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  • From ANON - Hambares on July 23, 2005
    Bring on the warm and fluffy! The boys deserve it!
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  • From ANON - amanda on July 23, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - chibi on July 23, 2005
    When are you going to add the next chapter? This is a really good story, and I can't wait for it to continue. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shaddow on June 28, 2005
    The last paragraph is a bit confusing
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 28, 2005
    great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - ScarletTearsOfHope on June 28, 2005
    That was absolutely beautiful.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on June 27, 2005
    Yay yay yay!!! I love Fluffy OOC stuff! Cannot WAIT! Cute little fluffy plot bunnies, yay!

    The scene with remus was so sweet, I love how he treats Harry. And the ending of that chapter was just adorable, cant wait for more

    - Jess
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  • From ANON - CC on June 21, 2005
    Nice but that last bit seemed to happen way too fast.. . although perhaps that was your point. Looking forward to the future. As for my suggestion about the traits- if you reread the review you'll see I wasn't suggesting that those traits didn't also refer to Severus; rather I was suggesting that the order in which they were presented [and the dominant ones] pointed more to Remus than Snape if another character was to try distinguishing between them. And I am speaking as someone who is a psychologist. I don't really like to put my e-mail out there -- okay paranoid yes, but I read 1984 in the 6th grade -- if your e-mail is up on the site, I will write to you and give you mine.
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  • From ANON - Shaddow on June 20, 2005
    Not quite the reaction I was going for - but hey you can't have everything. Please update and I wanna see more Duncan/ Sev interaction. And where is Duncan's soul, the pink bit and the bit that was alive in Harry's mind, now?
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 18, 2005
    This is really good. Typical Snape behaving like that still. Lol. Hope the baby's born ok and Molie Voldie doesn't cause trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 18, 2005
    This is really good. Typical Snape behaving like that still. Lol. Hope the baby's born ok and Molie Voldie doesn't cause trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 18, 2005
    Is this the end? I hope not!!!! You have to tell us about Duncan more and Hermione and Remus must have something going on and Harry and Severus have to get really close, like in body, mind and spirit and Dumbledore has to eat more lemon drops or something...... IT CAN'T END HERE!

    Besides, I get a real kick reading Zak/Ivan's (when he's there?) responses. Someone's got to write those two into a story somehow, ROFLOL! They are too precious!!!!

    Thanks for reviewing our reviews, it means a lot to have some kind of response from the author. I read the reviews and most are thoughtful and the writer has taken the time to really understand the nuances of the story.

    Great job, I'll keep looking for your stuff. Say Hi to Zak and Ivan for me, although I'm too old for them, even if I were a male!!! LMAO! They are truly unique characters.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on June 17, 2005
    Ooh yay he's awake, he's awake! So are Remus and Hermione going to get together now too? There so cute together, i think lol.

    I cant wait to see what happens once Duncan is born! Love it! - Jess
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  • From ANON - CC on June 08, 2005
    Interesting idea. Good story. There are alot of americanisms as well as idiomatic speech that I think is somewhat off. For instance, Snape saying 'okay' as opposed to 'very well' or 'all right'- remeber his age and bearing as well as his general speech pattern. Also, if duality is going to be the deciding clue between Snape and Remus, I think the obvious choice there is Remus not Snape. Actually almost all of those charavteristics could fit the werewolf too. I think you would do better choosing another 'oooh' factor and then explaining why this one means Snape rather than Remus or why that particular combination of characteristic does. I feel it is more the addition of authority and justice that indicates Snape rather than Lupin.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 08, 2005
    What can I say? Really cool. Hope no one's got a problem with Sev and Harry being together. Hope to see some romance between them soon. Hope they get Moldie Voldie outta Harry's head soon. Looking forward to reading more.
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