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Reviews for The Law of Horus

By : Harpy
  • From ANON - Yavonna Han on June 29, 2004
    Hey. I am enjoying your story. I like the humor in it and the different twist of the mariage law. Like your part at the end from Matilda (i think thats the name of the move) Did you notice that Aunt marge in 3rd moie was the same actress in Matilda?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2004
    This is not a flame - mera sua suggestion. If you don't have a beta, please, consider getting one. I saw quite a few errors that are not terrible, but bad enough to put me off your story. ie - using their instead of they're. Where Dumbledore is telling Remus 'their serious' should be 'they're serious.' Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Raija on June 28, 2004
    How on earth will Lucius do anything as Severus and hermione have consumated their marriage. Hermione is with triplets...over three months pregnant. Lucius can't do anything. can he?
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  • From ANON - June W on June 28, 2004
    Hey, no fair leaving on a cliffhanger!!! How can Lucius Malfoy challenge when she is three months pregnant with three magical babies? If Draco's wife isn't pregnant, then she should be given to someone else by now -- unless they already killed Draco's wife?
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