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Reviews for What I Did During The Summer

By : Snape26
  • From ANON - angel on November 12, 2006
    hehe im glad alicia is going to try and help sev and mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Angel Kakes on November 12, 2006
    hey, story is ok hate the name for hermione's baby though, think of something better that name is shit. keep writting just change the baby's name, u want to make the kid be tortured cos of her name. Thats not cool.
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  • From LoverofDarkness on November 11, 2006
    Please update really soon
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  • From ANON - ... on November 11, 2006
    So Hermione's child will be a boy instead of a girl?
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  • From ANON - Louanne on November 11, 2006
    Excellent storyline still keep going and i love lily potter coming back from the dead
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 11, 2006
    Interesting but kind of strange at the end with Hermione. Still am enjoying the story though.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 11, 2006
    wow ... what is mione going to do ... how is harry going to act now ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    in chapter 24 you need to say harry ron tried to rape your friend
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    in chapter you need to say harry ron tried to rape your friend
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  • From ANON - mariteri on November 07, 2006
    First and foremost I would like to tell you that this is a good story. But, and this is the part you may not like, you are in desparate need of a beta reader. There are countless mistakes that were overlooked by yourself. If you do have a beta reader, you need to get a new one. If you don't, get one quick. If a reader gets tired of trying to get around and understanding what you are trying to tell them, they are going to stop reading. You, as the writter, don't want that at all. Fix it. It's for your own bennifit. Good luck and keep writing.
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  • From LoverofDarkness on November 07, 2006
    When will nevile find out the truth!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 07, 2006
    Looking forward to Lily putting Potter in his place for the way he is treating Severus and Hermione and trying to cause problems.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 07, 2006
    man is she pissed .. man harry is going to be pissed when he finds out ...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Silent_Siren on November 07, 2006
    WOW!!! I love the story. LOL. Atleast Lily isn't going to treat Harry like some stupid little star. Love the fact that Lily is behind Severus and Hermione getting married. Wht's with Dumbledores sudden obsession with Snape? Please update soon. I am sitting on the edge of my seat to read wht happens next.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 06, 2006
    A two chapter update, what a way to start my Monday morning!!!! Harry really is a jerk, and Dumbledore is starting to get me angry as well trying to cause problems with Severus.
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