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Reviews for A Fool\'s Prophecy

By : Angel7483
  • From slygriff21 on January 27, 2004
    This is a t stt story so far. Please update again soon. I LIKE IT! I LIKE IT!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on January 27, 2004
    aha the plot thickins lol this such a great story I can't wait to find out what haoppens................................. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - ran on January 27, 2004
    Prophes a s a verb. You want "prophecy". Having a misspelled word in the title is a turn-off, you better fix it.
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  • From ANON - tammy on January 23, 2004
    very exciting so far, I love the HG/SS weg stg stories, especially where both have had no relationships prior. Please say you will make Severus a passionate lover!! Can't see him any other way!!

    Waiting, Waiting, Waiting! :))

    Tammy
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  • From ANON - CynIng on January 22, 2004
    You are awesome....I love the storyline and I got all giggly as reading. PLEASE WRITE MORE AND SOON!!! I am on this site like...most of my time everyday!!! PLEASE!!! BTW My fiance...well...He's a blonde green-eyed Snape...Seriously...It's hard to resist reading these stories about S and and Hermione for me....WRITE MORE AND SOON!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Topaz on January 22, 2004
    I don't know why, but I love the HG/SS fanfics where they are forced to get married. Since they are both very stubborn intellectual people, the only way that they would admit their feelings is when they are obviously cornered with facing each other on a daily basis. Good story and I look forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on January 20, 2004
    I think your story is wonderful....I suspect Hermione is a little (or a lot) in Love with Severus as it is.....which is why she was the discussion held in a few months.....and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - tikina on January 20, 2004
    Great fic.
    Can't wait to read more of it!
    ~Tikina~
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 16, 2004
    oh! You should *definitely* "bother". LOL A unique beginning is a prize thing in fandom -- something you've managed to do. Besides, that's an evil little cliff you've left us with. LOL It'd be unusually cruel punishment to leave it there. ::grins::


    Kiri
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  • From Shelob on January 16, 2004
    Something is wrong with your punctuation marks. All the ' and " appear as ? on the fic. I am no computer type person so I have no idea why it is doing that. Your fic is the only one that does that.

    OK, that aside it is an interesting idea but I think you ought to flesh it out more and slow down a little in your writing. I tend to rush in my fic as well and it can be tough. I have rewritten my first couple of chapters several times already (and plan on more). Don't get frustrated, you are doing fine. Just every once in awhile as you add chapters take a look at the previous chapters and see what you can do to make them better. Gradually, it will become easier for you and your fic will become better as you go.

    Keep writing. :)
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