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Reviews for The Wedding

By : Lizski
  • From ANON - jen on October 19, 2003
    and it ends well too.

    bravo
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  • From ANON - OzRatbag2 on October 19, 2003
    This is rather good, although I do think you've sanitised Lucius a bit too much. There isn't even a curl of the lip with his private thoughts about the 'mudblood' and it does seem a bit OOC, given the descriptions of Lucius in canon.

    Other than that, the URST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) between Severus and hermione is very well and and the fireworks promise to be spectacular.

    I'll be interested to see how you tie this all together.
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  • From ANON - Scumcious on October 19, 2003
    Wow! It's a really great story! Keep it up!!!!
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  • From ANON - deedee on October 19, 2003
    I just read all those chapters and they're highly enjoyable. I love the naughty, seductive Lucius type. When a man knows what to do with his hands and is good at it, it's a clear indication that he will be good in bed:) Deep down inside, I think Snape was jealous the first time he saw Hermione and Lucius together. It's interesting that Lucius threated Snape. Why is he feeling protective of her now? Is it because he sees her as his interest and then Snape comes in and is intruding on his so-called possession of Hermione? Maybe Snape should've tauciuucius up on his offer to share her. I can all ready picture it, they're going to end up having a wizarding duel in the library. Those poor book:( j/k:) Now since Lucius knows that Snape is a hypocrite, I think Lucius should pursue Hermione even more (if not to get laid, at least just to piss off Snape):)

    Your right about weddings. They are so much work and can be awful:p The best way to get through them is in a alcohol induced haze, especially if a lot of the guests don't get along. It also helps to have the guests mildly drunk with alcohol, full with food, and dancing to music just so they forget to kill eachother. Please write more, I can't wait to see what happens.

    I'm glad you decided to write "Lucius' Bookshelves". A good Hermione and Lucius fic is hard to find.
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  • From ANON - LilyMalfoy on October 19, 2003
    I'm loving this story. Especailly the dycs ocs of LM/HG/SS. Its interesting watching the three of them interact at dinner.
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  • From ANON - Persephone on October 19, 2003
    I LOVE this story. Wonderfully well written characters all round, but especially Lucius and Severus! Really enjoying them bickering over Hermione. More house points for you!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 19, 2003
    Oh my! I just had to tell you that this thoroughly enjoyable. I noticed your comments about Lucius, and I have to say that so far, I find him completely believable as a post Voldemort downfall, post time in azkaban Lucius. He's still arrogant. He's still plotting. He's not trying to marry Hermione, he's trying to seduce her. lol I can't see as how that would be counter to *any* of his beliefs.

    Severus is well written here too.)

    )

    LOVED Draco's comments including the loose knickers part to Hermione. LOL I can *so* see Draco saying that kind of thing. This Draco anyway.

    Can't wait for more.

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - jen on October 18, 2003
    I like that you're putting up chapters fast... but
    MORE MORE MORE :)
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  • From ANON - Arsinoe on October 18, 2003
    Yes. I firmly believe Lucius' hands are capable of great things!
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  • From on October 18, 2003
    Mmm...I forgot how incredibly delicious your Lucius is in this story! It's even better the second time around. :)
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  • From ANON - Arsinoe on October 17, 2003
    This is such a fun read!

    I didn't have time to finish my remarks about weddings in a previous review, so to continue: Since large weddings are by definition evil (at least in my opinion), surely there are all sorts of things that can go wrong.
    Surely there are some stupid and humiliating wizarding customs that involve the maid-of-honor and best man?

    I love your surly but doting and sexy Severus, and your smooth but menacing (and sexy) Lucius. And the idea of Hermione playing with transfiguration with classic dress styles is delightful!
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  • From ANON - Joga on October 17, 2003
    Great story! I don't trust Lucius. The cunning bastard must have something else up his sleeve.
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  • From ANON - Ahriamanne on October 17, 2003
    Oh Lizski you rascal, there was I reading your fic from start to sh osh only to find it doesnt finish, it doesnt even get beyond thought.......OOOH I really need some more, what sort ofctioction does this dress get, what is LM up to? what is SS thinking? what happens next............................
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  • From Yawn on October 17, 2003
    Man, I'm this close to jumping off the Ron/Hermione ship and crossing over to Snape/Hermione. Both pairings are equally great. Snape and Hermione do have nice chemistry in this. Love the story!
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  • From ANON - jen on October 17, 2003
    I'm impressed. Can't wait for the next installment.
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