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Reviews for Monkey's Business

By : sappysappysappy
  • From ANON - beeky63 on January 31, 2007
    WOW! That was HOT! Something wickedly delicious to keep me warm in these frigid temperatures. Will the spell wear off? Will there be a happy ending? I hope so. Keep up the good work. Toodles.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on January 31, 2007
    Oh that was great. I love SS/HG smut... I even have a name for this ship... Snapher. I think it works.

    FANBLOODYTASTIC! Is there going to be more?

    Although I can't see Ginny turning against Hermione just because she hogged the bathroom I thought that was a little petty of all the Gryffindor girls... that didn't sit quite true with me.

    But the steam was steamy... wonderful.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on January 31, 2007
    Good chapter
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  • From Apryl on January 26, 2007
    To respond to your critic; 1 it's only a story. 2 if you want to look into it further you can see she obviously adores him. She might not realise how deep her feelings run, but the Headmaster is, shall we say "all-knowing". Sometimes love just needs a little nudge. Please continue this story Miss Sappy. Oh, by the way, What was the "saucy tune" Albus was whistling?
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  • From amsev on January 24, 2007
    EXCELLENT witty beginning. I love your "questionable" Dumbledore!!! Look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - miz on January 14, 2007
    Love to read more of this soon....
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  • From Rumpelyssa on January 07, 2007
    I personally agree with your version of Dumbledore, as he can't be that much of a saint... he has put people in danger. He forced Lupin to spy on the Werewolves, he encouraged Harry in his first year to go possibly to his death, and he has made Snape's life hell, AND he seems to have favourites of his own. Like not expelling that brat Black for almost successfully killing Snape... so, yes, Dumbledore isn't a saint. I have grown to sort of dislike him myself!

    I like this so far, but at times you slipped into first person narrative with Hermione... and then went straight back into third person narrative... that confused me slightly, I'd check that through if I were you...

    I cannot wait for the lemons though, and Snape will smile won't he?
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  • From ANON - hermoinesaidso on January 04, 2007
    OMFG! LOL please please please update soon your story is really good. and i'm really anxious to find out what hermoine got herself into
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on January 03, 2007
    How mean of dumbledore! Acting like a slytherin! What will happen between hermione and snape now? Will he take adventage of this? I really would like to find out, so I hope you will update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - kate on January 02, 2007
    ooh i like this story really intresting....haha oh dumbledore....
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  • From ANON - a_reader on January 02, 2007
    *is amused*

    Write on, dear author.
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 02, 2007
    Mwhaha! Great chapter! (Thanks for the double spaces too.) :)
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  • From ANON - Bris on January 02, 2007
    Oh what will she do nex? Run off and hide until she can not stay away any longer or go face him? And what will he do? I feel the build up for some serious lemons here....
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  • From ANON - lisa on January 02, 2007
    Woot woot ty ty. an update. I loved it lol. ohh dear what has Hermione agreed to? Poor Hemry. lol lemons are good. very good. hehe I love Severus, hes soo snarky in this. and thamks fr teh email. I got it and was like yay. I understand things get in the way. goodluck hon. cant wait fr the next chappie
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on January 02, 2007
    Ch. 2 - You sure don't seem to mind backing up Dumbledore's flaws by making them worse! He has just taken a barely 17-year-old girl that is in his care and protection and given her away, without her understanding of what was happening, as a sex object. Even on his worst days, Dumbledore would not do such a thing. This is called Child Human Trafficking!

    I read a lot of fanfiction with NC-17 ratings, and most authors have relationships develop from the standpoint that both parties involved go into a relationship with knowledge and acceptance. Also, reading about rapes and torture that are announced and expected is one thing, but what really gets me is when an author takes a normally respectful character and uses them in an unannounced and unexpected way. When Hermione is lead to cast this spell without knowing fully what she is doing, Dumbledore is taking away her choice. He is showing no concern for her feelings, her intelligence, or her human rights. I think we all realize that Dumbledore is manipulative, but I cannot express to you how repugnant I find it that you have turned him into a pimp of the worst degree. Not only uncaring, but also laughing at the plight that he has created via human trafficking. Tossing Hermione off to be used without a single thought about what she might think or feel about it
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