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Reviews for Monkey's Business

By : sappysappysappy
  • From ANON - Citten on January 02, 2007
    this is a great story and i look forward to the next chapter and i hope that it is as long as this one was! :)
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 02, 2007
    Great Chapter! Cant wait for the next one of course! =P
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on January 02, 2007
    I certainly agree with about Dumbledore. He may seem like a kind grandfatherly old man, but he is also a chess master who is not above using and sacrificing his pawns in order to reach his objectives. Another good chapter, can't wait to see how the plot developes, and a friendly reminder that you need a beta. Look forward to the next update. Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on December 31, 2006
    Oooh, very interesting beginning. I love this Dumbledore - his inner thoughts made me laugh quite a bit. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please, please update again soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 20, 2006
    This story sounds like a great idea but you need to update soon! Please don't stop... this is a very interesting take of a S/H story... Please e-mail me when you update
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  • From ANON - purrfus on December 14, 2006
    ch 1: I have disliked Dumbledore since the first book. Now with your story I wont have to argue about it with other folks - everyone will know upfront that he's a devious slimeball (or whatever the appropriate British version would be).
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  • From ANON - Annie on December 14, 2006
    its ok update soon.
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  • From ANON - CryingCinderella on December 14, 2006
    Hrm. It's an interesting start, I do hope you intend to continue and quite quick. A spell? Over Hermione? Surely, the Headmaster in his own right would be able to convince the girl to do as he intends her to do without the aid of magic. He is after all the most respected and honored wizard...anyhow, so far, so good. Hope you continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Amy on December 14, 2006
    please continue please......
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 14, 2006
    Good beginning.
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 14, 2006
    Ohhh I like it. very good start. Please continue . I would love to see more. Oh my dear god Albus is soooo meddlesome. and soo Slytherin lol. Cant wait to see what he casts. and lol Severus could definite;y use a good shag lol. might loosen him up. More more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - jane on December 13, 2006
    I think your Dumbledore is spot on. I hope you continue the story!
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 13, 2006
    I love the story so far! Although, i wouldn't mind the paragraphs being a little more spaced out. Easier to read. :) Anyway, I am anxiously awaiting more! :)
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on December 13, 2006
    Well now! This is your story and you may do what you want, but be warned, there will be those who won't like your image of Dumbledore, and will probably flame you for it. Personally, I am interested to see where you will go with this, so I would like to read more. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, for instance, in the first line you used the word "sweared", the past tense of "swear" is "swore", but all in all, not a bad start. Keep up the good work. Toodles.
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