harry female reproduction organs and uterus griwn in his ass (though of course with a smaller cocklet) to allow Ginny to breed him full of new lords potter blacks and cuckold him as well herelf along with Hermione.

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  • From Jeda26 on April 11, 2020

    Oh my God, utterly loving the direction, you are taking it in as it keeps getting oh so deliciously sinfully more erotic with every passing chapter and fantastically epic smut feast of gloriously majestic proportions and kinky wanton depravety and humilation. Have too say that the last two chapters were an utterly out of this world terrfiically outstanding works of depravety, sexual domination and submssion and sexual humilation of the best kind as Ron and Hary and Hermione continue down their respective roads to becoming, woman, sissy cock and whore for their master and mistresses. Also loved how you have the entire boys dorm know of Harry and Ron's fetishes now and you should defunately have when Ron is all woman and Harry is attired, changed and attired to look like one do a hot striptease and lap dane orgy for them in their dorms late one night.

    Loved how yo set it up for the mistress and masters to continue to have fun over the holiday with their respective sluts. Think that during the Holidays, gils should continue to help Ron acclimatise to his forth-coming transformation, by having practice his skills on sucking and being fucked and joys and pleasures of being a proper woman to be fucked and bred buy her masters. While think it would be kinkily hot to see Ginny and Luna as they continue to mold and train Harry, decide that Ginny and Hermione will become Harry's future wives and ladies Potter and Black, in due course whom cuckold him, no end, but still love him in their own uniuely depraved way, with them turning and crafting him into the perfectly beautiful and sluttily gorgeous sissy slut, cockold. Whom unable to wait a few years, go through a kinkily hot roleplay of a wedding ceremony in which Harry is the bride and Ginny and Hermione temporarily gain futa cocks to fuck Harry's temporarily pussified ass for the occassion. Plus when they do get married, Harry's cock is get more small than it is now and can only get large when needed to impregnate heirs tokeep up appearence or when he watchs being cuckolded.Plus before said wedding role play, could have hot blachortte night, when the mistresses attire Harrry intoall kinks of sexy linerie and play a humilating sexually kinky game of truth or dare, before getting everybody ready for main event. Plus think Harry should love breasts that Luna and Ginny grant them tio him permantently, alongside more feminine body, after he earns them in a spextacularly slutty sissy act of love and depravety.        

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  • From Jeda26 on April 08, 2020

    Hot damn, that was another brilliantly erotically beautiful and sensationally stunning exotically alluring masterpeice of perfectly flawless sexual dynamite. Love how you carried on Ron's humilation from previous chapter and have Nevillle begin the process of emesulating him and turning him into another sissy or transfomring him completely into a girl.

    Love to see Hermione as well reqwarding Harry for all his good behaviour and sexual eagerness and indulgence in completing all taks set of him and gifting him with a sexy sultry striptease and humping and cum of his small cock and enjoy some loving fun between boyfriend and girlfriend.

    Think Luna and Ginny won't be happy about this act of disobediance by their two sluts and punish them in their own kinky respective ways. As with Hermione being forced to perfect and enhnce her sexy striptease and learn lap dance routines as a another way of making her better slut and more capble of pleasuring her lovers and masters evern further, While at the same time, Harry is punished for cumming in more wantonly depraved way as he further educatted in ways of a sissy as his cock is shrunk and made incable of cumming temporarily, while his body is made more feminine and encased in feminine lingerie of a ancient greek style as role play scenario of Harry as sissy/lesbian worshipper of the goddess of the moon, Luna pleasuring her in any way he can and begging to be allowed to do so.  

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  • From Naruko-fan on April 08, 2020

    Brilliant chapter as usual and loving the frequent updates. Only wish is that we’d have seen Hermione, Luna & Neville in the room of requirements but still absolut banging chapter.

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