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Reviews for Joined at the Hip

By : jeslynnighthawk
  • From ANON - Lydia on May 28, 2004
    This story sound interesting and I'm lookinf forward to seeing where it goes.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on May 28, 2004
    I like the first chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 28, 2004
    I really like this so far!! Thanks for responing to the challenge!! I can't wait to see how they deal with it. To be honest, I never even got that far when I was thinking about it. But so far, this is great. How fast do you think your updates will be?
    ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - Lucie on May 28, 2004
    A nice beginning. I did not read about that challenge before, but this looks promising.

    Your story is written in a nice flow, the mixture of description and speech is making for an entertaining read. The only thing I would recommend is to have a beta- or proofreader check for typos.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 28, 2004
    Well I have to say I was a bit worried because I too had a very strange and not so sexy vision of both of them fused together. I like how you have set it up so far and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on May 28, 2004
    Great start on what promises to be a good read! One thing that bugs me though (a kind of pet peeve) is this: IT IS VIAL NOT VILE. VIAL is what you store potions in. VILE means that disgusting or gross. Otherwise, fantastically written. Keep up the good work! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes. Again, though, VIAL NOT VILE. :)
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  • From ANON - The Eighth Weasley on May 28, 2004
    ooh, this looks like fun. I can't wait to see you have Hermione act all nagging towards Snape. Do continue.
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  • From ANON - alicat on May 28, 2004
    Well your off to a good start, and after reading all the challenge requirements and options I can't wait to read more I really hope you update soon I look forward to reading more. XOXO
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