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Reviews for A Winter Tale

By : Bylle
  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 07, 2004
    absolutely lovely chapter.. oh i so want Hermione to have a kid. My heart still aches from the thought of her becoming a widow

    :)
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 06, 2004
    Oh joy!! a couple of chapters every day.. with each one of them i like the story even more. great job. but one thing makes me really sad- i don't want Albus to die and Hermione to become a widow, that would break my heart!
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  • From ANON - Lucyferina on June 06, 2004
    still me, i found your story here and i read the chapters that you still have to publish on the other side :) they are really good, i like the idea of Hermione as a swan, still a bit disturbed by the age-gap, i understand that love is 'blind' and there are lots of different loves out there but still... 150 years are quite a lot... another thing, a question Hermione seems fond of Severus, now i know that Albus tolde her that he won't be there for her, to see her a 'woman', are you planning to put them together at the end? i mean sev and herms? well, sorry, you mst be tired of my reviews :) i promise i won't annoy you for a while... until the next chapter :))))
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  • From ANON - dryade on June 06, 2004
    great first chapter. read tons of marriage fics but this really got my attention. what a twist! i'm so curious to see how you continue this,
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 06, 2004
    I knew she would end up as a swan!!! great chapters :) It's pure bliss to have new chapters every day. keep up the wonderful job
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  • From ANON - Uli on June 06, 2004
    Hey. I've started reading the day you started posting and I have to admit I'm hooked. I mean I read a few Hermione/Albus fics before but they were all done very poorly. You managed to portray their relationship with all the problems and ups and downs very well and most important believable.
    It is also awesome that you post that often...great that one doesn't have to wait long to know what will happen, though I have to admit I would gladly wait as long as neccessary for an update.
    Well thanks for writing, Uli
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  • From ANON - snapes whore on June 06, 2004
    I must say that this last chapter has improved a lot in terms of grammar you must have found a good beta reader good for you by the way great story please continue.
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 05, 2004
    Another chapter in only a few hours.. it's my lucky day ;) any chance for another one any time soon?
    great chapter!!

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  • From ANON - alibarbara on June 05, 2004
    The way you took a allready quite abustorytory challenge and a couple that is really not easy to make not sound sqicky is incredibly fantasic. The story is very refreshing. Your character discriptions are wonderful and I absolutely love that you update so often. Plese keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 05, 2004
    Ohh I love your story soooo much!!! please please update soon
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 05, 2004
    Great chapter i absolutely love it. i just have one question for you will AD ans HG have sex while he is his normal self.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - Digger on June 04, 2004
    I must admit, the first time I read through I was disturbed. Then I read iain,ain, holding the image of the young richard harris in my head... and it all made perfect sense to me! (not least because he was wicked-hot)

    Beautifully written and wholly refreshing.
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  • From ANON - redsugg on June 04, 2004
    Great story the best i have read so far and i hope that you update very very soon i can't wait to see what else will happen if you ever need a beta reader i would be more than happy to help you.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - Anonymous Russian on June 04, 2004
    They are not uskauska dolls dear but Mastranka. Babyuska is the russian word for grandmother. If you are going to use something from another culture at least use it right.
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  • From ANON - bagheera on June 04, 2004
    Nice story! Quite angsty, but understandably so. Also the first marriage challenge story that got me to read it :D What I especially like about it is the fact that Dumbledore will die / think he'll die. It gives it that air of ... melancholy and tragedy...
    By the way... as you're not a native speaker, are you German? Some of your mistakes sound quite like mine ;P Keep it on!
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