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Reviews for To Have Not

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - myniephoenix on August 08, 2005
    amazing as always.. worth the wait... but don't make us wait long... please!
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  • From ANON - Missi on August 08, 2005
    Stupid Sevvie! He's supposed to do some damn foolish Gryffindor romantic brave gesture and win his Harry back! Thanks for updating, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Moi on August 08, 2005
    You write such lovely long chapters. Frankly, I confess, I have been ignoring this since it appeared, failing to associate it to its predecessor. Mea culpa. It's taken me all day, interrupted by real life many times, to read these first four chapters. It's been rather painful, actually, Severus being such an idiot. I dread what is coming, and yet I am irresistably compelled to urge you to write the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on August 08, 2005
    *is REALLY worried* You know... I can't stop thinking baout it--it's just so sad to think that, after all Severus and Harry shared and how much they really do love each other... that Harry wouldn't give his life to Severus first--he wouldn't bond with the one man who loves him more than life itself, first. And you know.... I can just see something bad coming with the sex issue between Harry and Lucious... it's not going to end pretty... or, well... maybe it will... who knows with you... *grins* I just feel so bad for Severus--I think he really needs to start making more of an appearance though. He's kinda just there in this one so far... like he's a forgotten character.... He really should be made a bigger part of this, since it is kind of his love that's on the line. >.< but hey, it's your decision.
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  • From ANON - jbcna on August 07, 2005
    now you really have me troubled I dont know who I am ruting for snape or malofy I am still kind of mad at snape and it seems like malofy could love harry but iam still hoping that snape will get a clue before itsd to late and want harry back cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Jaima on August 07, 2005
    This is really good. I am a staunch Harry/Sev fan but I really like how you have written the Malfoys.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 30, 2005
    bah, marry lucius? God I hope that gets Sev off his bum arse to go get his harry back. lol

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Angela on July 28, 2005
    Dun Dun Dun!!!!
    Ooohhh,What will Harry say?
    Love, love, love!!!!
    Can't wait for the next update!!!!
    Love Angel!!!!
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  • From ANON - ix_miso on July 27, 2005
    wonderful. i loved the first book. to have and to hold. your writing style is nice to read throughout the story. good stories with good pairings and writing styles are so hard to come by. good job. this story makes me frustrated becuz there are only 3 chapters to read so far. so write more and update quickly. oh, and i hope harry never gets married to lucius, and if you dont want one of your reviewers to die of suspense (me) then you'll have to get snape and harry back together as soon as possible. i'll bite your head off if you dont. :P update soon~
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  • From ANON - xx on July 27, 2005
    guud
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  • From ANON - Bree on July 25, 2005
    Wow, this story is a twist and a turn at every corner. Being a Lucius/Harry, and a Severus/Harry fan I can tell you very directly that this story is one of the best mixes of the two. I can't wait to see what happens in the following chapter, and I am certainly eager to see what Harry says to the proposition. All-in-all, wonderful job. I am really enjoying your work.

    ~Brianna
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  • From ANON - Threesisters on July 25, 2005
    I love the way its going, but I feel so sorry for Severus. Mind what a wonderful Triad, they would make.
    Severus, Harry and Lucius. Just thinging out loud. Thanks for a great update.
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 25, 2005
    Good Lord, please tell me Sev decided to talk to Harry about the script before Harry says yes to Lucius, although that may result in a catfight...... Anyway, love the fic and can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Fallen Dragon on July 25, 2005
    Oh My Bloody God! you just had to end it there didn't you!!! T-T
    Well I luv the story! Even If Half Blood Prince's events kinda made it hard.
    Please update soon! No more sad Harry and Sev plz!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 25, 2005
    What???!!!! You can't just leave it there!!! That's a cliff-hangar and their forbidden......huh-uh, yep, they are.....no question about it.....can't do it....not allowed.....

    You big tease!! You make us wait for how long???, then just drop this off.......a ledge......

    Please keep the inner voices, they are just darling, especially Harry's that sounds just like Severus - *giggles and squirms*

    The trials and what happened was a great addition - really set the stage, and the media party, LOL, typical, everyone wants a piece of Harry....great writing on that one too.

    So, don't wait so long to post the next chapter, I almost had to re-read the last chapter to remember what the story line was.

    Please keep the humour going too, that's really funny stuff.
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