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Reviews for Terms of Payment

By : Bargle5
  • From Bargle5 on November 07, 2006
    To Ozark: Yes you did review this before. In fact, yours was the first review for it here.

    To Ozark and Tiffany:
    As for continuing it, I think a followup would only end up being a disappointment.
    For example, I wrote "I Blame Ron Jeremy", intending it to be a oneshot. I succumbed to requests and wrote a followup, "Lavender Takes the Lead" which didn't come out nearly as entertaining. I try not to make the same mistake twice.

    Thanks for reviewing. :-)
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on November 06, 2006
    This does look quite interesting

    Please continue

    I can't wait to see where this goes :)
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on November 06, 2006
    I may have reviewed this before, but another one will not hurt anything. I adore this one shot. Very in character for our beloved Professor, with a small hint of humanity to him. I understand your wanting the reader to decide if she says no or not -- but again I would enjoy it greatly if you expanded the story.
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  • From Bargle5 on August 21, 2006
    Nightscribe, you're making me blush. Thanks again for the review. Also again, this is another one of my favorites of my own stories. I wish they all turned out as well.
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  • From ANON - NightScribe on August 12, 2006
    Yet another classic. This fic, too, I read on the other site. Loved it both times. What I enjoyed was the character is completely canon (nice job) and the one-sided conversation pulls you in; giving the illusion that he may be talking directly to the reader. The reveal at the very end is a perfect kicker and well worth the wait. The open ending, leaving the reader to decide for themselves, was an excellent decision, reinforcing the almost "interactive" feel of the story.

    I admit, I have developed an intense love/hate relationship with your fics. Love them for the creativity and your obvious talent, and hate them as they make me want to go back and rethink and review my own fics with a far more critical and objective eye than I already employ. But, a little extra dose of humility can be a good thing, and I thank you; it instills the aspiration to reach your level of talent. Good authors do that!
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  • From ANON - Marchatorium on October 26, 2005
    Congratulations. :) Very refreshing and good. I'm about reading your other stories.
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  • From ANON - ice owl on October 23, 2005
    May I have first dibs on being polyjiced to switch with Ms. Granger, please?
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  • From ANON - JJ on October 23, 2005
    I love that line that they had that conversation before! And your right. My imagination is leading me in all kinds of directions. Rather than bore you with them since you said the story is complete, I'll just say THANK YOU.
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 07, 2005
    Next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on October 04, 2005
    How utterly refreshing. I loved this.
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  • From Bargle5 on October 03, 2005
    No, I don't plan on a followup. I want to leave it up to the reader's imagination whether she says yes or no.
    Thanks for reviewing. :-)
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on October 03, 2005
    "I do not want to have this conversation over and over" - that line made me roll on the floor. Very well done and I do so hope there is a follow-up planned. Even if not, this is a great ficlet!
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