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Reviews for Flawed Chemistry

By : Prentice
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Hooked on June 10, 2005
    I think it is a shame that you have had negative feedback. I have enjoyed the first part of this and you have me hooked to find out what Hermione is brewing and what will happen when she comes out of the dungeon. I really hope you post again soon. Unfortunately with this being fan-fiction, the review process is open to everyone, whether they have something constructive to say or not. Ignore all nasty comments - this is about what you write not who you are. As you said, if it was about you personally then you would be writing to become a public figure. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - waseom on May 07, 2005
    I just found your story and I thoroughly enjoyed what you've written so far. I didn't find your "skipping around" all that confusing, and I actually think it's a unique idea. I would get tired of it if everyone did it, but your idea is novel. I like it.

    I would like to disagree with DawnEB though. I don't think posting is an invitation at all. I think posting should be considered a privilege by the reader. I am usually a reader, and with a really well-written story such as this one, I consider it an honor to be allowed to read it. I have actually yanked a story because of flames; I had a novel idea as well, different from yours, Prentice, but a unique idea all the same, and people didn't know how to appreciate it. They didn't flame me, but almost every single review included a complaint about the part of the story I felt most proud of, so I took it down. I figured that if they were unable to appreciate every aspect of my story, they weren't worthy of reading any of it. If that's high and mighty or self-important, so be it. Anyway, the point is that I can understand how you may be feeling, though I don't claim to know how you feel.

    However, I hope you don't pull your story, as I find the whole concept fascinating and I'm most interesting in unraveling the mysteries you've presented us with. Thank you for posting this for us to enjoy!

    waseom
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  • From ANON - BeautifullyMalicious on May 06, 2005
    Having read all of it to date, I must say this: don't let the flamers get you down. I have a few stories published on this site and not all reviews are good reviews. Some of them are downright crap reviews, only meant to break down your confidence in your own abilities. Now, I think it would be a crying shame if you abandoned this story outright. I don't know why everyone's having problems with a non-linear story. I think it makes the plot far more intriguing than if it started at point A and chugged along to point Z or wherever you may end up. The different POV's and also the diary entries are good devices to use and I am insanely curious to find out what it is that Hermione has dedicated herself to brewing. Please update this fic!
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  • From ANON - Lin on April 26, 2005
    interesting. why quit?
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  • From ANON - SeveressaSnape on April 26, 2005
    I am sorry that you have had a taste of the bad, noisy, loud people that criticize without any intention of their criticism being constructive. I, for one, have been very intrigued by your story, and I hate to see it die a premature death. I think that the little grammatical errors that may have been in the writing have added a bit of realism to the tale. I feel like even Hermione, as intelligent as she is, might be one to "let the rules go" when she is scratching out a sentence in her own diary. I hope that you do finish this. I am very curious as to exactly what our heroine has created...
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  • From ANON - RvR on April 26, 2005
    I really like the style of your story and of course the the story itself. i hope you'll update soon.
    ys
    rebecca:-)
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  • From ANON - Anom. on April 26, 2005
    I have to say that your fic was very refreshing and orginal. Very unlike alot of the other garbage that is out there. It is sad to say, however, that apparently you felt the need to reach new heights of self-importance and use your work to post what amounts to no more than an overblown hissy fit.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 25, 2005
    You go!!! I swear some people don't have better things to do!! I've enjoyed your stories and am excited to see what happens in this one! Just finished reading it and it's really good so far. Please don't take away the stories!!
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on April 25, 2005
    Interesting story. If the critics think there are problems with this story, then I can point out another author on here that writes abysmal SI fics. Spelling and grammar are both bad, and the "Mary Sue" is usually set up to have a "harem" of females before the 3rd chapter.

    I happen to think this story a good one. Snape's feelings about the injuries sustained during the final battle were thought out well enough, and I suspect some PTSD is involved there. Warfare changes those who fight them, and even those who only train to fight them.

    I admit that the chapters are a bit shorter than I've seen in many fics, but long chapters are not always a good thing either.
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  • From ANON - Savvy0331 on April 24, 2005
    From what I understand you've had some trouble with reviewers. This may make you feel better. I am absolutely intrigued by your story. I cannot wait to see what happens next. My favorite kinds of stories are the ones where you have to guess what happens next. I can't wait for your update (which I hope is soon by the way). No rush or anything. I'm sure I'll find plenty of stories to read in the mean time. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2005
    Attention to all people who are referring to 'anon' as one person. ANON is short for ANONYMOUS. If you leave the 'Name' box blank when writing reviews, it is filled in automatically with the abbreviation 'anon' when it comes up on the review page.

    Before you start screaming at me I am not any of the above
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  • From Bravmiki on April 24, 2005
    Do not let flamers make you feel less than you are. Write your story and just enjoy it.

    Waiting for your updates...so keep posting.
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  • From ANON - kara on April 24, 2005
    Hey you really get so defensive. I was just curious because I'd been following your story and hoping that it you would eventually clarify certain things. I thought the storyline was really unique though the format and skipping around confusing. It was so promising I didn't really care.

    I have really been flamed before myself no big deal! I've have had people call me a stupid bitch and other things I won't mention. I never removed the flames because they were funny to me. I'm really thick skinned so I let go. Criticism is never easy to swallow but I've learned over the years to pick from it suggestions on how to improve. As a person that likes to write - even when it's for myself - I want it to be good. I'm sure you feel the same. Just ignore the flames. Giving any attention to them makes them very happy. Trust me it's true.

    I didn't see the review with the curses, so I can't respond to that. I was talking about the one that said that Hermione seemed masculine. When I read that I actually went back to read your post again to see if there was any truth to that observation. Differences of opinions and discussions mean that a fic actually inspired people to really think about it. What better compliment could be given than to have a full blown discussion on your review page!

    You have the right to remove any post you don't like and to write any way you feel. You don't even have to respond to nosy bints like myself. I just found it funny that you removed anything. My friends always tell my I find the most inappropriate things funny so forgive me.

    To wrap this up keep posting. At least to please yourself if nothing else. Just so you know I didn't find Hermione masculine.

    Kara

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