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Reviews for What I Did During The Summer

By : Snape26
  • From ANON - beeky63 on October 09, 2006
    I like your story and I think that it has great potential, however your grammar is TERRIBLE. It is not entirely your fault because your bad grammar is very commonly used by Americans. "We don't know where Severus is at", "So this is where you live at". The "at" does not belong in these sentences.

    We don't know where Severus is. Severus is at home, for example.

    Please make the effort to correct your grammar. Bad grammar makes people sound ignorant and uneducated. Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 09, 2006
    Man, Ron,Harry, and Ginny are really jerks and I am glad that Neville stood up for Severus and Hermione. Looking forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 09, 2006
    just so you know, its 'whore' not 'hore'
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  • From ANON - hermioneandseverusfan on October 08, 2006
    in chapter 17 hermione vists home you have it where she says she does not know what the sex of the baby is. but yet you had it where in chapter 14 snape escaspes she finds out she is having a girl. you have to fix that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    you said in chapter 15 that hermione was going to have a girl and then in chapter 18 you said that she did not know what the baby was to her mom.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    So I'm glad for the update but I'm not sure I understand... Harry and Ron hate Snape and don't seem at all remorseful for how they acted and now they want to STALK him and hermione? I hape Snape does something drastic
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on October 02, 2006
    Very good!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on October 02, 2006
    Great story I just read all of it and I love it! I can't wait to see what Snape has planned next for Harry AND Ron. After all , don't want him to get jealous, lol. However, is it wrong that I like Tonks better with Kingsly? I honestly can't see her with remus
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  • From SorceressFujin on October 01, 2006
    Ooo! Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kris on September 26, 2006
    *laughs histerically* Wow, cant wait to see whats in that howler!
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on September 26, 2006
    Lovely chapter! *Laughs* Harry is going to get exactly what he deserves.
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  • From SorceressFujin on September 26, 2006
    Great chapter!! :)
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  • From ANON - JustMe on September 26, 2006
    Interesting story, just one thing though.... it's WHORE not HORE.
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  • From ANON - Kris on September 25, 2006
    O.o
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on September 25, 2006
    LOL Snape as a clown, now I know Dumbledore has put something extra special in his lemondrops. *Grins* Glad you are feeling better.
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