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Reviews for To Have Not

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - Chantelli on September 25, 2005
    Hey! HEY! Put Harry and Sev back together again! It's unnatural to have them apart! At least Sev has come to his senses. I adored "To Have and To Hold", read it a while back, and reread it yesterday until 4am (on the day of my cousin's wedding no less) so I could read "to Have Not" tonight. You must MUST update soon! Give us a bit of Snarry hope and smoochies. It seems like Malfoy just might win! Just because Malfoy wasn't a hardcore deatheater doesn't mean he isn't a horrible person! Brilliant writing, amazing plotlines, and very accurate characters. NOW! Updates, updates, updates! I'm so distraught over this breakup, I may have to go on a hunger strike until they're back together!
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  • From LadyGray on September 14, 2005
    Another great chapter! I love the way you write these characters, and the plot is great too. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Squallsama on September 14, 2005
    *lip quivers, bursts into tears* POOR SEVERUS!!!! *breathes* ok... it's ok, everything will turn out ok--even if Lucius is a slimy bastard that confused Harry and took him from Severus....>.
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  • From ANON - Akume on September 14, 2005
    ~screams uncontrollably~ You are such a TEASE. I want to read about Lucius and Harry having hot sex. ~pouts~ Please. Anyway, awesome chapter can't wait for the follow-up. ~starts to daydream about said couple~ Luv ya.
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  • From ANON - acr on September 14, 2005
    Good chapter. I like the way you are portraying Lucius as not a total bastard.
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on September 14, 2005
    I may be an old cow, but I really like what you are doing here with Lucius! At this point I hope you do let him and Harry make a success of their venture.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on September 14, 2005
    AAAAAAA! Not Lucius, not Lucius! Yuck!!!

    Go Hermy! I loved the angst.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 13, 2005
    Yey! Snape is finaly realizing how much he screwed up. I loved your last sentence of this chapter; although a classic, it was wonderful. Poor Snapey, pining away while Harry is busy having wonderful sex with Lucius. I can't wait to see what Severus attempts to do to get Harry back. It's ironic, because just as Snape is beginning to plan how to win Harry back, Harry is beginning to move away from him with Lucius.

    Great story.
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  • From ANON - baconsux on August 23, 2005
    omfg. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! i reallllly need to read this story and get it over wid cuz i'm dying to see harry and snape get BACK TOGETHER! i'm becoming hopeless and actually thinking, 'oh hell wid it, just keep harry and lucius together.' FINISH THE STORYYYY or else i'll shave ur hair off and feed it to my pitbull. :) oki doki. excellent story and plot btw.
    much love- me
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on August 20, 2005
    How wonderful, I read the first one and am very interested to see how this one turns out. Thanks for writing some great fanfic!
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  • From ANON - Findirector on August 11, 2005
    Brilliant. As always.
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  • From ANON - Kalisin on August 11, 2005
    awesome story, please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on August 09, 2005
    Hi!

    I just wanted to write and say that this is one of the best HP fics I have read; and definately the only one that has kept my complete attention, seeing as I multi task alot ^^; I am so keen to find out how Harry and Lucius' relationship is going to be and also what Severus has up his sleeve. Actually, I am going to have to back track and read the first part, To Have and To Hold, because I just realized that I hadn't read it ^^;; I am sure I will find it very enjoyable as well! I can't wait until I read the next chapter to this fic!

    Thanks for writing this for all of us HP fans!

    Lisa
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  • From ANON - FluffNutter on August 08, 2005
    I'm enjoying this story. Just one criticism on this chapter -- and it's a small one -- Harry said he'd only known he was a wizard for six hours when he met Draco. That might work with the movie version, but in the book Harry had known for a whole month because Hagrid "rescued" him on his birthday, July 31. Hogwarts classes resume Sept. 1. Otherwise, great story!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on August 08, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Harry can't forget Severus, not ever.....!!!!

    Can he even think that he'll have love and trust with the Malfoy's??? Protection - yes; political clout - as if he needed more - yes; social grace even, yes he needed that too (he can such a klutz *snickers - in the most amicable way).

    Don't turn Harry into a snob, please?????

    If Harry can't have sex with anybody in the house, then can he have it elsewhere??? Like when he finally figures out that Severus's "setting him free" is to let him love who he wants, like Severus!!!!!

    I'm quite anxious to discover the twisted path that you'll weave to get us to the end of this. The ride should be worth it.
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