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Reviews for To Have Not

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - cj on November 04, 2005
    this story is so heartbreaking, i can't wait until sev and harry get back together. please hurry!
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  • From ANON - elfie on November 01, 2005
    what a wonderful story! please continue soon!
    love, elfie
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  • From ANON - Chantelli on October 25, 2005
    All together too much Malfoy and not enough Snarry! Still, updates are always a joyful occasion! More updates! QUICK!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on October 24, 2005
    Oh, I just loved the dressing session - so much NOT like Harry - totally out of his element and doing well - love it. ...and the Draco touch, priceless.

    Really liked the clubbing outfit discussion - suitable indeed! lol

    The Severus dream sequence, was Harry just reliving and remembering about Severus and him after sex with Lucius? Very nice details in there too. I wonder if Lucius noticed Harry's movements during the dream?????

    Your writings flow so nicely together, never rushed or complicated but full of intricate little details that weave in so deliciously.

    Can't wait for Harry to use all those clothes at whatever function they go to, never mind the engagement party with Severus there. Will Harry get another head ache???
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  • From ANON - Lothirielwen on October 23, 2005
    I love Lucius!! I love how he is..... (fits in well with the type of guy I went for in high school, still have a soft spot for them)

    You have done a great job with keeping him in character..... I'm sure that he would be actng this way should something like this happen.... I just don't have to like the fact that he is basicly using Harry to get ahead or at least back to where he was. It doesn't bode well for either of them.....

    I hope that Harry realizes before it's to late that he can't ever be happy with Lucius and does soemthing about it to make things better for himself.

    Great job!! Look forward to more
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  • From ANON - lilith on October 22, 2005
    With Harrys thoughts about being top it would be a smart idea of Lucius to become pregnant with Harrys child. Harry surely would never leave him then, if not because he loves him, then out of duty. When I started reading this story I wished Harry would get together with Severus, but now it seems to me Harry and Lucius could really work out. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - lady Gray on October 22, 2005
    Glad you udated! I love this story. Whats wrong with harry exactly? Will he choose severus or lucius? I can hardly wait to find out! I hope you update again soon. thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on October 22, 2005
    that chapter was so good.... probably the best thus far... nice and long.. and incredible personal detail... update again soon
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  • From ANON - Threesisters on October 22, 2005
    Lucius is going to make him pregnant isn't he. Oh hell, I just don't know how
    Severus is going to counter that! Unless he gets to Harry first and impregnates him
    yes I like that. Arrange that please, in your own perfect way.
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  • From ANON - sbkar on October 22, 2005
    blaggard (you wrote it as someone speaking very quickly might say it) -- should be...

    blackguard

    black
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  • From ANON - mira on October 17, 2005
    sev needs to get a move on it! harry cant exist in such a meaningless place without wasting away. update sooooon!
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  • From ANON - cj on October 14, 2005
    I really like this story! but i desparately want harry back with severus! i hope you update soon, i can't wait for them to get back together. if you email ppl when you update, i would love an email. i would hate to lose track of such a great story!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 13, 2005
    oooh i luv this-- no i have not read the prequel --i wil;l go and do so now.. i read them in the wrong order what of it? the point is this is great!! im mkinda tied, i want Harry and Sev to be happy and luv each other, but im just so fond of the H/L pairing i want them to be together too... ggrrr!! u need to update soon so i can... well read more cause im sure the conclusion to my dilema is a long time coming LOL :P :P Wow i think this is one of the longest reviews i have ever writen LOL :P cya huni xxx
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  • From ANON - yui on October 09, 2005
    loved it and cant wait 4 the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Aggis on September 27, 2005
    Absolutely love, love, love this. Have to go, busy day at work, which of course isn't a proper place to read this but :) I'm addicted.
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