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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From mlui on June 29, 2008
    Great chapter, please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - kymmy on June 29, 2008
    Another chapter, what a treat, and I had really believed this story to have been abandoned all so long ago and the last chap just a tease ;-)
    So glad to see this story a go again and I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From shelagh on June 28, 2008
    So glad to see your finishing this one. If you move it to the treesome and moresome catagory post here and let us know
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  • From smmz79 on June 28, 2008
    yeahhhh you are back i have been watching this story to see ifyou would continue.... i do love it and can not wait to see if hermione is dracos true love i am sure she is
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2008
    Definitely looking like it's going to full on Draco/Hermoine.


    I hope not though. :( Blaise definitely needs to stick around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2008
    Are we supposed to be grateful that you've finally deigned to finish your own work? Whatever.

    Also, I couldn't understand the description of the bracelet. Could you have made it more obscure?
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  • From ANON - mhaj78 on June 28, 2008
    how have i never seen this story before?? i've only read chapter 1 but am looking forward to wasting time this afternoon glued to my computer and most of the day tomorrow to catch up!! it looks promising and you're a good writer which is hard to find sometimes!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2008
    Awesome. The little touches of humor here and there add something special to the story, not to mention an actual plotline, along with the smut scenes (which are quite amazing as well. Especially liked the slash added into it, eventually.. definitely spiced things up a bit.)

    I'm not near done yet, but I'm sure I'll be reading this all afternoon!
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  • From Phoenix2000 on June 27, 2008
    I have to say that I am loving this story so far. I still think Lucius's punishment (from the Zabini family) should have been worse but I can live with him being in pain for a long time. I do hope that the three of them stay together. But I really like the dynamic of Blaise and Hermione better if it comes down to it. I like Draco too just I think the Blaise and Hermione in this story fit together better. I am also liking the Draco/Blaise relationship as well. Anyway, just some of my opinions. Keep up the good work.


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  • From ANON - Tara on June 25, 2008
    I'm so very glad that you've decided to finish this story! I've been a fan of it since the beginning and was saddened when it had appeared like you may not finish it. I hope that you intend on keeping both Blaise and Draco around though, even though this is in the Draco/Hermione section, because I think it'd break my heart if Blaise was suddenly shut out. I love how you have developed the relationship between himself and Draco as well, and I really think (and hope!) that the three of them can find their way. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From mlui on June 25, 2008
    Ch 60 - I had to read over the entire story again because I forgot what actually happened...so, I hope you'll update soon and not leave the story for so long next time... A very intriguing chapter, but this could lead to a whole lot of other trouble. I mean, what if it doesn't work and it screws up Ron & Pansy's engagement...
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  • From luvhp on June 25, 2008
    I had to stop reading for a minute to comment on this lovely story!
    I don't know why I haven't read it before as I thoroughly enjoy Basise/Hermione/Draco!~
    I'm glad Draco was her first (Yes, I'm a hardcore Dramione fan XD )

    I saw your comment about your first experience, honestly, I don't know a lot of girls that have had good first experiences, except my sister damn her, she's still married to the man and they don't even fight, how'd she get so lucky...off track sorry :)

    Okay, so anwyay, wanted to say I'm loving this story and I'm going back to finish now :)

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  • From ANON - Meg on June 25, 2008
    I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this story, it's incredibly refreshing when a story has a great plot and great sex scenes, you have managed to balance them perfectly.
    I really like all the sub-plots as well, and I'm glad you made Ron less annoying, I enjoyed him as a character, instead of wishing he wasn't in the story, like I do with the books. I'm glad you put him with Pansy, she's well written as well.
    I really do hope you continue with this story, I'm a very big fan and I would love to finish this.
    Also, I think Harry is probably your best character, you've made him your own. Original, and I really liked the idea that it was Harry who couldn't adjust to Hermione's new relationship, and not Ron. Making him jealous was a masterstroke.
    I'll stop before I begin to sound like a stalker, so well done, you should be very proud and I really hope you continue to write more.
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  • From ginger28 on June 24, 2008
    thank you for finaly updating. great job. can not wait for next update A+ again
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  • From melferd on June 24, 2008
    Very intriguing development!! More soon please, so glad to see a new chapter.
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