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Reviews for To Have Not

By : MontanaDan
  • From ANON - Jaima on July 24, 2005
    Wow. much more direct than I expected. lol, it was good, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on July 23, 2005
    Poor harry!!*SOBS* *sniff* Stupid Snape stupid stupid! I hope they get back together soon!! Please e-mail me when ever you update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Lothirielwen on July 18, 2005
    Wow!!! Found a rec for this, but then found out that it was a sequal for another story. Read the both of them. I love it so far! I am a huge Snarry fan, by far it's my favorite ship, but I also like Harry/Lucius and Harry/Draco.....
    I'm looking forward to reading more of this, can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Squallsama on July 14, 2005
    Wow--I don't know what to say. I definitely didn't expect it to be like this... (And that's suppose to be a good thing. ^_~) It's just so heart-breaking and beautiful and romantic and all that other crap. >.< I do hope you plan on making Harry the... uh... 'mother' in the relationship and that he DOESN'T carry Lucious' child....? I don't think you would--you're too much of a softy to do that. ^_~ ....... Right...? I feel so bad for Severus and Harry. It was so sad when Severus 'broke up' with him. I was almost in tears. But this is coming out beautifully, your writing has imporved muchly since you first started on this series. ^_^

    On that note, I was reading through To Have and To Hold, and it has some major ferked up spellings from when AFF.net wigged out, plus chapter 2 is missing a segment at the very end. I thought you'd like to know. You could go back and fix it and that way it owuld easier for new readers to understand it better... *shrugs*

    Anyway, I hope you get the next chapter out soon, you seemed to have gotten the first two out rather quickly. I'm so excited about this one. ^_^ Finally some decent reading material again.
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  • From ANON - Kalisin on July 12, 2005
    hey, i really adore this story, so PLEASE update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Rane on July 11, 2005
    I want to shout from my balcony how wonderful this fic is! Great story, excellent characterization and nothing feels rushed. I will eagerly await all updates!
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  • From ANON - Jaima on July 11, 2005
    This is shaping up beautifully. Really enjoyed the chapter. Would really like some relief for Harry!
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on July 11, 2005
    thats an amazing chapter.... really amazing.... update again soon..
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  • From ANON - N2lin on July 11, 2005
    Very enjoyable. I do like your writing style, it's easy to get absorbed into the story and the inner Snape dialogue is amusing. The Possessive!Snape dynamic is a fave of mine, so I'm anticipating a lot of fun. However, I'm wondering if the underlying reasons for Harry and Severus' separation truly make sense. This was the aspect that bothered me - why does Severus persist in doing what we see as stupid? Why doesn't Harry confront him and get some advice? Perhaps these questions will become moot. I'm looking forward to some more insight as to their deep seated insecurities.
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  • From ANON - WENDY on July 11, 2005
    I do hope that Harry doesn't 'fall' for Lucius's tricks or lucius himself...and will someone please tell Severus to stop being a dunderhead/idiot (of course, then you wouldn't have a story, so maybe that should wait a few chapters). But I do think that Harry should remember that Snape said 'I love you' and he said it when he thought Harry was asleep and wouldn't/couldn't hear. By the way, it sounded to me like Hermione was suspicous...
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  • From ANON - fyrefawkes on July 10, 2005
    omg, more more please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Em on July 09, 2005
    I loved to Have and to Hold, and this promises to be fantastic, too! Severus deserves to suffer from some blinding jealousy after breaking Harry's heart! I look
    forward to more
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  • From ANON - antipyro on July 08, 2005
    Yes! You're back with another (sequel) story.......AND IT'S FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!

    The inner voices are just divine, don't EVER stop with them.

    The situation with Snape is very funny and I'm anxious to see how far he goes into despair, then how he gets out of it. This could be really funny, and angsty, and sexy, and dangerous, and any other description that will keep me reading and on the edge of my seat!!!!!


    YES, YES, YES!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 08, 2005
    Wow...after reading To Have and to Hold I thought it couldn't get any better..I was wrong, congratulations on such a wonderful story, please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - countessvorkosigan on July 07, 2005
    This is going to be another hit. I can understand why Severus did what he did, but it hurt me just to read it...so imagine how poor Harry felt. Sev had better work *really* hard to win him back. Lucius may start off with an offer of a marriage of convenience...but judging by his reaction to Harry at the end of THTH, he won't be indifferent for long! Can't wait for more.:)
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