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Reviews for Surrender to Slavery

By : denisep
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2006
    this is weird. You shoulda just had snape petition for her
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 31, 2006
    Great start. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lola_Lola on January 31, 2006
    I didn't like the first chapter that much, I thought the writing was soemwhat forced. And I was almost sure you would have severus petition for Hermione, but I am glad that the second chapter is different. It's interesting now, and I dont believe I read anything like it before.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on January 31, 2006
    That was definitely not what I had expected. I congratulate you on your originality for THAT one. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - JW on January 31, 2006
    Ch 2 - ah, so only Death Eater families will be petitioning... Poor Severus, having to be a female at the Malfoys' house - he could be killed, raped, beaten... and he has to act like Hermione. So Severus has to spend time with Hermione, to learn her mannerisms? What about her parents - what will they be told about her whereabouts? Will the real Hermione be in hiding? What will happen when Severus has to be Severus? Can't wait to see the next chapters!!
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on January 31, 2006
    Very interesting start. Look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Eleanor on January 31, 2006
    Okay, I think Snape should be more intelligent in his remarks towards Granger. I mean, yes, she is known as a know-it-all, but he wouldn't use it like that. It sound inane, foolish, idiotic, stupid, asinine ... which ever phrase you prefer. However, this is indeed an interesting topic you are dealing with in this fic. I take it that this is loosely based off of the marriage law challenge? Or you at least got your inspiration from it? Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest. Keep up the good *cough* mediocre *cough* work because I WILL be reading the rest of this.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 31, 2006
    I think this story has a real good start. I would definitely like to read more.
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  • From ANON - Cereal Wars on January 31, 2006
    Well... I think we all know what the plan is. Unless, of course, you're going to surprise us with some amazing twist (*cough*thatwouldbegreat*cough*). Well, I'm liking this as of right now. I'd like to see how you're going to have this turn out. I'd enjoy it about 20 times more if you would make Severus dark in this fic.
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  • From ANON - denise on January 31, 2006
    Hi guys!! I am so happy I am almost giddy. I never thought soo many people would take the time to read my story, let alone review it. Unfortunatley though, the next chapter will be coming tomorrow because i need to go to work tomorrow, meanign i need some sleep. lol.

    JW- Intersting questions. Thanks! I will try to address them with a legitimate answer in the next chapter!
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 31, 2006
    Denise, this is a wonderful start to your story. As to finding a reason for the law, it could simply be a matter of muggleborns becoming too powerful, too influential, and the purebloods, feeling threatened (led by Lucius Malfoy if you like, yum), demand something be done to curtail them, pooling their power and connections to force the ministry to pass the enslavement law, maybe threatening to remove the current officals or board members if the law was not passed. You know how politicans practice self-preservation. That should be enough motivation to make the premise believable

    I hope Snape ends up with Hermione. Heh Heh. You have him nice and snarky so far. :) Good work. The possiblities for snapey naughtiness are limitless. The paragraphs are spread kind of wide though. I have to scroll over to read the entire sentences. You might want to fix that because it interrupts the reading flow. I'll be following this story. Love the premise.
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  • From ANON - Snakes are for Slytherins on January 31, 2006
    Hmmm. Eh ... Er. Uh... okay.... right. Uh huh. Mmmm yep. Okee! Update?
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  • From ANON - Jane is HOT on January 31, 2006
    Interesting. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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