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By : goddess-of_dragons
  • From 2CRsgt on May 26, 2020

    Sorry I hadn't reviewed before but once I started reading I couldn't stop. Now that I'm here, I waitr with bated breath until the next chapter... Alright I waited. Where's the next chapter?  8^)) (Joke)


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  • From 2CRsgt on May 20, 2020

    You asked for some ideas:

    Why trhe ghost Moanining Myrtle is the way she is. Think about how old she was when she died. A ghost trapped in perpetual puberty.

    DM: Let's shag on the Staff table.

    HG: NO!

    DM: It'll be OK at 3 in the morning, no one will see

    HG: NO!

    DM: In front of Dumbledore's golden throne

    HG: ... Er... Still no

    DM: Come on. It'll be fun. I bet noone's ever done this before.

    HG: NO

    DM: This will put you in HOGWARTS: A HISTORY for sure 

    HG: no?

    DM: I Dare Ya

    HG: No

    DM: I Double Dare Ya

    ETC

     


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  • From LadyShire on December 29, 2019

    Chapter made me tear up a bit. I understand you need a break and real life happens. But I am always waiting for the chapter update on the story. I am glad that Hermione has her parents back in her life. I am even happier that she is not mad at Draco for hiding it from her. I cant wait for the next update on the story. You are always keeping on the edge of my seat with this story. You help me escape the drama in my life with your writing. Just take the time that you need to write and know that I will always be waiting for the next chapter. Merry Christmas and happy new year from my family to yours


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  • From LadyShire on December 28, 2019

    Chapter made me tear up a bit. I understand you need a break and real life happens. But I am always waiting for the chapter update on the story. I am glad that Hermione has her parents back in her life. I am even happier that she is not mad at Draco for hiding it from her. I cant wait for the next update on the story. You are always keeping on the edge of my seat with this story. You help me escape the drama in my life with your writing. Just take the time that you need to write and know that I will always be waiting for the next chapter. Merry Christmas and happy new year from my family to yours


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  • From Thunderbird on December 23, 2019

    I'm so glad you're still working on this! I know it was tough to be motivated, what with everything going on IRL and other things, but it's good to see that you stuck with it. I liked her interaction with her parents and the fact that things are finally out in the open and sorted out. And I especially liked Hermione's perspective on Draco's actions. In some sense, he was a little but out of line because the choice should always have been hers. But Hermione is also practical and aware of the fact that what's done is done, and she was mostly avoiding bringing back her parents out of cowardice, I think. Anyway, it worked out and brought them closer too, so I'm happy! <3

    Writing FF has been really hard lately. I'm busier at work than ever and I'm also writing an original novel, and I feel guilty when I neglect that too much :( But I am trying to write more for the ASE oneshots and I  would love to get motivated for Unstoppable again. You're right that it's not posted on AO3 currently. I might start posting the chapters I have (with some small rewrites) once 2020 rolls around, in the hopes of getting more feedback and finding the wherewithal to keep going. It would be great to finish it one day. Of course, I welcome your thoughts on it if I decide to do that. I just have to get throught he holidays first and see where I'm at.

    Speaking of which, I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday in spite of the hardships you've been through these past weeks and months. I'm sending good vibes your way <3


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  • From Luckycharms on November 25, 2019

    When are you updating again? We need more!


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  • From Thunderbird on November 05, 2019

    Yay! Make ups with shower and sex and she finally sees her parents again! Obviously I want to know how their conversation will go and how this is going to change things for Hermione. Hopefully all for the better!

    I know exactly what you mean about intending one thing and then having the writing go in a differemt direction. It happens to me a lot. Always trust your gut, I say. 

    I would be interested to see your take on Drarry, but no rush. Happy to read some Dramione in the meantime :) Believe it or not, that was the pairing I started with when I first starting reading fanfiction. I didn't yet know the wonders of Drarry lol. I'm happy to read both pairings honestly, even if I don't write Dramione myself.

    I'm SO CLOSE to finishing another oneshot for the ASE collection. Hoping to post in the next day or two. Would love to know what you think! <3


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  • From Luckycharms on October 30, 2019

    This was a sweet chapter. Though I have to say that you put Oprah House when I think you meant Opera. My offer to beta still stands if you want to contact me and please don't take it the wrong way, you're story is great, I just want to help make it even better. I did also notice some similarities that I wanted to ask you about. Could you please email me? My email is on my profile.


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  • From LadyShire on October 30, 2019

    My dear you made me tear up on this chapter. I am glad that Hermione finally has gotten to see her parents. I am hoping that she will show them the love she has for Draco. The only thing I wish is that the chapter was longer. This chapter was so good that I didn't want it to end. The more I read the story the more I love the story. I hope there is another update soon. 


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  • From Thunderbird on October 29, 2019

    Great chapter! I really liked Draco's question at the beginning. It's a relly insightful one and it shows how they are just getting deeper and deeper with each other.

    I was looking forward to their reunion but that was kind of intense! Poor Hermione! I'm glad she didn't freak out too much on Draco or push him away. It's good that he still has the ability to comfort her.

    Soooo excited about her seeing her parents! Hopefully soon?

    I'm also very happy to hear that you have been checking things out on AO3. My bookmarks are kind of random and not super up to date lol. I mostly just read things once on there because there is so much. But I hope you found some things you enjoyed. Let me know if/when you decide to post there. I don't read a lot of Dramione honestly so I might not necessarily see it unless I know to look for it <3


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  • From LadyShire on October 20, 2019

    I really loved this chapter. I know it is hard for Draco to see Hermione get into hysterics. In time I believe he will be able to calm her down. My husband is the same as Draco. I shall wait on the edge of my seat for the next update as always. I see myself in Hermione the more this story goes. And that us a good/bad thing. Bad because I relive some past stuff. But mainly good because I have also have a man that does his beat to make it alright. You my dear have me on the edge of my seat with each chapter


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2019

    This is cruelty, cruelty, I say!  You're doing the 'going half of each new distance' toward a Granger reunion and it's making me nuts!

    ^_^


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  • From Luckycharms on October 18, 2019

    Love the ending! Though, if you are ever in need of a beta I am available to help out. Shoot me an email if you're interested. I left it in a review on my page not long ago :)


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  • From Thunderbird on October 11, 2019

    It was great to see Hermione get some bonding time with the girls. Especially when Pansy made a point of defending her later on. I'm glad you took some time to develop Hermione's other relationships, but I'm also really excited to see what happens when Draco gets back w!th her parents. Keep up the good work!

    Man, sounds like RL is really putting you through it right now. I hope things start to get easier soon. I know exactly what you mean about writing being an escape. Works well for me to, when I can find the time!

    If you're already on ff.net I would say definitely start posting there. The activity on this site has really fallen off in the last few years. Very few people bother reviewing, which is frustrating. I myself post on AO3, which has a very active community and is where I get most of my feedback. It also lets you reply directly to comments, so it's more like a conversation than the way reviews are done here. So that might be worth trying as well. Maybe I'll see you over there :)


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  • From Luckycharms on October 11, 2019

    I feel like I started reading this story awhile ago because when I started it, it sounded so familiar lol. Turns out I was right, and you have contiuned to keep going with it! I love that you didn't give up. I like the friendship between Pansy and Hermione. Not many stories, I'll admit even my own lol, allow Pansy to get to know the girl and vice versa. And I love Draco being all sweet and agreeing to watch a romanic movie if it makes Hermione happy. I'm sorry I have neglected to read most stories of the people who have reviewed my fics, but I am slowly getting around to it. Yours is one of the first on this site and truely, I really loved it. I can't wait to read more :) 


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