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Reviews for Burdens of the Heart

By : innocentimp
  • From ANON - vbollman on November 29, 2005
    Oh please say you're going to update soon. I love the way this story is developing. I just can't wait to hear more
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  • From ANON - jess on November 28, 2005
    i know it sounds strange but after reading that, i feel warm and fuzzy inside. please continue, i like the feeling
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  • From ANON - andie on November 28, 2005
    I love your view of Snape and Harry, your view of their situation. Very nice story!
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  • From ANON - Katie on November 27, 2005
    That was a great chapter! I loved how Severus seems to be the only one really concerned about Harry. I loved the interaction
    between the two of them in this chapter, and how Harry was so scared and confused. I think his reactions are very believable,
    and I love that Severus was there to help him. The very last scene with Severus tucking Harry in was great, as was the part
    about Harry dreaming about Severus. I can't wait to read more! Oh, and I'm really glad that Charlie realizes that when Harry
    does love someone, he won't love Charlie. That's good to know. *grins*

    Katie
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  • From ANON - Sahira on November 27, 2005
    I have been trying to avoid all HBP fics, I just can't accept what happened...I'm still in denial..pah...But your fic is sooooooooo gooooood! It just feels so "real". And I love it when things progres slowly! Update:)
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  • From ANON - holli on November 27, 2005
    excellent!! i really like this chapter, i think it shows a lot of progress in the relationship between severus and harry. its very realistic, a lot of ss/hp stories, they resolve their issues to fast, this was very good. i like how harry is handling thigns too, its realistic as well. i can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Ceris on November 27, 2005
    this is really really good!!!!! please write more~!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 26, 2005
    That was oddly sweet. I liked it though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2005
    A very nice story!!! I absolutely hope, that you will continue it and if at all possible, please do so soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Serpent on November 12, 2005
    This story was pretty cute. I can't wait for the snary to commence, though i like how you;'re not jumping into it. It kinda seems like Snape is jealous of Charlie, won't it be cute when he figures that out aswell, and realize this life's work is just a conveniant excuse... or maybe i'm fishing for snarry goodness, who knows. In any case, keep up the good work, and i hope you update soon! Ja-ne
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  • From ANON - cj on November 04, 2005
    I love this story. There aren't enough hp/ss post hbp so i really appreciate the good ones. if you could send me an email when you update, i would love it!! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2005
    That was good... Harry really doesn't need to have Charlie unto him at the moment . Thang god Snape was around and he's the only one who's actually responsible...
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on October 08, 2005
    Hehehe. I love Snape. He always makes me feel better, what with his snipping and groaning about every little thing. He's just such a lovely stress reliever. I am curious to see how you're going to get them working together, much less sleeping together. I think I shall add you to my favorites and find out! Yes, that's exactly what I'll do! *runs off to take care of it*
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on October 08, 2005
    I didn't find this chapter tedious at all. It was very good. I like the idea of Harry going into Auror training to receive the skills he needs to win. I also like the way Remus reacted to it. I think it was spot on with his personality. On to the next!
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on October 08, 2005
    Most intriguing. *rubs chin thoughtfully* I like the way you've interpreted HBP and worked it into this fic. You made it sound believable and sincere, not an easy task for certain. I think I shall head to the next chapter and see what happens!
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