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Reviews for The Wedding

By : Lizski
  • From ANON - lady malfoy on July 22, 2005
    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! mix it up a little though if you do write one...i love jealous snape, its so much more entertaining then happy snape. MORE BITE! Angsty, more angsty!!!!!!! and a fight..ooohhh make them have a fight!
    plz write a sequel you are an AWSOME author, i bet you could even give JKR a run for her money...if the HP books were about sex...
    WRITE ON
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  • From ANON - masami on June 20, 2005
    So this solves the eternal briefs or boxers question. Thanks for a fun story.
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  • From ANON - queenp on April 28, 2005
    I enjoyed reading the story, for the most part. The story was generally well done...the plot was good, the characterizations while not strictly canon were good, the emotions were realistic. However, it would be beneficial to rework it to correct spelling and typographical errors. There were a few spots that I found difficult because I was having to figure out what you were saying because fo the mistakes.
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  • From ANON - Bertha on March 30, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story. Please work on a sequal, with Lucius going back to his nasty roots. Thanks for the happy ending.
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  • From ANON - catpower on March 13, 2005
    Very enjoyable and light - I liked the clothing descriptions. I enjoyed your version of Lucius because in the films he is just so beautiful to look at and has such a sexy voice - it seems a waste of a gorgeous wizard that he has to be an extra-wicked death-eater. I'm sure I couldn't say no to a massage in the library from Lucius!
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  • From ANON - Maddy Riddle on May 07, 2004
    Lovely story. I like it a lot.
    Although I would like to read a sequel, I can understand your decision of stopping at that point... and this way both stories (this one and Lucius' Bookshelves) ended with similar scenes, the three of them saying goodbye at the door of Malfoy's Manor (although in one Severus leaves alone, and with Hermione in the other *grins*).

    I need to say that I love Lucius' Bookshelves more than this one. Not sure why. But after reading that one, I was missing the Lucius you portray there... and The Wedding helped me reading a little more of that character.
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  • From ANON - Liz on April 16, 2004
    okay, I think I was rather affected by Lucius' Bookshelves because, really, I read this story, thinking that it would be really great with an alternate version with Hermoine picking Lucius.. oh dear! :)

    Anyways, great story! I liked how you used the wedding plotline.. it's an interesting way to get HG/SS together. And there are far too many cliches at this point.. :)
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  • From ANON - Grill on February 14, 2004
    OhmyGOD! This is so BRILLIANT! I read a lot of Hermione/Snape-fics as well as Hermione/Lucius-fics, but this is definitely one of the best I've ever read! This one, along with "Lucius' Bookshelves", is so great! I think you're doing both Snape and Lucius well in character, because after all, we who read the books can't know exactly how they would behave or how they'd think in different circumstances, but the way you describe it is very muike ike I imagine it myself, so it's great! Brilliant fic! I don't know, it just s tha that a sort of drama containing Hermione, Snape and Lucius always workes out well... Wondering who'll get the girl in the end and so on... :)
    (And just as a final note, I don't think I've ever read anything quite so beautiful as when Snape tried to "scare" Hermione in his room and lost control, that was amazing!)
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  • From ANON - Amy on January 15, 2004
    What about Harry? I mean I absolutely adored the story but what happened to Harry? He was so jealous he d idnt just disappear did I t I think it would be good if someone wrote a story telling what Harry did to try and get Herm back.....or stop Sev from seeing her? I dunno it just seemed like he was really jealous and knowing Harry he wouldnt just s it around waiting for something ot happen hed try and MAKE it happen ya know? So i think itd be a cool sequel or w hatnot...
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  • From ANON - Eternal Enchantress on January 03, 2004
    wow, this was really good, i generally read loads of these fics but this one was really well written. i hope to read more our our stories in the future.


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  • From ANON - Gabriele on October 24, 2003
    Lovely story! Don
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  • From ANON - Persephone on October 21, 2003
    Well done, lovely story!
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  • From ANON - deedee on October 20, 2003
    Poor Lucius:( I feel bad for the guy since he now realizes that he is actually alone in his life. Reality really sucks.

    I'm glad you gave this story a happy ending, because I like them too:) If you write a sequel, will Harry be the conflict in the story because he can't settle on the idea that she wants Severus instead of him? I can see Harry starting a lot of trouble. Well whatever you decide, I'm sure it will be fun to read:)
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 19, 2003
    ::sighs:: Beautiful, just beautiful! Romantic in the style of regency romances. : )

    And I *like* your Lucius. He is definitely different than the Lucius we usually see, but I *can* see him getting to that point after hitting rock bottom and basically losing everything except his money, and then realized that just maybe there are something worth more than the cold comfort of money.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - bansh on October 19, 2003
    "there could be a sequel" Words of hope for a poor drowning reader to cling to! Seriously though, incredible job! I love it!!! You write Severus and Lucius so well... Beautiful story! (Though don't get me started on ending things right at the *beginning*... lol) Wonderful job, I can't wait for more from you!
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