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Reviews for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - Sinaira on May 25, 2003
    I solemny, almost never cry when reading a book/ story or looking a movie, but girl did i cry... That's so sad and at the same time i find it great. It's really goes down to the core... I am at a loss of words to describe how i liked it...
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 25, 2003
    With a title like Paradise Lost, I shouldn't have been hoping for a happy ending. And I guess in a way, it's realistic ending, if not the ending I personally want But But then again, do we ever truely *want* the endings where the boy doesn't get the girl? Heroes shouldn't die and the hooker turned into an accountant shouldn't be abandoned by her saviour, no matter how screwed up it is. But of course, real life doesn't play out like a Pretty Woman script, so I find myself having to accept that this was an extremely well written and realistic story.

    But they should have wound up together! Well, I know it would have never worked in this frame, but.. *sniffle* He died.

    Okay - Enough. Thank you for an enjoyable trip; I hope you continue to write another fanfic because you are totally gifted!

    Thanks,
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Caryn on May 25, 2003
    I can't say I am happy about the conclusion, but at the same time cannot imagine it going any other way. I would be lying if I didn't admit to bawling through the ending. I reread the whole thing this morning and was thrilled to find an update just as I was finishing. It was wonderful as a work in progress, but breathtaking as a completed piece. Well done you you and to your er. Cr.
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  • From ANON - Amelia on May 23, 2003
    Oh my goodness - what a superbly melancholy, heart rending latest chapter - I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Kim on May 19, 2003
    Oh, so good, but so sad. Please don't let this be the end! You never stop amazing me with your style. Thanks for update.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on May 17, 2003
    You are the NC-17 Snapefics Goddess,without doubt.I love all your fics and would read with pleasure again and again even you wrote hundreds of them.I`m not only person who means so-have met many fans in net they`d written you are the one of the best "citones"ever seen.The fact above all is you have the extraordinary erotic imagination,arousing the readers as well as you are the talented writer with both marvellous and eccentric ideas of plots.Your fics,including the last one are not only WPW but also the well-written stories with my favourite sense of humour and the interesting developed storylines.It regards this fic too.I like your Severus-the nasty,rude and very sexy git-perfectly kept in Cannon character.And this particulary story about the former prostitute is destructively curious for me-honestly saying I`m dying for impatience and can`t bear waiting what will happen in next chapter.I`ve just read the enthusiastic review of your fic where the author called it "9 1/2 Weeks"in Wizarding World-I think you`ll be pleased with this comparison,won`t you? I`ve tried to imagine the continuation many times and had some paralell ideas.Besides I`m still waiting for the "meaty","citric" scenes of love-making*sighs*despite of the need of cold showers however*Last but not least-I like your fics because unlike the most of fans I prefer rather OFC/SS than HG/SS,nevertheless I usually read either of pairings.Regards with hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sarah T. on May 17, 2003
    Great Chapter! This isn't the end is it? I sure hope not!!!!! You really are my favorite fic writer. I can't wait to read your next chapter/story. Thanks
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  • From ANON - april grey on May 16, 2003
    I have had such a great time reading this story. Thank you so very much.
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  • From ANON - Steph on May 16, 2003
    Oh my God! I hated this chapter very much, and I loved it even more. It hurt me, desperately, to read it. I am anxious to know where you are going with it, but frightened, as well. I can't imagine how much Snape must have hurt to say goodbye to her, but the way he did it, was endearing. Infuriating, and endearing. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. It is my favorite. During this chapter...I cried from the description of what the two and a half years had done to him, all the way to the last word. You are a beautiful story teller, and have a wonderful way with expressing emotions and details. That is what makes your story so wonder
    St
    Steph
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  • From ANON - Zee on May 16, 2003
    OH please! Oh please! Tell me this IS NOT the end!!!!!!!

    I am actually crying for Snape!

    Zee
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on May 16, 2003
    Hi,

    I wanted to let you know that I love this story. I was glad to see another chapter. There isnt many stories that make me cry but yours did...twice. I love the fact that Celia didelieelieve that he was tired of her. I wonder what and how will he look for her again.

    Keep up the brilliant writing...looking forward to the next part.

    Red Writing Hood
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  • From ANON - Jillian on May 16, 2003
    OMG what a wonderful Chapter! I'm honestly crying because of the sadness of the situation between them. At first I thought that this would be a smutty story, but I now see that it has developed into something that goes far beyond that. It is wonderful and i hope you don't leave us with this cliff hanger for to long!
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  • From ANON - P. S. Robertson on May 16, 2003
    SOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How utterly heartbreaking!
    Though I have not reviewed any of the other chapters I just had to this time!
    All your work, I think, is quite impressive!
    Once again, SOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Keep up the fantastic work!
    Pam
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 16, 2003
    You made me cry! That wasn't very nice. I hope you update quickly, because I *hate* sad endings. *sniffles* Seriously, your chapter was very sad. They both deserve *some* happiness.

    Well written and beta'd - can your beta get you to post another chapter quickly?

    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2003
    This is terrific...and needs to be updated :)

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