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Reviews for Assimilation

By : ccino49
  • From ANON - Sansa on January 02, 2007
    Oh, poor little Nina, always so confused and thinking she is doing the wrong thing. Maybe Severus could run (Ok, maybe stride boldly) to her and comfort her. Explain he didn't mean to be such a jerk, but he has got a rep to protect. Hopefully the kids will get to explain why their sides where splitting. Please don't make her run into Malfoy.If she does I hope she would realise his intentions are not good. She could really use a boost to her self esteem, and some goodness in her life for a while. Please update very soon!
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  • From ANON - ForeverYours on January 01, 2007
    okay this story is now on my favorites and serriously if you do not update soon, I am probably going to die of boredom! keep it coming please
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  • From ANON - ForeverYours on January 01, 2007
    Holy shit! this is serriously like one of the best fanfictions I've EVER read. ooh its good me like me like alot!1 Ecspecially when she grabbed voldermorts arm
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  • From ANON - Sansa on January 01, 2007
    Awsome scene with the Dark Lord. I think he has finally met his match. I do believe Nina has made herself quite an enemy though. Ahhh, Severus is in love, how sweet. Good for him. Nice that Nina finally has some comforts in life after living on the streets, and that slimey farm house. More please.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on January 01, 2007
    Just had time to check back in. I love Kali. I feel that the house elves know a heck of a lot more than they lete on, all the time! Thanks for sharing, Pitt
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  • From ANON - foreveryours on January 01, 2007
    wat the hell/ why did u leave me hanging there at chapter six! r u kidding me? omg!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Foreveryours on January 01, 2007
    The best fan fic I have ever read! Makeover, Helion, angst, romance, everything!!!! Omg! do not let this fan fic die! I don't know if you still check your comments but this thing is DAMN GOOD!
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  • From ANON - Sansa on January 01, 2007
    Oh, what a cliff hanger you left us with! I will be waiting on the edge of my seat to see what happens in the Malfoy study. Glad to see the Aunt and Uncle got some kind of punishment. Jane touched mouldy voldy, does that mean she knows all of his secrets now? Harry will be happy to know the pressure is off of him now. Kali is a neat character. Anyone would be lucky to have her look out for them. Severus getting himself a young wife weather he wants it or not, wonder how she will feel about that too. I hope this encounter will bring Jane out of her current state of mind.

    Thanks for changing your formatting. That made your chapters much easier to read. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on December 31, 2006
    Oh, evil cliffie!!

    Great update. Severus' reaction to Kali when she told him he would "become one" with Jane/Nina was fun to read. *lol*
    But now they are in BIG trouble. I hope they will come out of this in one piece.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on December 30, 2006
    Poor Jane; feeling guilty and less for something she didn't do, but was done to her (damn that uncle). I hope they find her soon. More please!
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  • From ANON - Bloodtear on December 30, 2006
    You left it at such a sad part -sniff- Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sansa on December 29, 2006
    Well, a little ciff hanger. Where did she go, I hope they can find her. Uncle Pete just made me hate him even more. Severus needs to hurt him really bad. The Aunt needs some hurting too, for letting it go on. I guess Jane's heritage needs to be brought out before the beating up can begin.

    Can I ask one favor? Could you please put new people's dialouge in a different paragraph? Sometimes it is hard to tell who is talking, because the sentences run together, and sometimes they lack quotation marks.

    Still loving this story. Will be looking forward to updates.

    PS: Maybe I misunderstood, but I don't have any stories posted. If you want to read a good one though, Pittwitch, that also left you a review has a good one posted in your same catagorie called Ancient Madgic.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on December 29, 2006
    An interesting story and a great read. Severus' and Jane's banter is really funny and that wedgie made me lmao.
    I hope that when they get to the farm, something unpleasant will happen to that horrible uncle.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - sansa on December 28, 2006
    Oh, you stopped too soon. I want more! Can you make them give Uncle Pete what he deserves in the next chapter? Maybe just hurt him a little bit. Maybe a lot. Definantly no unicorn calming glow for him. Maybe a good unforgivable. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - sansa on December 27, 2006
    The "assimilator" huh? Things are becoming more clear. Now I get your title. I look forward to the staff reaction to this. I loved her hanging onto Snape's robes. I could just imagine his disgust with that. I loved the unicorns. Please update soon!
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