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Reviews for In the Eyes of the Enemy

By : Hunnypeach
  • From ANON - Sexy Relly on October 14, 2005
    This story was merely perfect, please update ASAP, cant wait. Really cant wait!
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  • From ANON - Kayce on October 08, 2005
    The story, in all, was not bad. It didn't have a bad plotline, but it could have been reinforced better. However, it was hard to continue reading it because I found LOADS of gramatical errors. Should you write again, I suggest getting it beta'd. But, as I said, I enjoyed parts of it.
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  • From ANON - Jaiden McKenzie Carter on October 01, 2005
    i luv it...please do another one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!! THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST ENDING EVER!!! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!!! Let me explain before you think I am a blood-thirsty lunatic. Okay, I was downloading Super Mario Bros. MP3's, and I was curently downloading the World Clear Fanfare.....and it sounds al triumphant like. Well, at that point, it had started playing, because the crap-ass site I was getting it from makes it take forever to download, and it automatically plays when it is finished. At the same time, I had read that they went to the hospital wing and found Madam Pomfrey dead with a knife in her back. You can only imaging what the hell whas going through my head at that point. It was the mst hilarious thing I have said in the past 24 hours. Well, there was the fact that I was hanging out with my brother, and he started poking me with his feet....and whenever he does that....I get really disturbed and make wigh pitched squeals and screams, well, today, I squealed out the word 'seatbelt'. Yeah...I am lame....but I can't wait to read the sequal!
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  • From ANON - Bob Saget on August 17, 2005
    THAT IS FUCKING AMAZING!!!! "Hermione gasped as the reality of all that had been said finally hit her
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  • From ANON - SYNAPSE on August 02, 2005
    its a little OOC on Draco's part---- but nevertheless, very entertaining.

    i love the twist in Hermoine's heritage----but a lot of loopholes. Molly and Hermoine's mom's age couldn't be of much different. at least herm's mom could have been Molly's sister instead.

    keep on writing!!!! and thnx, hope u finnish this fic.

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  • From ANON - Adriana on April 17, 2005
    Thank you for this incredible fanfic!!! I'm from Spain and I was reading the story straight away, so many hours that my eyes hurt. But it worth it!!! I hope you understand my review! I'm better
    reading English than writing it!!! ;o)
    Good luck!! I will probably be back to read the secuel!!


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  • From ANON - sbkar on April 15, 2005
    Pretty good... I'm hoping to keep getting such good chapters... and good characterizations!!!
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  • From ANON - geme on November 25, 2004
    great story ive read it before but like it so muchh i had to read it again
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  • From ANON - alexandra on November 22, 2004
    I'll kill you.... how could you do this, I was happy and that they can go on with thie life and be happy.
    byt nooo, you had to make my cry, didn't you? grrr.
    i read the story from beginning to end, and belive me, I HATE THE END!!!!!
    fiks it, make them happy, pleace, my tears wont stop...

    i didn't like the start that good, byt the story became very intresting, and i began to love it.
    but you've destroyed the happy endig. so the 11 years lather part, I won't read it (if you're ritten it), because then i''ll know how long it was til they found the kids. they will find them 5 minutts after the story that i've read, and the kids will be alive, and they will be happy for the rest of their life
    just let me live in my dream world, or bether, make that real in this story, pleace I beg you on my knees. . . "sniff"
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  • From ANON - Jewel on October 31, 2004
    what?! you dare leave it there?! *bursts out crying* i hate cliffies....
    update asap.. please?
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  • From ANON - Sassy_Girl on August 29, 2004
    Wow! Thats all I can say, that is definately the best story I've read on this site so far! I'm going to do a search for Secrets in the Eyes of the Enemy now, but if it isn't out yet PLEASE emai whe when it comes out!
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  • From ANON - kate on July 24, 2004
    Hey,

    OMG! Great story ever.... the the ending!!!! Is there a sequel? Another chapter? Oh god please tell me!!!
    Lol, please email me or something to tell me!
    Youre such a great writer!

    ~kate
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  • From Grimsister on January 15, 2004
    BAD! BAD! That was....horrible..terrible. I...I....OH!
    So I cant sleep and I decide to read a fic right? I search randomly under the name Draco (cause he's so darned hot) And I find one that not only has Hermione in it (my fav pairing) But it is also complete and I wont have to wait on pins and needles for another update. So I coast threw all 16 chapters, and its good. Great in fact, I'm really enjoying it, and am really into it. Then I settle myself down for a nice happy ending. I have white lace in my head and rose petals, but what do I get? Blood. Yeah, I almost died. My mind is too slow at five in the morning to make that kind of agustment. Oh my....So know I have to drive back to school tomarrow and buy books and all that rot. In the mean time I'll be thinking about this fic. And the fact that the sequel has only four chapters in it and prolly isn't finished. Well, you can be asured that you will hear from my as I review and beg shamlessly for more chapters. Gods, I hope your happy. That was a cruel stunt. I'm going to go cry now...

    Oh yeah, and just to make myself clear...I LOVED it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - mickey on December 15, 2003
    awesome story
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