Reviews for Hermione's Keeper

BY : Moonddancer

  • From saxman66 on March 14, 2019


    Good to hear your back to full health. Hope things continue to go well health wise and otherwise. :D


    Somehow I missed Ch 17 when it 1st came out but caught up now. Interesting that they seems to have resolved the problem of the threat to their lives but still unsure what to do with Height. Not sure poisoning any vampires or werewolves is that fair however. ;) Plus if it did get out that they let some group of 'monsters' kill him that might just increase prejudiced against such people. On the other hand from what I know of the establishment – all too like in real life – its likely that he would escape pretty much scot free.


    Draco made a mess of that letter but I think Hermione is over-reacting a bit, although once he realised he had put a foot in it he should at least have attempted an apology rather than continue behaving like an idiot.


    A little surprised that Snape has let Lavender and Pansy actually into his house as it makes it pretty much certain that the truth about him still being alive will come out. Even more with him allowing Luna and Ginny to visit. Thought he might insist on them seeing her at some neutral point and relying on L&P to keep his secret.


    I wonder if Snape is going to come out of hiding and ending up as some sort of surrogate father as that seems to be what Draco needs to forget his own childhood.


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  • From saxman66 on February 21, 2019

    Well that was a twist. I wasn't expecting Snape to suddenly turn up still alive. Fits in with the interchange between him and Draco at the start of the chapter which should have given me at the least a strong hint. Also some interesting conversation between the two and I wonder how Hermione will react to being told she's now acting like a pure-bred witch.


    Hopefully the assorted creatures won't kill Height, at least not for a few years/decades. They could however take turns in making him pay. Not normally that vicious but considering what he's been doing. Although not sure what the wizarding world will think of that if/when they find out. They may well want to punish him themselves and are likely not to be happy with non-humans taking action against a wizard.


    Good to see Rita and George getting it together. :)


    Hope the shoulder is better soon. Take your time and don't push it as we can wait for the story. However definitely looks like an happy ending coming up just about everybody.


    One quick thought in that I wonder how much humble pie Ron will have to eat when he hears that Hermione is pregnant. That rather screws his argument for divorcing her and also raises questions about his fertility. ;)

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  • From VeltsuVI on February 19, 2019

    Yes, that's exactly what I waited to happen to him. 

    I hope your shoulder will get better.

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  • From Sage of Discord on February 17, 2019

    LOL the plot continues to thicken.

    Hmm, a black-eyed character in the woods?  *snicker*

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  • From saxman66 on February 16, 2019

    Well that interesting. Sounds like Rita is going to end up with a toy boy ;) but it could be good for both her and George.


    I wonder who has rescued Hermione? Sounds like someone she knows or possibly a close relative of someone. Presumably someone good in water and wondering what sort of water spirit, nymph, whatever but my general ignorance of the books is letting me down. Could be unrelated to George's suggestion and just by chance or their very quick off the mark and possibly a lot more numerous and organised than the human wizards realise. Although that would raise the question of of why Height hasn't had a well deserved accident already.


    Sounds like things are coming to a climax and the story will be resolved soon.


    Sorry to hear about the shoulder and hope its better soon. Try not to push things too hard and let it rest. We can all wait for new chapters.

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  • From saxman66 on February 12, 2019

    Well that seems pretty quick in terms of Hermione getting pregnant. I had the sneaky feeling once Hermione and Olivia went outside one of them was going to get kidnapped by Height. :(


    I'm not sure what Draco could do, especially in only 4 days even with his wealth. Also I'm not sure I would trust Height to keep his word if he thinks he can get away with it.

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  • From VeltsuVI on February 12, 2019

    Height is stupid, not only he taked Draco's fiancee and their baby, but that fiancee is warhero, Harry Potter's best friend and most intelligence witch in this age. He is going to hope that he would have something left himself to put front of dementor.

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  • From saxman66 on February 11, 2019

    Well you have been very busy. Yet another good chapter and a few more twists.


    Glad George is going to live as I thought he was dead. Can understand Rita's reaction when Corrine turned up however.


    Some good insights into personality and the way everybody has some uncertainties and flaws in their character with a lot of mistrust and fears.


    Sounds like its near the end as you say and the case against Height seems cast iron. Not only the kidnapping, of which Luna is a star witness, with supporting evidence from Ginny, but also the attempted murder of George. Coupled with further evidence from Dean about Height's long history of selling children into slavery and Corinne's background evidence. However as always I suspect there will be additional problems coming up as Height must have some realisation of the noose closing around him. Especially when he realises he can no longer find Corrine.


    Up to you as to a sequel although not sure what problems the group, or Hermione and Draco in particular, might run into next. Although think between them their likely to find something. ;)

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  • From StarrCrystal on February 11, 2019

    This fic is AMAZING! I need more!! I cant wait for the next chapter!

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  • From saxman66 on February 10, 2019

    Well that was a surprise in terms of Luna's rescuer. Given that she seems to have no reluctance about killing curses, although in those circumstances something I'm happy with but I think mage culture is less understanding and that IIRC she sided with Ron over the divorce she may not be totally friendly to Luna. Since the latter is a friend to both Hermione and Draco that could be a possible problem. However doubt it will be worse for Luna than where she was. Hopefully it might help bring the other Welseys back together with Harry and his friends, although if Ron has to admit he's responsible for the lack of a child that's likely to be difficult.


    Draco seems to have made a quick recovery. However he seems to have got Corinne thinking, although she might decide that keeping with Height could be the best bet. Keeping her brother prisoner is something that Height could use again Draco. He would be a huge hypocrite but that would be far from the worst of his behaviour.


    George's murder is bad news but to see Rita so active and positive was a pleasant surprise. She really needs to get away quickly however before Height recovers and I have no doubt who will be blamed for George's murder.


    That was a quick update as I only read the previous chapter yesterday evening.

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  • From VeltsuVI on February 09, 2019

    Answer for when i read that savior was Ginny: Ginny?... *Re-reading...* Ginny? *third time* Ginny? *Fully confused what now has happened to Luna?*

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  • From saxman66 on February 09, 2019

    Well that had two big surprises. I wasn't expecting Draco to overdo the cutting but he's obviously hurting more than any time before. Also while Darren's actions with Corinne was risky I did expect it to backfire like that. Actually three come to think of it with a 3rd player taking Luna. Unless given how calm she looked last chapter she's had some deeper plan which is now close to completion.


    I must admit Draco have Corinne's brother does sound rather too convenient and also given how cold blooded she is would she actually care?


    However it does seem like the pair have finally actually agreed about how much they care about each other and even gotten to an engagement although I would have to agree with Draco I think its going to be a rather volatile relationship, at least for the 1st few years.


    However Height is obviously a problem especially since he seems to have totally lost it and also seems to at least still think he's pretty much untouchable regardless of what he does.

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  • From Annecia89 on February 09, 2019

    I think Ron has her. I’m not sure why, but that’s what I feel. Yaayyy for the engagement!! I think him having her brother hostage is just the right amount of insane for this story. 😅😅

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  • From saxman66 on February 08, 2019

    Well that was interesting. ;) They finally got it together sexually but still have a distinctly dysfunctional relationship and not sure why Hermione was so tongue-tied when it came to talking to him afterwards.


    Draco's reaction seemed a bit OOT but then the insight into his family 'life' and the damage his father did to him emotionally explains a lot.


    Good news that Darren came through and doubled up very skilfully with his handling of Corrine the sectary, although if she knows as much as Height suggested she could be nervous about shopping her boss and exposing herself to charges.


    I am puzzled however as to when he said he doesn't like children? Weren't most of the ones he rescued earlier pretty young so wouldn't that sound a bit odd to Height?


    Sorry to hear some of Draco's behaviour was based on personal experience. :(


      Looking forward to seeing how things develop. :)

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  • From Annecia89 on February 08, 2019

    You had tears rolling down my face. How is she this careless with her words?! Knowing how sensitive he seems to be, I don’t get it. My heart broke for him: Poor Draco! 

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