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By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - serenitygirl13 on December 11, 2005
    This story is really fucked up and the way you portrayed Hermione was as fucked up as this story, you made her into a heartless uncaring selfish bitch who doesn't give a shit about anyone with the exception of Harry and Ron, hell anyone else could be dying in front of her and she would probably shake her head and left them there to die. I could understand they way Malfoy acted, but Hermione? The story was well written, and I understand not everything can have a happy ending but damn that was fucked up. Is this the last chapter? I really do hope Malfoy isn't dead. Come to think of it Wouldn't Hermione be blamed for Malfoy's death *if he really is dead* then that would mean she would have to give up her Head Girl position, cause surely they don't want a suspect for murder telling their kids what to do. But wouldn't that mean she'll go to Azkaban? I don't know, well hopefully next time you make a story it won't be as tragic as this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    This story is still amazing! Keeps getting better and better...I'm addicted! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on December 11, 2005
    woah. this story is really intense. update soon please!
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  • From ANON - mira on December 11, 2005
    One of the better written stories about HG/DM I've read in a while. Angst but not childishly so, introspection but not a painful amount....
    I really like it. The characters are easy to empathise with. Write more!!
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  • From ANON - carolyn on December 11, 2005
    Good. Because I would have hated to read what kissing recently thrown up bile is like.

    But all joking aside, this stuff is gooood. Such raw sentiments, that it's almost effing sick. I'm jealous! With the way you pen your words, I don't think you have to worry much about how your stuff comes out. Seriously, I love how when Hermione or Draco have their solo rants, they have these moments of continuous chain of thoughts (with very colorful language). I think that's how most of our minds work---thinking too much and too fast to piece out coherent thoughts one at a time.

    And it's very honest how difficult this relationship of theirs is, and how disturbing the excursions it has on both. Yeah, I would want a perfect relationship to be like cake but for Hr/Dr, it couldn't have happened, for real, any other way.
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  • From ANON - savysavestheday on December 11, 2005
    MWUAHAHAH! It keeps getting better and better... did i love that last scene or did I love it? Uh huh. I love how confused he is.. and come on, we all like lil weak Hermione. Well maybe not all. But I do! She tries so hard... but yet she's still a weak lil girl in some level. Beautiful :D
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  • From ANON - Dyn-girl on December 11, 2005
    WOW!!!! thiS is soooo omG continue!! UPDATE PLZ...itz realli good!! :D Good JoB
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  • From ANON - the earth guide on December 11, 2005
    Wow - this is amazing. I am in awe! This has got to be one of the strongest Draco's I have ever read. Your mastery of his mental and emotional state are incredible in depth and development. Two enthusiastic thumbs up. The only critism I can thing of is Hr. She's still well done but a little weak in contrast to Dr. Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on December 11, 2005
    wow im like in shock at how much emotion is put into this its crazy and it makes me want to read more so i cant wait till the next chapter comes out till then ttyl

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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on December 11, 2005
    Ah! I love your story. So full of emotion and tension, I couldn't tear my eyes off of it. Great stuff, keep going please!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 11, 2005
    This story is just so good!
    Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - MMiercoles on December 11, 2005
    Despite your formatting choices, this is a very enjoyable read. The tension in your characters is very real. Please keep writing this fic - I love what you've done so far and can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - --- on December 11, 2005
    Wow this is a great story!! Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on December 11, 2005
    ooooh, please update soon!

    Angst is a fave for me. I love Angst and this is just brilliant.

    Again, update soon! Please!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on December 11, 2005
    I absolutely love your story! It's so in character it's amazing. Draco is exactly what he would be like. Please write some more soon.
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