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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - A on December 12, 2005
    Amazing, amazing, and amazing. Seriously.

    This story is so suspenseful and intense it makes me want to throw my chair because I can't read faster. You portray Draco and Hermione's attitudes and actions sososo extraordinarily and perfectly. I love your style, too.

    /Damn./
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    oh my gosh. sometimes i hate harry. but that was flippin AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no hiding the secrets from the rest of the golden trio, nope, harry's right there!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE your character analysis of draco!!!!!!!!!!! you're really delving into his character. when i saw you had updated this i went and did a little joy dance in the living room and my family looked at me strangely...but i love this!!!!! thanks for updating. looking forward to the next one!

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  • From ANON - luin on December 12, 2005
    Absolutely lovely. You capture the characters so vividly. I especially enjoy how you represent the relationships between the characters amongst the "Golden Trio" and Draco. I think you build an excellent case of why it would be so difficult for both of them to come to terms with the attraction. I applaud you for your writing! Oh, and the inner thoughts and dialogues exchanged are so spot on. Well done. I can't WAIT to read more. Your story is so good that you made me comment!
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  • From ANON - Allyssa on December 12, 2005
    omg....im addicted to this....plz update like in two minutes....!!!! ill love you forever
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  • From ANON - Aurora on December 12, 2005
    NOOOOOO...I just got to the end of the chapters and I need more...I have to know what happens next..please update soon.
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  • From CeciliaRose on December 12, 2005
    this is one of the best hg/dm stories i have ever read! it's so real, i love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    I love the new chapter and don't worry about dragging it out too long- it's not remotely believable otherwise and this way you've added so much more credibility to the characters. Harry is starting to be a little much though, although it is nice for him to be the one over reacting for once instead of Ron. Don't leave us waiting with that cliff hanger for too long! Great writing!
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  • From ANON - Bridge on December 12, 2005
    Umm....wow! I must say that I am truly impressed with your writing skills. I find the story fascinating and am very keen (yes keen) to continue reading it. I think the story has a lot of potential. I like how you show both their points of views without having to have defiant action break. I know you asked about the writing format and the only thing I find difficult to follow is when a character has two lines in a row but those two lines are broken up into different paragraphs without you identifying that the speaker has not changed. Other than that I really like your story, you seam very talented.
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  • From ANON - 0o0itznitelite on December 12, 2005
    OMGAWDDD... I REALLYY LOVE DISS STORRIEE... DRACO IS SOO MEAN N VICIOUS.. N DATZZ WAT MAKES IT GOOODD.... U HAVEE TOO UYPDATEE... PLEASEEEE.... I LOVEEE U IF U UPDATEEE MOREE.. HAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - elle6778 on December 12, 2005
    Fantastically emotional! You brought me onto a roller coaster ride with this story. I loved all the conflicting emotions between Draco and Hermion. Draco's evilness was very well written. Love it! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    who was the stupid slag who left the last review??!! what a twat!!! he/she needs to read this freakin' awesome story again before typing that there's no lust!!!!!!!!!!!! kno y? THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the author NEEDS TO UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i loved the last chapter, where draco almost kissed her. if i have to say one thing, it's that you're making this realistic by exploring draco's personality and feelings, it's very deep. not to mention hermione struggling with ehr own. so please, PLEASE, I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    this is such a fabulous story with the perfect amount of Hermione/Draco angst. whatever you do please dont stop writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    um, is this going to turn into a lust-then-love fic? or a lust fic? because i'm not seeing much of either rite now. o well, this IS in the hermione/draco section for a reason...i'll hold out!! only joshing, i really like this!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - fiona on December 12, 2005
    pauses for a moment of silence... wow that was so... amazing, i mean so much raw emotion the heat that builds between them anger and passion. i can't wait to read what comes next. will he let her help him fight his demons will he admit the feelings he has for her to himself and to her... well we will see please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Reembrand on December 12, 2005
    YES! Please no Draco has this magic power over Hermione and she can do nothing but bend to his will, etc.
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