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Reviews for Bonds of Necessity

By : Kakasmai

From ANON - Zafaran on January 01, 2007
It's a pity your muse went away on this story. You've got an intriguing beginning, and I would love to find out what happens next, and if they can manage to actually reach a happily-ever-after. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to come back to this story someday. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
Hey, interesting plot and a very well written story!!! I like the way harry left them all behind and how defiant he is!!! It suits his charakter. I think, if he is truly as strong as he should be and with the history of the two, that this is the right way for the plot and I hope harry continues to fight against this manipulations!!! If he hates snape so much, perhaps he would prefer death over the life with snape. The question is if they can convince him, that this would not be the right thing to do. I would rella like to read more!!! So update soon!!!
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From ANON - Demon on November 08, 2005
HOT!!!!! please update soon this is amazing, good work
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From ANON - Jess on October 27, 2005
I love it! I can't wait to see what happens!
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From ANON - Woo hoo on October 19, 2005
Great chapter! I'm glad I read this.
I love the continued hatred in the Harry/Snape relationship, and I LOVE that Snape is unyielding about being the top. He wants the relationship with Harry, but he also demands it be on his terms. Fantastic.
Very, very hot scene. Wonder how angry Harry's going to be when he's himself again?
Flashback scenes-- well, we certainly can see their first night. How did Harry get embroiled in this? Was he physically forced, coerced? How did he react immediately afterwards?
I love embittered Harry.
And ITA aobut Half-Blood Prince.
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From ANON - sethian on October 18, 2005
I really love your story, and I sincerely hope you're going to continue it seeing it has lots of potential. I hope Severus and Harry will start a new relationship on new basis. :) they always make a good couple in the end don't they ^.^
Sethian
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From ANON - Ajax on October 17, 2005
Please write more!
(but It is not called organisms, but orgasms.... ;-)
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From ANON - Kat Potter on October 17, 2005
I really like this story! It's well written, except i noticed a lot of words were in the wrong tense and stuff like that.

But otherwise i really like it and hope you update soon! Poor Sev! Harry can't see that he wants him! And yet if Sev wasn't so stubborn about being dominant then meybe he could.... well i like it and i want to read more! SOON! PLZ ;P
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From ANON - lemonade on October 16, 2005
Okay, had to reread and caught your author's notes. As for book 6, well... I for one didn't want Snape to be a true villain. Nowadays fanfiction is the only way I get to see Snape be what I had hoped he'd be. Let YOUR Snape inspire you. He's quite interesting. ;D

I would expect Harry to be quite pissed off at Snape for what he did in the tower, as much as that seems to be all Harry ever wanted to begin with. (and it looks like a desperate Snape thinks the only way he would get that chance was by force) Seems to me that Snape has quite some making up to do, and I'd love to hear the explaination on why he had held back from Harry before, essentially driving him away. It's quite sad that the tower rape was Harry 's first and only experience with Snape actually 'GIVING' to him. The only flashbacks that seem necessary would be the ones that illustrate the difference between what they had before and what Snape would give to him now that he's had some years to kick himself over his foolish choices. You showed us quite a bit of the backstory with a few well written sentences, so maybe long exposition into backstory would be ill advised. But I'm sure if you choose to do it, it would be interesting. Speaking of... you write wonderfully. The emotions are clear and you don't seem to be changing your characters randomly to suit the end of your story. That's my pet peeve, and you were wise enough to give some room for your plot to do whatever you want. You should get a beta, though. It would help with just the technical bits and with fewer mistakes your story would be a perfect read!
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From ANON - lemonade on October 16, 2005
I remember reading this, it's been a long time. I'm glad you haven't abandoned it. I'd love to find out how it ends. Please continue.
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From ANON - Amaya on October 16, 2005
I'm so glad you finally updated. I was scared you would not keep writing and I really love what you have so far. I want to molest this new chapter!!! I really like seeing a stubborn and angry Harry. I don't read many fics where he is like that and it is really refreshing. I really like how dominate you have made Snape. I'm so happy you have already added the sex. I was very interested to see it in this fic. I'm becoming addicted to Harry being so suborn and adding that to the sex made it so hot. I really loved that sex scene!!! I loved how forceful Snape was and yet he seemed more interested in Harry's pleasure than his own. I have to wonder though. Harry does not seem like he liked the sex a lot during their marriage. I guess I'm wondering how Snape was able to get Harry to touch him and even suck him if Harry thought of the sex as a duty. Also I kind of see oral sex as more of a dominate than submissive thing. At least in gay sex. The one giving the oral sex seems to me the one in control. But maybe I just liking seeing dominates more concerned with the pleasure of their submissives.

I'm loving the sex so far and if you do flash backs I would love for you to make a few of them ones that involved their sex in the past. Maybe their first time together or times that really had an effect on Harry or Snape. I don't really want to see this turn into a sappy fic either but I don't think the last chapter was really becoming that way. I liked seeing Snape caring for Harry as long as he stays in character for the most part. As for what else to write about, well I'm never good with that kind of thing. I love seeing Harry fighting against it so I don't want to see him give into anything easily and I really want to see more sex between them. I can't wait to find out Harry's reaction when he wakes up. It might be interesting to see Harry try to run away again from Snape. I have always loved chases.

Please try and update sooner this time!!!!
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From ANON - Noted on October 16, 2005
the beatle black eyes (The Beatles were British singers back in the 60s. "Beetle" is an insect, often black.)
Severus
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From ANON - fw on October 16, 2005
kick ass, so they do have some feelings for each other. Or at least snape has feelings for Harry. Small feelings at least, calling him by his first name and all. I wonder if Harry will be angry when he wakes up?
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From ANON - Starlit on July 29, 2005
You need to update PLEASE!!!!!! I love the story now all you need to do is finish it. Please, please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Amaya on May 28, 2005
I love your story so much. I am an angst addict. ^_^ So all this dark drama stuff really draws me in. I am glad it will get happier though. As much as I love angst I prefer endings that are of a happier nature.

Man Harry seems to have anger management problems. ^_^! I don't mind though. I like seeing him in a different light. He has been hurt and betrayed. It is nice to read a story were Harry is not so submissive to a hard fate but instead rebels and fights against it. I was glad they cleaned the smoke out of his lungs. When I figured out it was him smoking I was like noooooo. @_@ Now it just represents this path of self destruction he seems to have chosen for himself. Ron's death made me a little sad but it adds into Harry's pain and also gives you a glimpse of Harry's history with Snape and how lonely Harry must have felt with him. Man does he ever have something against Albus. @_@! Can't blame him but now I feel sorry for Albus. I guess that is what he gets for being so manipulative.

I really love your writing style. Your descriptions are extremely beautiful and creative. I can't wait to read more. I want to see how Harry and Snape react to each other and learn more about this dark past of theirs.

Please update soon!!!
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