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Reviews for What I Did During The Summer

By : Snape26

From Shellnet on September 09, 2019
Good story but slow and you could write longer tractors too bad some finished but the story premise is good and relatively readable

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From vonHardenberg on November 25, 2010
Chap 25, try this:
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From vonHardenberg on November 21, 2010
Good story, even if somewhat stretching credulity. Whoever was your beta let you down. Sorry, but there you have it.
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From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From catysmom1028 on March 15, 2007
I like it. Please update soon.

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From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2007
are you going to update?

cause i really like this story
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From ANON - kelsey on November 27, 2006
hmm. not too sure on this story... i mean, it doesnt really hold your attention like some stories do but i still see potential, and there are a lot of grammar errors. also, some parts jump around too much, and others move too slowly. try planning them out and getting it to flow better. also consider getting someone to beta the story. it would make a world of difference. if you'd like, i can beta any further chapters for you. give me an email if you want to take me up on that offer. =)
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From ANON - angel on November 25, 2006
man poor mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon iwould love to read more ...later for now

angel
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From ANON - *DB* on November 25, 2006
@31. awesome chapter...can't wait for more hermione and severus. please update soon
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From ANON - allie on November 25, 2006
please update
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From ANON - *DB* on November 25, 2006
@30. OMG harry and ron are real prats!...but I love this story, it's awesome. I hope you update soon
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From ANON - angel on November 17, 2006
~lol~ man .. poor remus i think he is falling for lily .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - lisa on November 17, 2006
Good chappie. a lil Remus and Lily, sweet. and lol Hermione's response to Neville's letter was funny. cant wait for more. cant wait to see what happens. Troubles brewing. Harry's gonna be pissed since he's banned. He'll want revenge. and I feel that it most likely will land on Hermione. Harry and Ron are both quite angry and unstable right now. and without Hermione, their voice of reason they a re lost it seems. Ohh well more more please. Update soon please.
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From LoverofDarkness on November 17, 2006
Please update!
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